Reviews For Heartbreaker
You must login (register) to review.
Title: Chapter 22

I can't believe Fire would do something so low down.... Please tell me I am jumping to conclusions and that Fire did not slip Dee something in her drink?

Wow what is going to happen now??

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 02:58 am

Title: Chapter 22

Not gonna lie I feel slighty violated after reading this. if mystery man turns out to be Fire he deserves a beating and if it is not him that person still deservers a beating.   She was clearly drunk and whoever it was should have done the right thing and not taken advantage of the situation and her...but from last chapter and this one we can clearly see Fire is a shady mofo.. 1. for lying to Kwan about having Audra's number... 2. going after a good friends girl when he knows they have something going on... Sorry for the long post this chapter has got me heated about a lot of things but I hope we don't have to wait too long for an update. I love this story can't wait for more.  sorry for any spelling mistakes I tried to catch them all... Pokemon (^o^) (couldn't help it)

Reviewer: jamminmaraca Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 02:47 am

Title: Chapter 22

:(

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 02:06 am

Title: Chapter 20

Uh oh!!! Sparks are about to fly and not in a good way!!!

Thanks for updating :D

Reviewer: zeta1665 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/08/11 04:28 am

Title: Chapter 21

I just wanted to wish you a happy birthday and may you have many many many more, my fellow Leo (mine 7/31). You are one of my favorites writers here on this heaven-sent site. And I just wanted to wish you the best!! DEUCES!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/08/11 06:04 am

Title: Chapter 21

Happy Birthday! I'm so glad you've picked this story up again. How is Kibum's story coming along? I know you decided to scrap it and start again...

Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 11:43 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Boom! Aww i miss Boom's story :( Anyways great update! love the chmistry between Audra and Kwan!

Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 06:42 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Aww I love how his group members are there for him and they gave him good and useful advice and didn't just tell him what he wanted to hear. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 05:59 am

Title: Chapter 21

Loved the update.Kwan needs to make up his mind in what he wants and stop playing with Audra's emotions.Glad the boys got him back on track.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 05:10 am

Title: Chapter 21

Happy birthday!!!!  You gave us an update for your birthday, how magnamous of you.  You rock!!  Kwan, you need help but I am glad that he talked to his boys.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 04:42 am

Title: Chapter 21

Can't wait to see what Kwan is going to do!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 04:19 am

Title: Chapter 21

Audra really has him tied up in knots. Serves him right. Can't wait to see how Audra and Kwan resolve their problems. Good chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 03:47 am

Title: Chapter 21

I hope u have an awesome Birthday!!! I'm really glad u started back writing Kwan's story. I cnt wait for the next update! Also will kibium's story be in the near future?

Reviewer: Jaye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 03:29 am

Title: Chapter 21

LOVING this story but that's nothing new, lol.  I KNEW Fire was just *messing with Kwan and his *messing with Kwan..made Kwan wake up.  I loved the interaction with the rest of the boys!  Missed reading about their friendship. Loved Young's ribbing as he called Kwan "old."  LOL.  Also, I  am glad to see that this story might be going in the direction that I suggested in one of my comments. ;-)  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 02:07 am

Title: Chapter 21

does wan even have a clue as to what he wants. he seems to know subconsciously but he's floundering. fire is hotness!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 01:30 am

Title: Chapter 21

Thank you sooo much for the update... I have been stalking the site waiting for it.

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 01:28 am

Title: Chapter 20

Audrey is playing with fire trying to get Kwan jealous.

Well, that is crazy....lol

Thanks for the update

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/08/11 04:46 am

Title: Chapter 20

Loved the update. Fire is too much but love how he thinks. Hope Kwan and Audra get it together.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/08/11 02:40 am

Title: Chapter 20

Great Update! Hahahah seems Kwan has gotten himself into quite a bind. Also loving the new character! And I love that you casted Tiger JK!



Author's Response:

I LOVEEEEE Tiger JK. I try not to talk about him too much since he IS a married man. But I couldn't resist adding him to the story ^-^

Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/08/11 05:21 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Go Fire! Light a fire under Kwan's ass!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/08/11 07:11 am

Title: Chapter 20

I thought about this series today (not this story but another)...checked this site and just like that...there was an update!  I love Fire..I don't know who he is but I LOVE the way you are writing his fictional character!  Kwan better wake up (did Audra really ask for his number or is Fire just saying that to get Kwan to see what he has?).    

Is Carla getting a man of her own? If so, this is going to be good...

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/08/11 02:57 am

Title: Chapter 20

Damn, Audra you work fast.  Kwan you are a fool!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/08/11 02:12 am

Title: Chapter 20

I have been waiting for new updates from you and you didn't disapoint, I love this story and your series. Thanks for sharing your gift!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/08/11 12:39 am

Title: Chapter 20

I do not believe Kwan messed this up. Damn him... Please let Young and Boom help him out of his stupid phase...

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/08/11 09:59 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Glad you're back. Kwan has some competition. Good. He needs to realize that Audra is a pretty woman and other men are going to want her!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/08/11 09:28 pm

You must login (register) to review.