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Title: Chapter 20

ME LIKE FIRE. ME WANT FIRE. CAN I HAVE FIRE? yum!



Author's Response:

mwahahaha. Nope Fire would be ALLLLLLLLLL MINE. haha

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/08/11 08:40 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Uh oh, here comes the drama!

Can't wait to Carla gets ahold of Kwan.

A new one's on the way-an a**hole that is...

Great job, ready for more please!

Reviewer: zeta1665 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 02:03 am

Title: Chapter 18

Finally caught up! Not sure why I took such a long break from this story but I certainly love it.  It's actually in my top three of your stories so far but I noticed that this isn't a part of the series [i]Saranghaeyo[/i].  Kwan has always been one of my favorites after Kai and G. K. Love him! Seems like he has some struggles with reconciling his feelings from before and feelings now...along with the sheer amount of time that has passed who can blame him...considering his reputation as a "love them and leave them" type or to quote the title of the story, "heartbreaker."  I have to admit I loved the young innocent and in love Kwan...he's so much more cockier now (not a bad thing it's one of the things I love about the older Kwan).  He and Audra have this "hot like fire" relationship...it's funny how they can't control themselves in front of cameras and a room full of staff and audience members, lol. Let's hope they don't began humping in front of the cameras next time.  Not to mention that hot encounter in the closet (no protection? hmm wonder if there is going to be consequences?).

I think they should slow down a bit (but that would be difficult considering they've already reacquainted themselves in such a way)...get to know the other as adults and just really allow this thing to take off naturally...to transition back into that place that they had before...I mean they are not 17 anymore.  You can't just think that things are going to be same as before. I can understand Audra's feelings after he didn't respond to her confession but I can also understand Kwan's conflicting feelings as well.  I'm sure he will come to some realizations. Though it looks like there might be something brewing.  And at some point she will have to go back to the states, right? Can't wait to see how that is going to play out...if she's going to return at all.

Carla...what can I say...she's a firecraker and a thorn in Kwan's side. But she's helped him out a good deal in the past.  Can you post a picture of her? I can imagine how she looks but don't want to get too attached to a certain image and then realize that she's not what I imagined...Kibum. Um he wanted to invite her to Audra's breakfast at Kwan's...is that a hint of something that [i]might[/i] happen? If so, that would be an odd couple, lol...interesting to read but odd couple nonetheless.  Got to love peeps like Carla though...she says whatever, lol.

And finally one special request...can there be a small short update with G. K. and Leila?  They are one of my favorite couples outside of Kai/Noel and now Kwan/Audra.  Maybe something like a "drabble" even though I'd want to read more than 100 words.  Could be something like a "romantic surprise" that one planned for the other...a tale of him going back with her to Kentucky to finally meet her mom...or...just throwing some ideas in case you decide to do the request.



Author's Response:

Hmmm, what to say about this review. It has surprisingly given me a few ideas that I hadn't thought about. Which is one of the reasons that I like this site so much. Carla is definately one of my favorite new characters. She is probably the most like me in personality, but on steroids. Haha The fact that Kibum invited Carla, is just a part of me throwing around some ideas in my head. Ideas that I am becoming more and more fond of. Haha Also I wanted to add a picture of her, but I'm having trouble finding the right person to match the pint sized spitfire that I imagine. And as for the drabble, I honestly have thought of doing one for both Leila and G.K. as well as Kai and Leila. But I haven't made thwe time for it, I will once I get throught more of Kwanzaa and Audra's journey :D

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/07/11 09:27 pm

Title: Chapter 6

OMG!  I'm MAD LATE...but am just now catching up with this story (lost interest/didn't read past chapter 2 or 3).  Just got done reading this (Chapter 6) and THEY really brought the sexy to that photoshoot...in FRONT of everyone no less. LOVE IT.  I plan to finish all the updated chapters VERY SOON.  Good work.

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/07/11 03:45 am

Title: Chapter 18

Damn Kwan, looks like you messed up! But don't say the words if you don't mean them!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/11 06:46 am

Title: Chapter 17

Aw, man! We have to wait for his reaction!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/11 06:34 am

Title: Chapter 18

Dee was letting Kwan know how upset she was with him but his move was kinda stupid. He should have said something. I can't even really be upset with Carla either cause he was an idoit. Yeah, he pulled this bad weekend out on himself by not responding.

Reviewer: AJ Taylor Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/07/11 01:30 am

Title: Chapter 18

I am mad at Kwan... what is going on with him??

I do hope you are able to update again soon!!

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/06/11 06:00 am

Title: Chapter 18

Kwan what are you doing are you trying to ruin your second chance you need to talk to Boom first because honestly he gives the best advice and then make Dee listen to you and exxplain what's going on in you r head because right now she thinks that your playing games with her

Reviewer: Tiera Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/06/11 12:42 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Whoot, Whoot!! SS is back! Girl you can't go disappearing on us like that.

I've always wondered if you would truly touch on the whole racial aspect of a popular kpop group dating black women in such an ethnocentric country like Korea. From what I've seen with kpop, those fans can get obsessive and nuts when it comes to their kpop idols. Then to add in Kwan making out with Audra on stage in full view of thousands, this ought to be interesting.

Reviewer: Shea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/06/11 03:27 am

Title: Chapter 18

Kwan needs to get his act together before Carla kills him.  Audra should have talked to him, but I understand her being hurt and needing time to think about it.  I hope that they are able to talk soon.  

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/06/11 04:35 pm

Title: Chapter 18

whoop! thanks for updating. :) But i can totally see how Kwan's not in love with her.

Actually, if they don't end up together I would be okay with that. Only because I can

kinda see that happening and it'll defintitely add a twist in the series. That and I love

stuff like that. haha. Hope you continue soon. :D

Reviewer: Sasha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/06/11 07:49 am

Title: Chapter 18

Okay so Kwan isn't sure he loves her so its good he didn't just say it to make her feel better when he really wasn't sure. But he should have atleast TRIED to express to her how he felt. I wonder whats gonna happen now and why Jinyung wants to see him so badly. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/06/11 05:39 am

Title: Chapter 18

Audra said that she loved him which was a big step for her Kwan with his dumb self didn't say a word.  I wonder what does Jinyung want to talk to him about?  Did Audra drop out of the show or something?  I will be on pins and needles until the next update.  I love this story!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/06/11 04:58 am

Title: Chapter 18

Feel for Kwan but he should have said something so she could know where she stood. Now she feels he doesn't care. Hope they can work it out.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/06/11 04:01 am

Title: Chapter 18

It is about to be more than Kwan and Audra's relationship drama..... Let us not forget they are in South Korea and the love birds were making out with all kinds of skinship on stage. lol  I am so glad you are back!!!!!  ^_^

Reviewer: Bee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/06/11 04:01 am

Title: Character Pics

This is my first time reading our stories now I'm hooked.  I've gone back and I'm half way through Heartbeat (which I'm loving by the way) BUT and I mean and big BUT!!! There seems to be a previous story which I cant find, you make reference to a story called k-popped and I presume its Kai story.  I know I'm late to the party but would you really deprieve us late comers like that? Do you think its fair? Does the punishment fit the crime? I'm just saying!!

Is there ANYWAY you can have mercy on readers like me and repost k-popped? Its not my fault I missed out (well it is but anything to help my cause).

PLEASE? I would start a petition but only know a few people which puts me at a disadvantage. lol (lying sooo much here but I'm trying for the sympathy vote. is it working?)



Author's Response:

Well welcome to the saranhaeyo series! As for K-popped there is a complete story for Kai and Noel. However, it is getting published and I had to take it down for re-editing a submission to the publishing company. You do sound prettttyyyyy sad. Haha and I may think of re-posting a couple of chapters just for promotional purposes I dont't know if that would just be torture. Lol Butttt since you're story is so sadddd...I may consider putting it back up in its entirety for a little while. But I'll think about that one. Haha since it won't be out until next year and that would be a looonnngggg wait. Lol Hmmm...decisions...decisions! Thanks for the review by the way!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/06/11 09:13 am

Title: Chapter 13

You don't know how much I am happy that you updated. I love all 3 chapters, good job.

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/06/11 08:29 am

Title: Chapter 5

You know what I love about your stories other than everything? I always find them when they are like 20 chapters deep which means I can just sit back, read, and enjoy and not get antsy for updates until the end.                                                                                                                                      But when I reach the end...it is on.  Love it!           

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Woot woot! I'm happy you enjoyed! haha

I feel the smae way about yours madame! haha I wait until they build up and then go on a reading spree

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/06/11 12:16 am

Title: Chapter 15

Loved the prom flashback!!

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 04:16 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Loved the update. More please.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 06:05 am

Title: Chapter 16

They better be glad all he did was kiss her on stage! LOL

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 05:42 am

Title: Chapter 15

I love Kwan and Carla freindship! 

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 05:33 am

Title: Character Pics

Finally I mean come on I've been waiting for a loong time for this

Reviewer: Zee Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 04:56 am

Title: Chapter 15

I love Kwan and  Carla they are two funny!! They have love hate relationship, they love to hate on each other.  This is was toofunny!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 01:55 am

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