Kwan, you are in troubke!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/01/11 03:36 am
Kwan's goona make her regret what she said!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 31/01/11 03:09 am
Just reading this story... just great.
Your writing is wonderful!
Wow! They are funny..
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/01/11 02:51 am
awesomeness!! so glad you finally updated! im glad to hear that you'll at least remake the kibum story, i was getting so sad since it hasnt been updated in so long..
Reviewer: melissa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/01/11 02:34 am
Audra needs to stop tripping so much. Hopefully her and Kwan will be alright. I really love Breathe, but I have to be honest. I hate how Rochelle changed her looks. I really thought she was different at first with her nerdy look and shy personality. She was the complete opposite of Kibum, which made them a cute couple. However, from the point of her makeover I began to lose some interest in the story. I do not think you should scrap Rochelle, just turn her back to her original nerdy ans shy self. Otherwise, I feel like she is too much like some of the other female characters in the story. I like Kwan in Breathe, and I think he is okay. He lost some of his energy, but I still love him. Thank you for the update!
Reviewer: Donyale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/01/11 01:40 am
first i love this update please dont keep us waiting for more ;)
and second i love Kibum's story too i think Rochelle tones him down yet livens him up so I think she's his match.
Reviewer: omgsums Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/01/11 12:45 am
Good, of course. Yes, the Kibum story was kinda dragging along.
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 11:59 pm
Aww now, Audra...why are you MAD?..you told Kwan to act like he did before you came back...what do you expect?
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 11:48 pm
Thanks for the update on breathe and OMG this story is so much more sexier!!!!!! these two are HOT!!!! Thanks for these updates.
Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 10:47 pm
Awesome chapters!! Glad Audra got a little taste of how Kwan felt. I hope she falls through with what she was going to say.Kwan and Audra are smoking hot together.
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 10:27 pm
That update was worth the wait.
Audra needs to get herself together and stop trying to push Kwan away. She needs to tell him how she feels soon. I hope she is on birth control because that love scene was to hot to not have planted Kwan's seed.
As for Kibum please don't Scracth Rochelle because I like her but I do agree maybe a revamp with Kibum character is in order to make the story flow the way you want.
Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 08:17 pm
Whew goodness, that update was worth the wait, wow!!!
You should let your keyboard do the talking more often, lol!
Can't wait to see what it has to say next..
Thank you!
Reviewer: zeta1665 Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 07:14 pm
WOW, what an amazing update! Super sexy! I love Kwan and Dee! I hope Dee confesses her feelings soon!! :D Thank you for the awesome chapters!!!
Reviewer: Evrok9807 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 05:33 pm
ohhhh i loved the updates and about Kibum i dont think you should get rid of Rochelle because they are perfect for ech other but revamping the story might be a good idea
Reviewer: Tiera Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 04:05 pm
SS, you made my day with this update.
Maybe now Audra will learn a lesson about playing games. They always end up biting you in the azz.
That last scene was HAWT!! Kwan laid it on her. I hope ole girl is on the pill or we could have a cutie-pie Baby Kwan in the works. I guess now they won't have problems with the chemistry for the adult version of the video shoot. (wiggling the eyebrows)
Oh and about Kibum's story...I liked Rochelle, but you do what you do best. I know that I'll still read it regardless of your decision.
Reviewer: Shea Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 04:04 pm
lol, did whoever knocked, let them finish first or was it just a coincidence they didn't interrupt the moment?
as for kibum's story don't scratch rochelle, i liked her quite a bit. but if you feel that's what you need to do...then go on. but i did like rochelle's down to earth and kinda shy personality.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 03:41 pm
You should totally keep the concept of Rochelle. Cause I love the ideal that she wears big glasses, just like me. And that she's a bit on the shy side. And that she can feed Kibum's taste buds.
So I'm crossing my finger that u revamp. And if not, I'll still be reading :-) Cause you're stories are AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 01:46 pm
Lol he just called her a shit starter and then watched her do it to him lol. I like Carla. Great story so far and i cant wait for some updates
Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]Date: 29/01/11 05:03 am
Ooo I wonder if the moment is innocent on both of their parts and Kwans just having a moment of jealousy or if the man really is up to something. Either way I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Kiah Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 13/01/11 05:29 am
omg, she is a definite fire starter!!!!!! oh audra. lol
The I need a girl dance moves fit them perfectly!!!!!!! and I love the way kwan (t.o.p.) dances. i always have, he's soooooo pimp with it. esp in the knock out vid! lol
i was waiting for one of the women to bring up the numerous black women being a trend thing in this series. lol i can't even believe she sed that tho. i mean they've known each other the longest, she shud know him better.
i loved this update!!! soooo excited for more!!! :D
Reviewer: Interracial4Prez Signed [Report This]Date: 12/01/11 10:56 pm
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DAMN U, NO PARKING ZONES!!!!!!!!!!!1 DAMN U!!!!!!!!!
omg!!!!! “Because I’m not 17 anymore, and I don’t have to worry about your parents.” When she opened her voice to ask what he meant, he continued, “Which means I can and WILL ask James to stop the car, and get out. And I WILL proceed to then rip your clothes off. So unless you want to be naked in the backseat of this car…you WILL stay over there.”
i nearly died!!! PLEASE TAKE ME IN THE BACK OF THE CAR!!!!! PLEASE!!!!! OMG! THIS WAS JUST TOO MUCH FOR ME!! lol i loved it sooooo much!!!!
Reviewer: Interracial4Prez Signed [Report This]Date: 12/01/11 10:37 pm
OMG HIGH CUT PHOTOS!!! YES!!!! T.O.P JUST TAKE ME AWAY!!!!!!
AUDRA IS JUST TOO MUCH!!!!!1 I LOVE THAT SHE GETS HIM MAD SOOOO EASILY AND THEN CAN TURN HIS ANGER OFF JUST JUST AS EASY. LOL
GOING ON TO 9!!!
Reviewer: Interracial4Prez Signed [Report This]Date: 12/01/11 10:25 pm
I was just coming to say Thank You for the last two chapters and found this one too. You go girl!
I love that she had to differentiate between her Soup, and the man he is now. He is Kwan and he handles his business..Can James get a girl? He is so good to them all.
I knew there would be another man to cause trouble, thought it would be Aaron, but whoever he is Kwan will set him straight and Audra too.
Keep it coming!!!
Date: 12/01/11 07:20 pm
I love this story! I can't wait for the next update. I hope Kwan doesn't embarrass himself, or Audra, but I do want him to make some "things" clear! Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: evrok9807 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/01/11 05:55 pm