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Title: Chapter 10

Kwan's ready to step to the fool who's touching his woman!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 05:34 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Wonderful updates. This story is moving along very  nicely. Now Kwan better get over there and get his woman. Carla is to much trying to start stuff.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 03:18 pm

Title: Chapter 10

lol, carla is starting some mess. 

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 10:28 am

Title: Chapter 10

I am so glad that Kwan and Audra had that heart to heart.  For a minute there I thought Audra was about to do something stupid.  I love Kwan!!!  That dancer should have been smacked, heifers need to stay away from my man err,  mean Audra's man Kwan.  Thank you so much for this last chapter.  You have made my night.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 08:50 am

Title: Chapter 10

Hmmm...i do not trust Carla...at all! Love Kwan! His character is so adorable. I dont really know how i feel about Audra...but that could be because she's paired with my bias lol. But i do love their chemistry! Also, When are you gonna finish/ or start back to Kibum's story? I miss Kibum and Rochelle! Rochelle has been may favorite female character thus far (except for maybe Leila, I loved Leila).

Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 08:34 am

Title: Chapter 10

Another update, wow!  I always love everyone's reaction when they see the guys' girlfriends.  It would seem that Carla is still a mess starter after all.  I like this chapter a lot; it was very calming and funny.  Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: Donyale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 08:05 am

Title: Chapter 9

Loved the update.They sure getting hot and heavy.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 07:29 am

Title: Chapter 9

Kwan is going to have to handle that, Audra is playing with fire.  I can't wait for her to get burned, bring on the hot but naked sex, please!!!  Most excellent Ihave truly missed this story.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 07:28 am

Title: Chapter 9

oh, my those two mean business don't they?!! AWESOME update Seoul!!!

Reviewer: DivaJess Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 06:38 am

Title: Chapter 9

Lmao I can totally imagine the messed up hair can't wait to read what goes down in the next update

Reviewer: gr2112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 04:12 am

Title: Chapter 9

*Sigh* Kwan is fire. ugh. update by tomorrow puhleeze. lol

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 04:11 am

Title: Chapter 9

OMG I THOUGHT I REALLY WANTED YOU TO FINISH KIBUM STORY FIRST BUT I AM LOVING KWAN AND AUDRA'S STORY!!!! THEY ARE SO DAMN HOT!!! DAYUM THESE MENS YOU THINK OF MAKES ME WANT ONE FOR MYSELF LOL

Reviewer: jinx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 03:38 am

Title: Chapter 9

They are going to be great together, sexually that is!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 03:03 am

Title: Chapter 8

They're such a cute couple!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 02:45 am

Title: Character Pics

Whatever you end up doing with Boom, will most likely still be awesome

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 02:32 am

Title: Chapter 9

good looking out bc i would have missed the previous chapter. these two are smoking' and hilarious at the same time. update again soon!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 01:58 am

Title: Chapter 9

Nice, very nice.  I cannot believe you gave us two chapters.  I thought I was seeing things.  Thank you so much.  These chapters were good.  Kwan and Audra are a trip.  I am studying Korean, so this story is helping me a bit.  It is liuke killing two birds with one stone.  Anyway,  I was disappointed with GD&TOP's songs and videos, especially the videos.  But hey I cannot like everything.  I am looking forward to when Big Bang comes out with their album though. 

Author's Response: Really? I loved the album...the videos were pretty okay...I like that they have more foreigners in the videos...even if there aren't any chocolate ladies. haha

Reviewer: Donyale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 01:36 am

Title: Character Pics

I LOVE KWAN'S STORY!

BUT I MISS BOOM. SO WHEN U GONNA UPDATE BOOM'S STORY? LIKE PRETTY PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I started another update of his story a while ago...but I never got around to finishing it. I am somewhat in an awkward place right now with Kibum's story to be honest. Part of me wants to just cast it all out and start from scratch...and another part wants to just leave it as is...

That's the main reason I haven't updated his story. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 01:12 am

Title: Chapter 7

Love! Love! Love!

Reviewer: Libri Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/11 04:33 am

Title: Chapter 7

That was pretty short but enjoyable! so tell me how is the album I can't believe he died his hair white lol 

Author's Response: The album is pretty amazing, if I do say so myself. Tru I'm biased, but the styles of song vary so much that it keeps you interested.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/11 04:28 am

Title: Chapter 7

Loved the update. Love the way Dee took control. Kwan is the MAN though! Yay!!:)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 01:47 am

Title: Chapter 7

Aww, aren't they cute and hot together! Good job!!!!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 09:16 pm

Title: Chapter 7

God can bring people together when man tries to separate them.... love does not see color, countries, and or any differents. Love just knows where it came from, is and will be, after others have faded away... Just my crazy minds words

Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 04:39 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Seoul, I love you.  I do...like cooked food to a starving man.  However, you are THEE WORST when it comes to updating.  You give me these deadlines, these promises...

You get my hopes up, then POW, with the force of a fly swatter, you kill my dreams.

You don't understand the kind of tears I cry...

But...

When you do update you give me MAGIC!!!  I am LOVING Soup and Dee!  LOVING!  I could totally see them heating up the screen with their kiss.  LOL!  You can tell that while they may have been young, their love was very real.  Makes me think of a song, Right Thing at the Wrong Time.

But my boos are getting back on track so all is well in my world...

And not for nothing, I am liking Carla.  I am.  How she knew Kwan was Kwan before Audra and then gave her a thumbs up when she the two of them alone in the room...Totally something I would do!  LOL!

I can't wait for the next update!  I am uber excited that our main couple is getting back on track.  I'm curious as to what type of drama you have lined up for them, (looks like it might be the old fashion kind of The Rents) but PLEASE for the love of ALL that is HOLY, don't toy with my emotions anymore with the promise of updates only to leave me emotionally crushed.

My heart just can't take it...



Author's Response:

I didn't mean to cause you so much pain! haha I do apologize, fate hates me when it comes to updating something always comes up and it stops me! And for that I'm sorry. I'll try not to make you cry anymore. ^^

 

And I actually like Carla too, she was a character that came out of nowhere, and she has a lot bigger of a role in this story than I originally anticipated. 

 

 

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 01:28 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Glad they got that out of the way!  Her father was wrong for that remark!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 08:05 am

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