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Title: Chapter 26

First, I want to how awesome you are for giving us two chapters.  Audra you are living on barrowed time in your relationship with Kwan.  He is not going to be happy with and he would be justified.  I am so disappointed in you Audra, I want you to suffer for a bit.  Then I want you women up and find a way to get out of your contract with that morally unjust recording company.  That company does about you and will stab in you back, you would deserve it.  I so love this story!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/09/11 02:28 am

Title: Chapter 27

I am so mad with both Audra and Kwan!!!! Why can't they get there shit together?!!! They are really pissing me off!!!!!

Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28/09/11 02:15 am

Title: Chapter 25

Hey, great stories! I'm literally addicted. I heard thet you had another story called K-popped and i wanted to know where it was posted so that i could read it..



Author's Response:

Yeah! K-Popped is Kai and Noel's story!

I took it down from here so that I could edit for publishing...

Reviewer: A` Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/09/11 06:20 pm

Title: Chapter 25

OMG! Another cliify? Gah, girl, you kill me with those. Thanks for the update, much appreciated! Dun Dun DUNNNNNN........ I cannot wait to see what happens next! Till next time, <3 D&L

Reviewer: DarkandLovely Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/09/11 02:09 am

Title: Chapter 25

Why would Audra not tell Kwan that were planning on ditching Kwan?  He is going to be so hurt and won't give that chance to explain herself.  That was so bogus, my first response is for Kwan to dump her.  That behavior is so unbecoming of her.  It ain't cool to treat people that you care about like they don't matter.  This will be a big mess!!  Audra you are on my shit list.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/09/11 02:08 am

Title: Chapter 25

well now, and here i thought that kwan would be the one to really hurt audra and it's the other way around. tsk tsk 

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/09/11 02:01 am

Title: Chapter 24

That's not good that Audra's label changed their mind. How is she going to tell Kwan? Nice chapter.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/09/11 01:13 am

Title: Chapter 23

I found myself chuckling while reading this chapter. Fire is not shy about expressing himself. Audra and Kwan should just make up and have great sex! Waiting for more!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/09/11 05:39 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Loved the update. Glad there was some clarification and nothing happened. Fire seems to be a jokester!! He broke the tension to a sticky situation.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/11 07:55 am

Title: Chapter 23

I love this story but I miss Boom and Rochelle

Reviewer: Nyesha Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/09/11 05:57 am

Title: Chapter 23

Thank you Jesus!!! I was scared that it was Fire beside Audry. WHEW! Great update.

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/11 01:27 am

Title: Chapter 23

I am so glad that arm belonged to Kwan, you scared me there for a minute.  I can now respect Fire again, woo!! I am also happy that Fire called Kwan, I am glad that he had some sense.  Fire is funny, I like him again .  Great update, thank you.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/09/11 01:12 am

Title: Chapter 23

Fire needs a woman like Carla... if and only if he doesnt end up being such a creep.

I am soo glad you posted this update because I was HOT with Fire.. thinking he had done Dee wrong.

Now Kwan needs to get his behind together!!

Grreat update!

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/11 12:37 am

Title: Chapter 22

It appears Fire was a foe...she should have not been drinking with him.  Oh dear what a mess.  Fire took advantage of her.

What will they do now?

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 02:06 pm

Title: Chapter 22

OH MY GOSH

NO YOU DID NOT.

U DID NOT.

I LOVE ME SOME TIGER JK AND TOP IS MY BIAS BUT NO THE HELL YOU DID NOT!

I'M MAD AT YOU!  THIS BETTER BE SOME REAL FEELING DREAM OR SOME SORT OF HALLUCINATION... DON'T YOU DARE LOL!

 

Reviewer: CEE Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/11 05:07 am

Title: Chapter 22

OMGGG!! Wow, I just got hit by a bus! But, and amazing, crazy bus!!

Reviewer: Jay1113 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/11 01:43 am

Title: Chapter 22

After reading this I have to say that I am so pissed. I think Fire is a shady mofo and i think he set this up from the jump. He "persuaded" her to drink the alcohol and then she may or may not have found herself in his bed. I don't think that trip was done with the upmost intentions. I think Fire has set this up. Audra, out of everyone on this situation, knows that she wants Kwan and for her to sleep with Fire, is going to break his heart. I can't wait to see how this comes out and what is going to happen.

Reviewer: Alixermixer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 06:53 pm

Title: Chapter 22

yikes! what did she do? and wth is fire up to?

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 11:16 am

Title: Chapter 22

Please don't leave us hanging!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 06:08 am

Title: Chapter 22

OOOHHHHH I could KILL YOU!!! LOL  Drama Drama DRAMA!!!!! Kwan is gonna be crushed and Fire is gonna get his ass kicked. lol Great update!! Waiting for more. :) 

Reviewer: Bee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 04:41 am

Title: Chapter 22

DAGNIT! I deleted my reveiw by accident...OMG!!! Let that be KWAN in that bed and not FIRE!!!  I hope that there wasn't any foul play going on...OHWEE!! I can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 04:28 am

Title: Chapter 22

Did Audra do the do with Fire?  OMG, that will so hurt Kwan, when he finds out.  We know that he will.  I so love this story, this is one of my favorites.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 04:24 am

Title: Chapter 22

Awh hell noo, say it aint so!!! I hope he didn't use a date rape drug. If Fire did that, I would be sick!! But why would Kwan do something like that and think it was ok???!! Not a very nice thing to do.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 03:43 am

Title: Character Pics

Oh No, so this Fire man has literally raped Audra!!! Oh, this certainly does not bode well for Audra. Audra should have listened to that silent warning bell about Fire. I am sad and mad by this turn of events. Soup is gonna be so hurt. I really feel bad for Audra.

Reviewer: LoveDrama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 03:43 am

Title: Character Pics

Please don't tell me Fire got her drunk and took advantage of her.. Please let that be Kwan next to her cause if it's not there will be hell to pay..

 

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 03:22 am

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