This is so good, very well written. I know it's been a while since an update but maybe their's still hope? *looks longingly into the distance*...if not, this was awesome.Reviewer: crayola10 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/09/14 11:36 pm
i love the story, i had forgotten it thank you for the update really enjoyed it
You're welcome! It makes me happy that you enjoyed it. :) Thank you so much. :)Reviewer: vanessa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/11 09:57 pm
Ohhhh my gosh you're such a talent at writing...I'm in love with this story already! Dmitri's such an asshole, but I imagine he's a pretty attractive young man I have a feeling he's gonna try something with Abby pretty soon and she may just fall for it...just my little prediction. I love Lee's character. I just love him. He's so mysterious (sexy lol) and troubled and I hope Abby fixes him soon lol.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEAAAASE.....post more asap.
Thank you so so much. I really mean it. Dmitri is the kind of pompous ass that I love to write about. I'll do my best to make this story a good one! Again,thank you. :)Reviewer: SkyQueen24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 06:29 pm
Nooooooo.....!!!!! Nothing like finishing the chapter and finding no next button!
Oh but Bravo!!! Your characters reel me in!!! Margaret is like that irritating hoeey cousin you hate to love! Benjamin is the stoic older brother, Abby is the champion of lost souls and Lee, well Lee he is Lee!!!!
I really want to see how the story goes! I hope Vanderbilt breaks a finger or two!
Yahoo! It's great to know I can build on a character. This is why I need feedback so I can learn and grow. Thank you so much. :)Reviewer: BurntSienna Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 12:26 pm
I completely forgot about this story until I saw the email. I needed this after a day of exams, thank you.
I have a laundry list of excuses why this story take 7 freaking months to update. All I will say is that I'm sorry but I'm glad you read it. :) Thank you. Thank you.Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 05:06 am
"The infirmary completely clashed with the architectural theme of Ravendale Catholic." That is my favorite sentence from this chapter. It's such a small detail, but it adds so much to the story. I went to public school and private school, but I came home every day. I've always been fascinated with gendered boarding schools, and you're able to give a clear picture of this one, what with the monsoon weather, the suites for dorms, the statue of Ares, etc. Thanks for a great read, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Thank you so much for the review. In the past I've been told that I put too much detail into my stories. So I'm trying to pull back the reigns and I'm glad to see some success coming out of it. This week is final exams so the next chapter should follow soon. Thank you! XDReviewer: curiouslyamused Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/11 05:26 am
Thanks for the update . Can't wait for more.
Thank you so much for reading.Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 05:29 pm
been missing this story so glad to see you and THA back! thanks for the update, look forward to more and Lee!
I can't allow THA to die without a conclusion. Thank you for reading/reviewing.Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 02:35 pm
So I usual don't read story that are about younger men with a little older woman. But it is good I must say. Not really my thing but has good diction.
I understand that the pairing is a bit taboo but thank you for reading nevertheless. I write for feedback. :)Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 12:18 am
The search continue to see what is wrong with this boy. I don't even care if this is not a romance, I just want to know his problem. And hope that teacher gets bitch slapped.
I assure you it is a romance. I just want it to trickle before the flood comes in. Which won't be too long from now. :)Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/11 10:21 pm
Is Abby starting to get feeling for her charge? How does Lee feel about Abby? Margret is a hot mess, what is trying to say about Benjamin? Has she already seduced Ben? I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Wah! So many questions I can't answer! I just don't want to spoil anything but what I can say is that Margaret has not seduced Ben.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/11 08:05 pm
Great story, Abby need to knock the shit out of Lee. Pushing a woman into the water fountain is not cool.
Every woman has her day... *wink,wink*Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/11 08:19 am
Omg yay! I was so excited to see this story with an update :) even if I can't find the inspiration to update my own...thismad eme suuupppeeerrr excited. Jung Su is such a hottay! Haha total rebel without a cause kind of guy. Gotta love it! Keep up the good work.
Gahmsahahmnida! I'm really working to make Jung Su an alluring character. But yeah I totally agree,you need to update missy!! XDReviewer: SeoulSinger Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/11 07:28 am
Oh my that was just perfect. The way she handled him I mean. It was just what he needed, and it sounds as though they are going to be good for each other as they go through this year. Seems like its going to be fun.
That Margaret is a trip and I look foward to lots of fun with her too.Reviewer: Acorn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/04/11 06:48 am
A Fic with Kim Jae Wook, I like! This is so well written, I am already engrossed with each character. I find Margaret's character very comedic, It't funny how she doesn't get the clue that Benjamin is not interested. Jung su is too much, I can't wait to see how his relationship with Abby turns out. You don't know how much I am anticipating your next chapter!
Ah! You're review made me excited. I'm glad I'm not the only one who loves Kim Jae Wook or let alone knows who he is. I'll do my best to update quickly.Reviewer: uofantastic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 05:43 am
That Lee Jung Su is a mess. I really like him and Abby. I hope you update soon.Great job.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the characters. I'll try to update as soon as possible. Thank you!
Date: 08/04/11 05:28 pm
Oh no I hope your back is okay *hugs*
But OMG ...
I just saw your profile,He is fione and Korean *faints*
That was pretty much my response when I saw him in the drama Bad Guy. Thank you for the review!Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 05:03 am
Whoa! You used Kim Jae Wook! I love him! Anyway, I will be back to read and review this later
Author's Response: Alluring characters deserve alluring cast pictures. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
Date: 07/04/11 10:20 pm
I love who you picked Lee, he is sexy!!! I am really likin g this story. But how old is Abigail again? Lee is just acting, there is nothing wrong with psychologically. I am looking forward to reading more!
I'm glad to see you like him. Abigail is about 26 years old. - )I(Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 09:21 pm
Lee seems to have a chronic case of noona love...the best kind!
Author's Response: Noona love is indeed the best kind of love. Age taboos are so wicked alluring. Thank you so much for reviewing.
Date: 07/04/11 07:15 pm
Is that Kim Jae Wook? Yay! Have you seen this?: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NuCrw8Lu_oE&feature=player_embedded
Anyway, onto constructive criticism: I really enjoyed this first chapter, despite the few spelling errors. You were able to create an atmosphere of elitism and privelege very quickly, and you established the tone of the two main characters' relationship very well. There's an imbalance in their relationship, in that he's younger than her, is a cheeky bastard, and has the ability to make her feel uncomfortable, but it's evened out because your protagonistis a smart, serious girl, who (so far) doesn't take any bullshit. I like her. And I really like him. Can't wait for the next few chapters, and wish you luck with finishing them!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I knew about Walrus I just never got around to watching a MV. Now I'm glad I did. It's inspiring really. Reviewer: curiouslyamused Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 05:52 pm