Wow! I can't believe how I almost allowed this story to pass. The sequal will be amazing, I'm sure, please post it soon.
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/02/11 02:33 pm
I am thoroughly convinced that Caleb must have done something to addle Carla's brain because the only thing that seems crazy to me is Carla is turning down all of Jason/Thorsten's hottness, LOL. You had me hanging on by the seat of my pants through these last few chapters, but it was definitely worth it. Thanks for a fantastic and truly enjoyable read. I can't wait for that sequel!
Reviewer: Mia Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 16/02/11 06:38 am
carla's an ass! dude, get that sequel up, cuz she is losing points hardcore. she ain't losin' shit. she could visit Lisa and chill out and be a great musician for eternity with a hot-ass husband that lays that shit down?! stupid. the broad is STUPID!!
i'm bugging. i know damn well i'd be shitting myself if that was to really pop up in my life.
but i still need that sequel up ASAP. thanks.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 16/02/11 05:04 am
These "people" are old! LOL! A life saved, whew!
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: 16/02/11 02:12 am
Sorry, didn't review the "new" previous chapters I read, so ingrosed in the story. Thanks for the history, how sad to lose the love of your life.
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: 16/02/11 01:48 am
So I owe you some reviews because I've read everything you've posted (cough) so post more (cough) and I'm not even reviewing in order but I just had to tell you.
I love your dialogue. I love the banter between Carla and Lisa ("love box!"). It just flows so easily and I know how hard good dialogue can be.
Very nicely done, Stalkee.
Now get to posting.
Signed,
Your #1 Stalker
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 15/02/11 06:29 am
Hmm, they are crazy! Not to mention scary.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 14/02/11 07:25 am
dude, Mathias/Isaac is nuts, but . . . understandably so? sorta? nah, he's just off the rocker. smh. i'm looking forward to seeing Carla and Jason reuniting. hope he gets there in time before her lunch date with Isaac. that has potential to be dumb ugly.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 14/02/11 05:45 am
This is a great story, you keep us right on the edge.. Carla is definately interested. Kyle knows that Jason is interested in Carla, but Jason is holding back, not even letting her touch him. My guess is that he doesn't want his scent on her, in fear that Isaac will know that he's there. How long can this go on, it's killing us. lol AS far as Mr. Weissman, is he an elder?? Hmmm, inquring minds want to know, by the way how about Lisa and Kyle? Is she his match? I uess i have to stay tuned....:)
Reviewer: VAL1 Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/02/11 08:32 pm
WHAT?! where is he going?!
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 12/02/11 01:56 am
I will say, I didn't want to read this stroy (werewolf thing), but I am so glad I changed my mind. It's really, really good and I'm in now, my curiosity is piqued.
You tell very good stories, that is why I changed my mind.
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: 11/02/11 10:58 pm
I need more
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/02/11 06:31 am
Loving the story so far and her interaction with the brothers.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 11/02/11 05:49 am
So I am not pressuring you (yet) but you have to write a story for Kyle...and Tobias. No pressure. I love that I am picking up all this stuff I didn't notice before. They way they pretend to react like humans like, nice little detail there Miss Val. As always I cannot wait for more...and I don't have to. Yay!!!!
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 11/02/11 02:58 am
Love this story!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/02/11 09:21 pm
I am so happy you are back, I was literally devastated when you pulled your story, hope you are well rested and cannot wait for future updates...
Reviewer: ToriLu Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/02/11 05:00 pm
Noooo, not Isaac ,he's up to no good. Those nightmares she was having with someone sucking her breathe out was scary.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/11 01:29 am
I have to say, Jason beneath the tree with the wolf pup on his lap is one of my favorite images from this story.
Evil Miranda Adler!
That is all.
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 09/02/11 05:51 am
I always liked this story, and I'm happy to see it again. Jason is really hot.
Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]Date: 08/02/11 06:14 pm
Gosh I love them, they're so hot and sweet together...you know I adore this story (I have the police report to prove it).
Now, let's talk schedule. The three updates a day work for me so keep at it! It's tomorrow in England, isn't it?
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/02/11 03:22 am
I was all giggly and giddy this chapter. Their first meeting! Yay! And I noticed you retitled your chapters. I like.
I told you I stalked this story.
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 08/02/11 03:03 am
So of course I had to youtube Maple Leaf Rag only to find out I know the song but never knew the name of it. Yay Val for being edumacational!
You know, this is the first time I read this and felt a trace of empathy for, um, so-and-so's, loss...he still crazy but I felt a twinge of sadness. Just a twinge.
Onward!
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 08/02/11 02:51 am
ok there is a good wolf and a bad wolf
Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/02/11 02:40 am
Great update. Jason is so slick but I think they're feeling each other.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 08/02/11 02:17 am