Pretty good story. Completely Wilhelmina all the way.
Author's Response: Thanks red tiger!
Date: 05/11/08 03:59 am
PHENOMENAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVED this. The tension, the tone, the voice. Perfectly spot on. Wonderful
Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you liked the fic. :-) Reviewer: seraphcelene Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/10/08 09:37 am
Wow alot of rules a fucking but when you get what you wanted lol. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading wwefan! Glad you enjoyed it. Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/09/08 11:40 pm
Okay.. that was so good, yet so freaking twisted. What are you on... 
Seriously, this story was so damn awesome.. You had me laughing from start to finish...
The dialogue and banter was witty, the pace was flawless and the concept was top notch.
You never cease to amazing me ma. Keep up the good work…
Ok I'm off to steal Wilhelmina rule of mind-fucking - twisted I tell ya.. But I loved them all..
Author's Response: Thanks for reading zeta! So glad you liked it. Reviewer: zeta Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/08/08 01:54 am
Very, Very nice. I wish this story were an actual episode. I always enjoy it when Wilhelmina gets her way.
Author's Response: Hey Ashauna, thanks for reading. I have to admit, I've been waiting for something like this for a while. I think those actors have so much chemistry but I don't think I'd want it to be straight romance but something like this. I think it was be funny as hell. Thanks for the review. Reviewer: Ashauna77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/08/08 04:42 am
You had all the characters down to a t. While I was reading, I was able to picture it character as the story went along.
I love Willie and I can see her doing everything you wrote. Poor Daniel!!
Author's Response: Thanks Sweet Pea. I was really worried about getting it right so I'm so happy so your comment. I love Willie too, and thought this was so her style. Thanks for reading and the review. Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/08/08 05:26 pm
Brilliant! It was like I was watching the show only on cable. LOL
Author's Response: Thanks lovemboth! Best compliment ever. Thanks for the review and the stars!
[Report This]Date: 25/08/08 03:48 am
Awesome..abso-freaking-lutely brillant. I don't know if I can be that ruthless, but a girl must keep those rules handy just in case
poor Daniel never stood a chance.
when I get me some Prada's...I'm going to have me a Prada day!.
Author's Response: Ah Pash! Thanks so much! I loved writing those rules, I thought they fit her perfectly. And I always picture Daniel as about three stpes behinde Wilhelmina at all times. I think we all need a Prada day. Thanks for the review and the stars! Reviewer: pashmina Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 25/08/08 03:29 am
Ugly Betty is one of my favorite tv shows, am glad you wrote about it.
I really thought Danny and Willie were going to get it on but it looks like Willie the witch just wanted to taunt poor little clueless Daniel.
Author's Response: Hey dyhanna! Ugly Betty is one of my favs too. Thought it was time a fic was added to the archive. And you're def right, Wilie lives to taunt and torment. Thanks for the review! Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/08/08 09:06 pm
damn that was awesome i wish it was more chapters but it was great............
Author's Response: Hey hershey! Thanks for reading and the review. Yep this is a one shotter, but I may try to revisit in the future.
[Report This]Date: 24/08/08 11:43 am
This was hilarious Black! You really nailed all the characters and I heard Willie speaking as I read. I loved this line:
"Just get it waxed before Paula Grey shows up. She's a lipstick lesbian and has a deep distrust for anything remotely transgender. Wouldn't want her thinking we've got a bunch of chicks with dicks running rampant around Mode." Wilhelmina turned away as Amanda's bottom lip began to tremble.
Really all of the characters. Loved Marc and all his flamboyant grandeur and Amanda with her mean girl actions... I mean who goes around taking pictures of ugly cry faces for a scrapbook... mean bitches. This fic was just really awesome! You totally rock! :)
Author's Response: Idjunkie, so glad you liked it! And you said the magic word---glad you got a laugh or two out of it. That Amanda section was one of my favs. Thanks so much for reading and such a kick ass review. Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/08/08 08:51 am
There are really no words to express how awesome ths was, but I'm gonna try.
Thank so much for capturing the kick ass bitchy glory that is Wilhelmina Slater. You totally rocked this fic, and every bit was just as entertaining as the show. Even more so perhaps, cause you went with a story I've been dying to see. Loved Willie/Marc, and Daniel's damn cluelessnes was on point, but he was still slightly sympathtic. Way out of his league though.
So much of this had me lauging out loud, but this...
The dancing came later in her office with Marc---who'd fortunately had a playlist filled with gangster rap songs like "Sippin' on Some Syzzurp," and "Whoop that Trick."
and this...
Well," Amanda said with relish. "I'm not sure if you're keeping count but that was the sixth girl you've made cry this week alone." Amanda lifted the camera again and grinned. "I'm starting a scrap book of all the ugly cry faces. I'm thinking of calling it "Carnage". "She placed her hand on her hip and puckered her lips, lacquered with glossy red lip gloss. "What do you think?"
Were serious favorites out of all this rampant kick assness. Take a bow Black, you did Willie proud.
Author's Response:
THANK YOU! I was so nervous about this one, trying to get he voices right. Most of all Willis's but Amanda and Marc were a challenge to. Thanks so much for the awesome review. So very much appreciated. Might even frame the sucker!
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 24/08/08 05:06 am