First, great update, loved it! Second, I am definitely team Raylan + Rachael, hard! (I adore Tim but he is not the one for Rachael IMHO). Third, I am not happy with the turn of events. Winona pregnant! Please no! Seriously! Finally, Thanks for a great read! You are super!Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 02:14 am
Raylan, I like you but keep yourself away from Rachel. I just keep liking Tim more and more and more. I mean, someone who is dependable, gets you hot, and loves you dearly is clearly a prince. And then there's Raylan...I mean, he has a history of hreat breaking and yet there's something about him, ugh.
And Winona, I can't stand her but I do feel bad for her. She lost not only her husband but a friend who she still loves but he's caught up with someone else and now she's pregnant [maybe]. sucks to be her.
I know. I really like Tim too...I'm so torn...I'm so torn...Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 04:59 pm
Damn, at this rate Rylan will never get Rachel. I don't like that heifer Winona and I hope that she isn't pregnant.
PM you're killing me...hilarious...I don't care for Winona either...just now it's not over...Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 01:50 am
aw, c'mon! i'm still on the Raylan boat, i don't care how nicely you wrap Tim up.
though he is so sweet and thoughtful and almost perfect.
ugh. damn you for making this realistic!
I know...I know...I'm almost down to tossing a coin and writing the last chapter based on which man was heads or tails...Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 01:36 am
Love the update! Things are really heating up.... very interesting!
Thanks darling. Working on the update to get the next piece out.Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/11 11:46 pm
I really do like this story and I am so glad to see an update, I wish they would really use Rachel in the show more. I like this histroy you've given her. Excellent job. I just wish the chpaters were a little longer so I could have something to sink my teeth into before the next update. LOL. It's that good!
I'll try and fatten up future updates. Glad you're enjoying it Bovi. Thanks.Reviewer: Bovi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/11 03:25 am
I really am enjoying what your doing with these characters. Great update.
Thank you so much. I'm excited to hear that you're enjoying the progression of the characters.Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/11 12:34 am
Uh Oh. She's been warned! Who's going to win Rachel? This is getting more and more interesting! Really good chapter!
Thanks so much jazz. Wait and see, that question will be answered very soon.Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/11 12:04 am
Hooray for a super update!
I'm loving all the nuances to your stories; your chapters are short and sweet but packed full of subtle detail.
I can't wait to read the next chapter; I'm dead curious to see what Raylan has planned. At the beginning of your fanfic, I was Team Raylan because Timothy Olyphant is all sorts of fine lol. But, you've managed to raise Tim to equal, and, at times, higher esteem than Raylan! I'm intrigued to see how you'll play this out. Another great update. Thanks!
Thanks Val. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Fingers crossed, next chapter should be before your eyes on Monday. Yes and the Team Raylan vs. Team Tim battle is on.Reviewer: Valhalla Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/11 10:29 pm
I do like Tim, I really do. And I think Raylan needs to get his shit in order before he talks about her hiding behind Tim and whatnot when he has how many women just hanging around.
Not trying to give too much away but I'll further explore the chemistry and connection she has with each in the second part of this update. That's the difference between the two and you're right. He's the last one that can back her in a corner with the state of his lifeReviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/11 07:33 am
dude, Tim's a sweetheart, but Raylan . . . there's no excuse in the world for that man to be that damn hot.
I know...I know...I just don't even have an explanation for it...Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/11 01:57 am
Wow...Tim really cares for Rachel doesn't he? So does Raylan. But Rachel's heart really belongs to only one crazy-ass Marshal. Winona! Ugh, so overrated. Love Art snarky persona.
I find myself shouting 'RAYLAN! C'mon man!' just as if i'm watching the show, though i love your interpretation of these characters much better. I so wish he'd get it together...preferably with Brooks.
Thank you darling much appreciated. It's sad I found myself looking at episodes waiting for just a glimpse of Rachel and Tim so I could get excited. And I agree, Winona is extremely overrated.Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/11 12:20 am
You had me on the edge of my seat for most of that chapter. I really thought something unspeakable had happened to Rachel. Well played, lady. Well played.
Now, I'm going to need MORE!
I am here to answer your writing demands. I will definitely give you more.Reviewer: Valhalla Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/11 11:09 pm
Hmm, I wonder why the person just shot and left (I'm assuming) since they didn't go after his ex-wife.
I am really loving this story though, and I like the way you dropped itns about Tim's life. The only thing is that since we're seeing that from Raylan's POV, how would he know that about his father beating him?
Loved the opening line btw, hahah
I'll elaborate more on the shooter and what happened in the next update. Promise. As far as Tim's life...there was an episode this season where they were all sitting around and he let it drop about his background and his father's abuse. So I used that little info and elaborated. Sorry if that was unclear. Glad you liked the opening line :)Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/11 03:49 am
Loved the update, as always! You are awesome. This story is great. Maybe this sentinel event will wake both Raylan and Rachel up. Again, love it! Want more.... soon.
Thank you so much. There will be more soon...including some difficult conversations for all the romantic parties involved.Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/05/11 02:41 am
girl, i have no words for the way you weave this story. the tension is incredible, the sparse yet intricate detail . . . i only wish i could write like this. you are amazing. and i looooove this story.
Are you serious????? Me who is totally in love with all of your original characters...child you know how to weave story like a kung fu master...however coming from you I will take that outstanding compliment :)Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/11 01:07 am
this gets better and better. Im still team tim, I think he may need rachel more than raylan...but it's obvious they both love her
I will not reveal which team I'm on...I'll just say it's hard...you're right...at the end of the day I think this version of Tim may need her a little more and he may be better equipped to love her.Reviewer: peach martini Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/05/11 08:30 pm