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Title: Delusions of Grandeur

Great chapter Scribe.  I loved the interaction between the characters.  Loved it!!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm so very glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/03/11 12:48 am

Title: Delusions of Grandeur

They all seem confused here about what they want. Too many complications. Wonder who's gonna make the first move and be honest?? Rylan or Rachel???

Author's Response:

Rachel and Raylan THINK they are making the right moves, but they're not. I'm gonna throw them for a loop in the next update. Time for some other disasters...

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16/03/11 07:21 am

Title: Delusions of Grandeur

Scrumptious. Absolutely scrumptious.

 



Author's Response:

*Yay*

Thank you much :)

Reviewer: Valhalla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/03/11 01:55 am

Title: Delusions of Grandeur

Awe HELL naw! Raylan is her man, not that slut's! She'll only hurt Tim more if she 'settles' for a relationship her heart isn't into. No, no, *shakes head*, she needs to rope Raylan's dumb ass into shape! Pronto!!

Thank you for updating. More please :)

Author's Response: More coming soon. You know Rachel is just as hardheaded as Raylan. They've got lessons to learn.

Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15/03/11 07:04 pm

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