Totally loving this story . I suck ... it's taken me so long to read this super good story .
No worries. You've got plenty of time to make up for it...just keep reading :)Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 04:57 am
Dagnabbit I am not caught up. I like your version though. I will probably prefer it in the end.
This is well written and fits right in with the flow of the show itself. Welldone.
Thanks so much. I know it's hard to remember this is the fic not based on show events.Reviewer: Acorn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 06:06 am
I love them together. I love just the entire concept of this story. Both of them so aware of each other and how easily they have complicted things.
I really adore these characters. I wish they had more interaction on the show. Glad you're enjoying the story :)Reviewer: Acorn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 05:33 am
I finally got a chance to read this chapter. I wish Rachel would elaborate on her feeling about Tim, just not to Winnona.
More info on everyone's feelings is coming soon...promiseReviewer: Peach Martini Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/04/11 02:23 am
I totally forgot to leave a review earlier!
Okay, gimme a sec to get into the right state of mind. Here we go...
I did not see that coming! Why did you drink, Rachel, why?!
I'm literally chomping at the bit to see where you'll go with this. I have a feeling it will finally give Raylan that kick up the arse he's been needing. "squeel* So excited!
You're welcome. Thanks for reading.
Let's just say it's going to give Raylan a kick in the something.Reviewer: Valhalla Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/04/11 02:12 am
Thanks for another great and intriguing update? Why is Rachel drinking on the job and getting herself shot in the process? I love this story!
Raylan and Tim have her twisted she's actually talking to Winona. What the world :)
Thanks for reading.Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/04/11 04:47 pm
AW, C'MON!!!! YOU'VE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!!! HOW DO YOU JUST STOP THERE?!
::gritting teeth:: look, you better update soon, woman. s'all i gotsta say.
I promise to get another update up sometime this week...sooner rather than later
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Date: 25/04/11 04:29 am
Thank you darling.Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/11 06:49 pm
brilliant. I love these two. Rachel's way too smart to get involved with Raylan on the show, but he's so irresistible (even if Tim is just as deadly)! Keep it comin'!
Too smart because the man is a disaster waiting to happen. Thanks for reading.Reviewer: alices Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 04:51 pm
I have never watched an episode of this show though I need too, but I love what you've written so far. Even though there are certain strings that are over my head since I haven't watched the show the story-telling makes all of that irrelevant and you give enough t hta I can sort of figure out what's going on and if I can't, I can always google, lol.
I love Rachel and the fact that even though she has found herself in two difficult situations she acknowledges it and it she doesn't let it ruin her work, she's still competent and I really like that even though her love life might be a bit of a mess she isn't.
The way you're showing Raylan and Tim works brilliantly for me, I don't know who to cheer for and although Raylan should be unlikable [really, Ava and Winona?] the way you write him just makes me feel a bit sad for him. Especially since he knows he screwed up.
Tim... I feel bad for him because he seems like a nice guy but I don't know, in this case he might come in last just because he doesn't seem to spark the same feelings in Rachel that Raylan does and she keeps thinking of him as a friend with benefits while it's clear he's fallen harder.
Shoot, he's probably liked her from time.
Don't be disappointed when you watch. My 'verse is completely AU. Though there is wonderful chemistry between the three marshals, they haven't veered in that direction on the show. It's still a good watch. Action - packed and funny.
You're right you shouldn't like him but when you see him portrayed on screen and what I'm trying to bring to light with this fic you can't help but feel sorry for him. I honestly don't think the character knows how to do better. And that's the issue you have one where it's obvious how he feels but no matter how hard he tries he can't do the right thing. The other is making a successful effort but it's not really what the lady wants.
I'm really glad you're picking up on the conflict and enjoying the story so far. Thank you so much for reading.Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 06:24 am
I love you for this.
Raylan, Raylan, Raylan. The man is a walking disaster area. The little dance he and Rachel have going on is going to blow up sooner or later and the people around them will probably feel the sting more than they will. Ah, well, don't they say love is a little bit selfish?
*Sigh* Love. This.
And I love you back. Thank you for commenting. Yes Raylan is a walking disaster. I did some episode catch up for latest season over the weekend. I can't believe some of the stuff that joker is actuall getting into on the show. And I agree, the little dance they're doing will burn the people around them very soon.Reviewer: Valhalla Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 03:33 am
I love this stroy Scribe! Thanks for the detailed update. Keep them coming PLEASE.
Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 02:42 am
When I saw the story was updated I squealed. That's how much I enjoy your work.
Rachel, Rachel, Rachel. Raylan really did a number on her. I just feel bad for Tim; I don't think she'll ever feel for him the way she feels for Raylan.
Can I be a spoilt brat and ask for a longer update next time?
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks Val. Yes you can be a lovable spoilt brat and ask for a longer update. Which will be delivered next time. Yeah Raylan got inside of her head and that's going to show more and more in future updates, but our girl is not alone. Reviewer: Valhalla Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 03:45 am
Damn, that was good. I think I'm a Tim/Rachel shipper now. Raylan's got to loose the luggage before he's worthy.
Author's Response: I'm questioning my loyalty after writing that chapter. Fic Tim may have swayed me just a bit. Thanks for reading :)
Date: 05/04/11 11:14 pm
Great chapter Scribe. I loved the interaction between the characters. Loved it!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm so very glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 17/03/11 12:48 am
They all seem confused here about what they want. Too many complications. Wonder who's gonna make the first move and be honest?? Rylan or Rachel???
Rachel and Raylan THINK they are making the right moves, but they're not. I'm gonna throw them for a loop in the next update. Time for some other disasters...Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/03/11 07:21 am
Awe HELL naw! Raylan is her man, not that slut's! She'll only hurt Tim more if she 'settles' for a relationship her heart isn't into. No, no, *shakes head*, she needs to rope Raylan's dumb ass into shape! Pronto!!
Thank you for updating. More please :)
Author's Response: More coming soon. You know Rachel is just as hardheaded as Raylan. They've got lessons to learn.
Date: 15/03/11 07:04 pm
Great update! Loved it!Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/03/11 01:50 am