You my good lady, have proved to be a literary Mozart
Reviewer: Thando Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/10/14 03:01 pm
Any chance that this story will be continued?
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/05/13 06:35 am
Very interesting, so is Alice's maid in love or in lust with Lord Mather? I can't wait to see what happens. By the way, that's a beautiful picture! Do you know who the artist is?
Reviewer: tahti-bunny Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/12/11 06:08 am
I know you're probably busy but I do hope you're updating soon! Loving your work so much!
Author's Response: I've been on a somewhat procrastinator break. I'm been picking at this one (trying to get it right I guess, lol) as well as the plethora of jumble in my head. But after a mini vacay, I will surely begin a revamp somewhat. Thanks for reading and I admire your work! Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/11 02:59 am
Bravoo ^.^
yayyy so glad you updated and it was worth the wait but i dont know if me poor heart can handle waiting for another long update hahaha .
And ahhhhh! love love love the music choice! as soon as i saw 40 day dream, it popped in my head and now i cant get it out haha
Author's Response: Yes, I'm definitely setting up a schedule for at least an hour or so a day and at least a post every week. My mind is so jumbled sometimes I'm currently writing like 6 stories (including a western and a cyberpunk) and reading at least 3 novels right now. I tend to float from one to the next in a hitch. Yeah Mr. Sharpe is mah man! Black Water is another treasure of the band. Reviewer: Treehuggingsmartarse Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/03/11 11:08 am
Waiting for the story, I have re-read over and over again. I need a update soon. I love the interaction between the characters and I want to know if this Lord Arthur has marry Alice.
Author's Response: Thanks for the prodding, I actually needed that. I've been sitting on this second chapter for a while now and I'm as we speak tweaking before an update. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 29/03/11 07:39 pm
Wow, when are you going to update this story. I love this version of "Alice in wonder land". Alice need to be strong because this Lord Mather is no joke. He saw her and now the father is looking for the highest bidder and Lord Mather is the winner.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/03/11 08:50 am
wow i must say that this introduction chapter to alice was absolutly wonderful and flawless i mean this completly blew my mind when i read it. i was completly speechless with wide eyes damn whoo i am begging and pleading for an update please, please hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I appreciate the enthusiasm, it made my day lol. But I am definitely working on getting the second chapter up this week- I've been sick (boo-hoo) and recovering from being drugged up on cough medicine and ibuprofen so yay for feeling better! Second chapter, yes'm at it!
[Report This]Date: 27/02/11 10:19 am
Damn i have to say this chaapter was absolutly flawless whoo i am loving this story already and cant wait for an update!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/02/11 05:50 pm
amazing...! this is going to be a very very VERY interesting read!
Author's Response: Oh yesh, yesh. Thank you for reading. Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/02/11 04:27 pm
Woooooooow, I ain't gonna even lie, I had to break out the dictionary on some of these words yo, lol
BUT this is freakin fantastic Bravo! Bravo!
please next chapter ASAP
Author's Response: Why thank you! *Whispers* When feeling redundant the thesaurus button thingy is a lifesaver. And it's fished me out of many many interesting situations I tell you. But I'm so glad that you like and will update ASAP! Reviewer: NiaZ Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/02/11 04:47 pm
Eventhough Arthur comes across like an ass, he does sound kinda sexy, can't wait to see how your Mad Hatter comes across
Author's Response: Now I will have to produce lol. Yes I will be uninhibitedly wild with the Hatter.
Date: 18/02/11 12:06 pm
A good story with erotica thrown in. Cant wait for next chapter.
Author's Response: Yesh my dear. Thank you for the comment.
[Report This]Date: 18/02/11 05:58 am
That was dark and wonderful. Your prose is very well done - it reminds me of Eloisa James' or Stephanie Lauren's modern takes on Victorian and Regency era fiction - there's even a touch of Austen in the phrasing. And the tone is well set; it's definitely darker than most versions of AiW I've read. I like the way you've described Lord Mather through other character's perspectives. Alice sees him as a foppish, oily annoyance and Chessa sees him as a hunk, until after their encounter when she sees him for what he really is. I'm really excited to see where this story goes next.
Author's Response: I'm a huge Laurens fan, she was one of first of my romance novel phase (still a guilty pleasure mind you). It's just something about that time period where it was so innocent, tumultous, and traditional. And yes, I've also been influenced by Austen- I love her work. I've read a great many romance novels but it's been skimp on the Victorian era and I've had the feel since exploring the steampunk genre.
(And Alice will NOT be a ditzy damnsel- to an extent, because what fun would we have if she was rather worldy? But she's sharp and will have to grow up pretty quickly.)
As for Arthur, he's such a treat to write and I think it shows because I've yet to scratch his layers- Shrek was a smart man- ogre. To many he's a great deal of things but I'm not sure where he's going to go (where HE wants to at least)- you can see our love-hate relationship developing huh?
Alice I can say is not too ambivalent of him, she pretty much knows what she wants but I think he's rather potent even in small doses and its either you hate him or you don't- it's more like that crawl of intuition you get under skin when your instinct is telling you NO, Alice is definitely aware of this and the danger he poses as a man and as well as his "appetites". But nontheless we have yet to get into that Adonis crown/noggin of his...
I ramble a lot lol (gosh, I hate using lol).
[Report This]Date: 18/02/11 01:23 am
Really, really enjoying this, especially the writing style! can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, it comes from being a hopeless romantic AND many many watches of Ever After (period films in general) and even from the nostalgia of 90's chick flicks.
Date: 17/02/11 08:24 pm
Wow, what a great start! You've got me hooked, and I can't wait for your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^
[Report This]Date: 17/02/11 07:11 pm
That was an excellent. I really hope Alice doesn't marry that Arthur or he's going to make her life a living hell.
This was beautifully written. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you for that, it really warmed my heart. And unfortunately I can't say the road for Alice will become any easier. It's a sordid coming of age, essentially into womanhood albeit darkly so. Continue on! Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/02/11 07:33 am
Wow, interesting start but that was messed up. I felt sad for poor Chessa. Lord Mather was a beast! Why would her father set her up with someone like that??? Doesn't he care about Alice???
Author's Response: It's all about connections connections and escalating up the social ladder my dear! And we'll get more into that...
[Report This]Date: 17/02/11 06:43 am
Interesting. Very interesting. You have a great turn of phrase, which fits the tone and period I think you're going for. I'd try to make sure you strike the right balance between making your prose interesting, and distracting the reader. I enjoyed it very much, hope to see an update soon.
Symph.
Author's Response: I'm glad you approve, I'll take that into consideration and working at updating asap. Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/02/11 06:17 am
OMG!! That was amazinggg and the way you told it was absolutly delicious!!! I cannot wait for more, please update soon!! this is def a new fave :D
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment! I'm working carefully at it to keep the scrumptious tidbits coming. Reviewer: treehuggingsmartass Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 17/02/11 06:13 am