Another excellent chapter. Ava thought she was so clever throwing diggs toward Quinn. I laughed out loud. I'm glad Quinn wasn't phazed by it. She can hold her own. Aiden likes bimbos such a typical male. Excited for the next chapter.Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/03/11 09:45 pm
Hey, this fic is pretty awesome, can't wait for more!Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/03/11 09:43 pm
I love stories with hotter than hot males characters. I am waiting patiently for Quinn and Aiden to fall in lust then love.Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/03/11 09:37 pm
I like this story so far, the characters have great chemestry together, Aidan and Quinn'd friends are a RIOT.
OK I already think that Ava is going to be a real ISSUE... b/c I have a feeling that Quinn is into Adian and b/c of that SCUM Pete, she is going to fight it tooth and nail.
Looking forward to more.Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/03/11 02:44 pm
Better cool your jets there Q, you are just out of a serious relationship. Then again who hasn't ever been overwhelmed by too much hotness at once? Let he among us without sin be the first to condemn, amen, lol!
Poor Shaun, first Ellie puts his business in the street, then she slaps him and lastly she orders him BACK to box duty, damn.
I feel for Quinn, tears are second to what I hate most in the breakup process, necessary but horrendous.
I love how easily David, Noah and Aiden chat about breasts, fake ones versis real ones. ^_^ Made me chuckle. Bossy gitls, I was surprised (for a time) by how many guys are into them, now I'm all for it. It's a blast!
Quinn flipped out on Aiden. Isn't it funny that the "players" and "ladie's men" hardly ever know what to say to a woman? ~_^
(P.S. Shaun is a cutie)Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 06:44 pm
wow Aiden boy he knows how to put his foot in his mouth lol. Men need to understand it nothing wrong that us women get emotional show that we care unlike them who just get drunk and pick fights at bars lol. I so like how Quinn friend got the other guys help her move that stuff in.
I like the story and realy like the pic too good job on that and thanks for the update.Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 04:53 pm
As far as issues, I've only seen a couple missing words and a misplaced period. Wasn't searching Extra hard, because it was all good, but I don't think there were many errors anyway. But this caught my attention:
- I am a pig, why do you think we Marta coming here once a week?
Photobucket, eh? I must look into this! SE7EN is definitely a very goodlooking man, that much is for sure. Got my Mother hooked on him, ^_^ it's quite entertaining. She's willing to go to jail for these Asian boys, man.
(P.S. Leila is a trip)
Author's Response: Error Fixed! Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 03:56 am
wow glad she found and place it just suck she have to live witha big jackass lol but he one sexy jackass lol. I like that you add more pitcure of your main charcter very nice. Like this story and thanks for the update.Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 02:32 am
I love who you have casted as Aiden that man is fine!!!! I don't want to but I just may become stalker roaming around waiting for new chapters. Me likey!!!Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 01:54 am