You can see it right now, Quinn!
I love that her friends were there for her, but why could she not move in with either of them? I'm sure that it will be addressed soon, but I wondered while reading this, so... yeah. And I liked Pete, of course, still like his face, but he is a dog. And why do people say this isn't what it looks like when it so obviously IS? It makes the least ammount of sense. For every weak or ill-thought out excuse I decree that there should be mass ammounts of shooting, Madea style.
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/11 11:13 pm
I like the way you are introducing the characters and concisely building character development. You are fluid and you have built a great deal of suspense in me. Good job!
Reviewer: Lady Siren Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/03/11 05:59 pm
Beautiful cast! I am in love with David, Noah and Peter! Mostly David, such a beautiful man.
Also, what software did you use to create this collage(?)? It's kind of amazing. ^_^
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/11 10:05 am
awww sookie sookie now
Reviewer: DivineFindings Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/03/11 04:56 am
Me likey, I do see love connection coming for Quinn? I sure do hope so.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/03/11 01:54 am
Seems like a great start!
Reviewer: Shereads48 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/03/11 01:50 am
wow it look like her luck is about to change. Why do mena cheat I mena come one if there some problems going on with you and your lady talk it out instead screwing anything that walks lol. Look foward to reading more and thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/11 01:33 am
Nice pic of the cast.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/11 01:30 am
Curious, please update soon
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/03/11 01:25 am
can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Ashlynn Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/03/11 01:19 am
Me likey!!! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/11 12:52 am