Good start so far and suprise his best friend girl wait for six long years before he pop the question lol. But have feeling dram is going to happen at the wedding lol. Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/05/11 01:03 am
It wouldn't hurt at all, to talk since they are both free of commitments.
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Date: 29/03/09 04:53 pm
This was a really great start, I only saw this movie once after it came out, and it was a while ago. So I feel like I'm reading this with fresh eyes.
Loving it so far. Thanks for posting it here !
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/08 07:52 pm
Ok you have become one of my favorite authors.. I love the voice you give your characters I want to know more about all of them. Great Job 
London and Kanji have me on the edge of my seat wondering what is going on between them. Thanks or sharing this story.
Reviewer: zeta Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/08/08 02:26 pm
Okay, so I'm spreading myself across your fics, taking them a chapter at a time. I picked this one first because I remember liking this movie and was interested to see what you'd done with it. Love the way you've put your own spin on the characters. London and Kanji are obviously seriously into one another. I'm kind of lost as to why they're not together (that like got in the way thing was weak to me) and London lapsed into a little bitchdom with the coments about his girlfriend. Of course I havent' read her yet so she could deserve every bit of it.
Great so far and I cant' wait to read more!
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/08 05:19 am
Hey Chay! I freakin' love this story. In the first chapter you totally set the tone and pace for this story and establish the characters well. Kanji and London are so cute! I just really love this story and I'm glad you decided to post it here!
You should add the character pics as a separate chapter so people can see the hotness that is Kanji, Gavin, Michael and the oh so sexy Mason (I too HEART with every fiber of my being Chris Evans:)!
You ROCK girlie!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I e-mailed the mods to make sure that I could post the pics, but thanks for telling me, idjunkie! Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 26/08/08 09:55 pm