This has GREAT potential. You are very talented when it comes to descriptions. You really paint a picture that a reader can imagine.
Reviewer: FranklinsMuse Signed [Report This]Date: 09/02/12 06:15 pm
Good start to the story. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 10/10/11 03:30 pm
Nice beginning! Its very crisp. The gadgets were explain well too. Sounds like she made an enemy. Can't wait to meet her men!
Thanks!
Reviewer: puertaobierta Signed [Report This]Date: 15/04/11 02:41 am
Let me just say...I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this!!!!! I'm a sci-fi geek as well and I love the Ghost in the Shell series. I'm lovin Selene already...lol Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: mocasoul Signed [Report This]Date: 11/04/11 03:08 pm
i am so excited for this story. already, you have such a platform set up; strong characters, tension, beautiful description . . . i really hope you can update regularly on this. been feenin' for a good sci-fi/fantasy lately.
Author's Response: I've been working on this one for months, originally I really want to publish a novel (far cry, I know). I've been a poet all my life- that just comes naturally. I stopped writing for years after finding myself emotionally bankrupt and now its just been from one project to the next.
So basically I'm trying to be monogamous? I'm a rambler, lol. So yeah, I actually started a sci-fi novelette and I'm my own worst enemy when it comes to critiquing myself (you should see the red) and I basically diluted it for this particular story, as something to break the tension. So since I'm a borderline insomniac, or faux vampire (sleep during the day-if that happens). So I will be having a late night rendenvous with some editing/writing.
And thanks for commenting, I admire your work so much. Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/11 04:04 pm
Interesting start.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 10/04/11 01:41 am
I like, please update.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/04/11 12:07 am