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Title: Chapter 8

Awww I feel bad for both of them.

Reviewer: MissTruth Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/02/14 02:20 am

Title: Chapter 6

I knew it! I hope she doesn't break his heart.

Reviewer: MissTruth Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/02/14 01:59 am

Title: Chapter 4

Is Bas really feeling Em?? Seems like it...,

Reviewer: MissTruth Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/14 01:46 am

Title: Chapter 9

You should continue thus story.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29/12/13 06:11 am

Title: Chapter 9

awww theryre so cute . i want more.

Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/13 02:31 am

Title: Chapter 9

amazing !!! =D

 

Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/01/13 04:36 pm

Title: Chapter 9

The entire story I was wanting her and Bas to get together. It was so beautifully frustrating!!! Very well done. I'd love to read more about them. 

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/11/11 05:01 am

Title: Chapter 9

Wow!  I'm glad that the two of them realize that they were made for each other.  I look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/10/11 02:48 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I like the storyline and even the characters, but I simply do not understand why more "authors" don't attempt to proofread before sharing their works. A truly well-written story is like a fine wine, and the other stories that ignore spell check and grammar...well, it's like the cheap stuff.  The story doesn't flow easily because of the grammar snags. That said, if those issues detract from your enjoyment of a story then you'll want to pass on this one.  Otherwise, it's a short read with alot of potential.

Reviewer: NeighborLady Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/10/11 01:55 am

Title: Chapter 9

The path of true love is never straight! That was a very sweet story! Thanks for it!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/09/11 05:56 am

Title: Chapter 9

I love this story. It was so cute and adorable and I guess she won't be quitting her job now. ^^ You did a wondeful job writing this. 

Reviewer: mizgardenia Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/11 10:28 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Hope you continue this, because I need to see at least some necking from these two!

Nice!!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/05/11 04:47 am

Title: Chapter 9

Sorry that I haven't left a review for this story, its GREAT, and this last update had me misty eyed.

I'm so glad that Em and Bas are going to try to be more than friends, and I know that this is going to be the start of something WONDERFUL between them.

I do hope that there is more to come.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/05/11 01:05 am

Title: Chapter 9

Oh nooooo, say it aint so. I can't believe this is the end!!! Just when it was getting to the good part. Loved it!!! I hope there is a sequel.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/05/11 12:49 am

Title: Chapter 9

Aw! How sweet was the whole I love you thing? People can be so blind. I'm so happy they got their feelings out in the open. This is a great chapter and so was the one before this.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29/05/11 08:06 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Excellent, need a update today please.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/05/11 06:57 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Delightful!  2 thumbs up.

Reviewer: Realstone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/05/11 06:45 pm

Title: Chapter 9

both of them belong together. yeah they finally admitted it thanks been right in front of them all this time great two chapters.

Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/05/11 05:53 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Yay, they finally admitted how they feel. This isn't the end is it? We have to see where they go from here, making love, married, having kids.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/05/11 04:31 pm

Title: Chapter 6

It is about time that someone told her the truth about Bas's feelings, since he was too chicken to do it himself.  NIck has come up in my opinion, I even kinda like him now.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/05/11 03:58 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I am so glad that Em finally woke up, and admitted that she had feelings for Bas.  I hope that this is the beginning of someting beautiful.  Bas has been in love with Em for a long time, wow!!!  You are amazing!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/05/11 03:49 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Yay...happy dance for Emery and Sebastian...I loved how you described her moment of awakening of Bas's love as sunshine and warmth...beautiful...loved it!!!

What a beautiful, heartwarming story...sorry to see it end...wouldn't be mad at you if you decided to expand their story *wink, wink*...but I'm grateful that you shared this much with us...keep up the great work...wonderful story, bravo!!!!

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/05/11 03:40 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Sweet story! Old fashion love. I am so glad Em is staying, ya ya ya! This story is so well written, BRAVO!

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/05/11 02:22 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Great!  I loved it...I hope there is more

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/05/11 01:52 pm

Title: Chapter 9

yay!!!!! that's all i got. 

Reviewer: g Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/05/11 01:33 pm

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