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Title: Chapter 2

Loved the update. Does Bas have feelings for her?? And if he does,why doesn't he do something instead of being the fall guy???

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. And as for Bas doing something hmm.....

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/05/11 01:53 am

Title: Chapter 2

I truly like this story. I'll refrain from stating a preference for who Em should be with, but I will say that I like Bas a lot. Very supportive and sounds as fine as an aged wine. Wonder what Em would do if Bas found someone? How would she react? Nick's appearance should put some clarity on the situation. I'm interested in getting a clue as to whether Bas has feelings other than "besties" for Em.



Author's Response:

Honestly I don't know Em would react if Bas was the one bringing a girl around. I mean do any of us want to share our friends? I sure don't always like to.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30/04/11 11:15 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Bas is a sweetie. If things do not work out with Nick, he sounds like he would be the perfect guy for her.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/04/11 08:54 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I don't understand why she doesn't date Bas.  He seems like the better man for her than his brother.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/04/11 05:40 pm

Title: Chapter 2

beginning to enjoy the story, please update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30/04/11 05:11 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Why is Em torturing herself like this?  i know that she loves this family, but damn how much is a sister suppose to take. I so love this story by-the-way.  I am keeping my hopes for a HEA ending.  Please!!!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/04/11 04:09 pm

Title: Chapter 2

already i've come to the decision, that nick and this cady can go kick rocks. i'm all for sebastian getting the girl.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/04/11 03:09 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I like this story, but (its not a huge but haha) I kinda want Bas to be her guy he seems perfect so far, it being the second chapter an all

Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/04/11 09:26 am

Title: Chapter 1

hi, how about an update. Your story is so interesting it is actually a sin not to update and to keep us dangling on a string. Lol. Please update.

Reviewer: brenda Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/04/11 10:15 am

Title: Chapter 1

Sounds interesting, would like to see where this story goes!

Reviewer: none Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/04/11 06:46 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great start...I love your style of writing...nice flow...you're really, really good...

So Em has a thing for Nick...what's the deal between her and Bas...he sounds like a great catch himself...so why can't he get out of the 'friend zone'...but I suppose the heart wants what the heart wants..looking forward to more and how Em handles seeing Nick again with his latest squeeze...

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/04/11 08:48 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Great start...I love your style of writing...nice flow...you're really, really good...

So Em has a thing for Nick...what's the deal between her and Bas...he sounds like a great catch himself...so why can't he get out of the 'friend zone'...but I suppose the heart wants what the heart wants..looking forward to more and how Em handles seeing Nick again with his latest squeeze...

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/04/11 08:48 pm

Title: Chapter 1

So why doesn't she like Bas?  He seems like a good catch.  Great start to the story.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/04/11 07:28 am

Title: Chapter 1

I like it. Bas sounds like a woderful friend.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/04/11 05:53 am

Title: Chapter 1

Likey, likey, more please. I hope Bas is for here, he is very thoughtful. If it works out that way, if reminds me of the movie "Sabrina".

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/04/11 01:09 am

Title: Chapter 1

I love stories like this. I hope you continue regular updates.

Reviewer: sasha Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/04/11 09:26 pm

Title: Chapter 1

This looks like it is a keeper. Can't wait to see where this is going

Reviewer: Shereads48 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/04/11 09:13 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Nice start to your story. I'm waiting for more.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/04/11 04:20 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I wanna know whatbhappens next! Great start!

Reviewer: Kaci Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/04/11 12:26 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I like the start so far... but I do wonder if Bas feels more than friendship for Emery.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/04/11 10:55 am

Title: Chapter 1

Me likey. More please.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/04/11 08:27 am

Title: Chapter 1

This looks promising! Please update soon! Like in 2 hours... lol.

I am looking forward to seeing as to what you come up with!

Reviewer: Rapture Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/04/11 08:12 am

Title: Chapter 1

This looks interesting.  Em seems to be working so hard that I don't think she recognizes that Sebastian may be carrying a "torch" for her.  And Nicholas....hmmm. I am interested in reading more.  How come he cannot see that Em was interested in him? 

Nyeesha



Author's Response:

My best friend maintains that guys are stupid. That's why Nick might not see what's in front of him.

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/04/11 07:45 am

Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad she at least has a friend in Bas if Nick ends up being a douche in the beginning:) But so far I'm rooting for her and Nick. Great story!

Author's Response:

Thanx

Reviewer: chelbells75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/04/11 05:33 am

Title: Chapter 1

I am loved what I read so far, and I hope that Nick falls hard for Em.   I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read it and to review it too.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/04/11 05:23 am

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