Poor Emm, she was so busy seeing Bas as a friend that she missed the fact that he wanted more. Well stop crying and do something about it! Good chapter!!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/05/11 07:05 pm
love the flow of your story and it is the right time for all feeling to come out. Great Job. Update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/11 05:32 pm
wow that was great don't usually like short but that was very informative & 2 B delivered by non other than Nick just wow now the balls N her court can't wait 2 C how she deals & approaches Bas
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/11 11:48 am
I just started reading this and I'm already hooked...love the characters and the interesting family dynamic.
Can't wait to find out what Em does now that she knows how Bas feels about her...looking forward to the next update!
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/11 10:01 am
NOOO! you leave us with a cliffhanger!!!!
Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/11 08:37 am
Thank goodness you ended that early. I dont think I could have stood too much more of Emery's love connection mantra. However, I honestly dont know how I feel about this chapter. It was meaty, and the implications are huge! I can only guess the reason Nick never truly went for it with Em is because he knew what Sebastian felt for Em was probably the real deal. He said he cut his heart out, but isn't all.....within reason... fair in love and war? If he truly felt as strongly as Sebastian does, I would think he would have told him to go to hell and may the best man win. Why would he be that accommodating? Bas isnt some charity case. He's as rich, powerful, charming, and good-looking as Nick. Is that partly why Nick moved to the UK? To give Bas free reign to get his girl? To get over Em? Or maybe he didnt want to rip his family apart for one woman. Well, she at least has her answer now. Either way, Nick didnt fight for her, so forget him! Hmmm..this is big!
Very Nice!!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/11 08:06 am
hhmm, maybe she'll realize that deep down she's always loved Bas? lol well maybe not but it would be nice
Reviewer: LiveNani Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/11 07:59 am
Finally!!! And who would've thunk that it would be Nick!!! who clues Em in!?!??! This was priceless!!! Now let's see what she does with the info. Nick gave her some sage advice, fish or cut bait, Em.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/11 07:47 am
Excellent, need a update.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/05/11 07:33 am
Okay Em now you must realized that Nick treat you like a sister, wake up and smell the coffee.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/05/11 07:30 am
I think Bas would be a better catch for Em, excellent story.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/05/11 07:23 am
I'm going to start calling her Clueless Em until she buys one. :)
Yeah, there's something wrong with Sebastian (I love that name), he's pining for your clueless behind. Will Libby hip her to that or has she not noticed either? The plan of CE is bound to work out REAL WELL ;)
I so love this story. I look forward to each update.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/11 12:34 am
Well...dont know what to make of things yet, so....
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 22/05/11 11:44 pm
Im really enjoying your story...currently caught between Bas and Nick...leaning a little toward Bas though
Reviewer: LiveNani Signed [Report This]Date: 22/05/11 06:16 pm
So . . . when will Ms. Emery realize that her best friend is in love with her?
Can't wait for the next update!!!
Reviewer: DiamondLady28 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/05/11 04:25 pm
Just like Em needs to pay attention to how Bas is reacting when he is around her he too needs to own up to his feelings.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 22/05/11 07:17 am
Sorry that you're sick...I know all about allergies...and sinuses...ugh...poor baby...hope you feel better soon and thanks so much for sharing more of this tale with us...
Em..she makes me want to go argggh....she seems so perceptive of everything else except what's right in front of her...did she never take the time to wonder why her "best friend" Bas has never been really serious about a woman in all the years she known him...why he spends so much time hanging out with her...why he's having these huge emotional mood swings around her...and they intensify whenever Nick comes into the picture...hello, girlfriend, the man is head-over-heels in love with you...and she is liking Cady in spite of her feelings for Nick...hopefully she'll see that whatever she feels for Nick in merely infatuation...and the love of a lifetime in right there in front of her face with Sebastian...can't wait for more...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 22/05/11 02:21 am
Hmmm, wonder what's up with Bas??!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 22/05/11 02:05 am
Most excellent chapter, but I have to ask does Bas have feelings for Em even thought she's in love with Nick? Why does Nick play with Em"s feelings like that? I don't like him, when is he going to wisen up?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 21/05/11 10:58 pm
Good chapter but wondering what's going on with Bas. I'm sure you'll tell us.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 21/05/11 09:49 pm
This is a good story and although I know she has been pining after Nick I think that Bas might be interested in her. I can't wait for the next update to see if my conclusion is right.
Reviewer: Tempestsunshine Signed [Report This]Date: 15/05/11 02:55 pm
Is Emery really this dim...does she not realize what is happening right before her very eyes...Bas is so over the moon for her...he's definitely thinks of her as more than just a 'friend'...and I bet he is just as frustrated as I am that Em can't see see the forest for the trees because she thinks she's so hung up on his brother...I'm getting 'friends' vibes between Nick and Em...he cares for her...appreciates her inner warmth and beauty...but as a dear friend...almost like family...but he only has eyes for Cady...he is definitely in love with this one...
How long is it going to take Em to see the light...I hope not too long...though I do enjoy stories of unrequited love...I do need payoff...Sebastian is the man for Emery...fingers crossed that she realizes this sooner rather than later...
Great update...looking forward to more...great job thusfar...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 14/05/11 05:05 pm
I'm on team Bas. Maybe spending time with him while she's trying to find him a girl will make Em realize what she has right in front of her.
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 04:04 pm