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Title: Chapter 4

Wow, can Em be anymore clueless, that Bas really likes her.  She needs to wake up and soon.  Loved the update

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/05/11 08:29 am

Title: Chapter 4

Bas and Em it is. I hope anyway. Nick has the love of his life with him, unless it is for show.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/05/11 07:13 am

Title: Chapter 4

Bas beeds to man up and let Em know how he feels about her. If she had feeling s for Nick I hope she keeps it to herself.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/05/11 07:08 am

Title: Chapter 4

I just read the whole story again, has Nick ever given Em any indication that he has feelings for her.  Then he is sending her mixed signals, telling her how sexy she is, then introducing Cady has the sunshine of his life.  Makes me want to hurl!!!  Is Bas in love with Em?  I want Em to wake up and smell the coffee!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/05/11 06:05 am

Title: Chapter 4

hmmmmm the more I read I wonder could our boy Bas B feelin something 4 our girl & she is blind b/c he's her friend or what?

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/05/11 06:01 am

Title: Chapter 4

NIck is a cruel man!!! Em why are you torturing yourself like this?  Theses people aren't even your family, cut your loses and be on your own.  Nick doesn't care about you!!  Love this story!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/05/11 05:55 am

Title: Chapter 4

I dont see anything but a "brotherly" love Nick seems to be displaying for Emery. Bas is in to her, even if she doesnt know it. Go for Bas! He's the whole package.

We'll see....

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/05/11 05:50 am

Title: Chapter 4

Ah Bas, did I see a glimpse of maybe some not too friendly feelings for Miss Em. I think I did. And he seems to be a tad pissed at her right now. And watch my girl not have a clue.

Em might like Cady in spite of herself.

Oh yeah, this is going to be really interesting. btw, I loves me some Bas. Nick is fine too, but Bas, YUM. still waters and all.

Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/05/11 05:08 am

Title: Chapter 4

Now, Bas is upset with Em for the way she handled things. Clearly he is in love with her. But, when will she find out.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/05/11 04:44 am

Title: Chapter 3

Just reading your story.  It would appear that Sebastian and Em have a thing for one another and not aware of it.

Well, they are friends...is it not best to be lovers with your best friend.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/05/11 06:03 am

Title: Chapter 3

She's trying to set up Bas??? Why not herself??? Wonder if he has feelings for her???

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/05/11 02:16 am

Title: Chapter 1

SEB/Em team is who I'm routing for in the story. Nick can be all that and more but he overlooked Em all these years. It would be a good twist to have Em fall for Sebastian during the 96 hours. They make a really good couple. Nick would have to be Superman, Batman, and Spiderman rolled into one to even compete with Sebastian for Emery's love. Nick already has three strikes in my book. Sebastian is a really good catch. Women sometimes want the unattainable while missing the boat on the one right in front of them. I believe Em is used to the friendship but what if someone else was interested in Sebastian so that Em' true feelings could emerge overshadowing her "crush" on Nick. Just a thought! I'm really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: Love Drama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 09:09 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Just caught up on this story and I love it!! Hopefully Operation Set Up Sebastian will help Em realize that her perfect man is standing right in front of her!! 

Can't wait to see what happens next!  :)

Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 07:08 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Bas and her sounds nice, unfortunately it may cause a lot of conflict with the family or NIck.

 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 06:24 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Em is in denial, no matter what she will feel like crab because of Nick's new girlfriend.  Why can't she develop feelings for Bas?  It wouldn't be settling as he is as hot as his brother.  I so love this story.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 05:07 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Em, Em, Em. *smh*

Will you really find the "right" woman for Bas? I want to see how it goes with the party. Will there be a woman whom Em thinks is for Bas? Or will she find something wrong with each prospect? Or will she set him up with someone only to discover that she doesn't like it one bit?  And what about Bas? There has to be some reason someone as fine and kind as him is without a love interest. something to make you go hmmm...

I tell you what, if Em don't want Bas like that, I'll take him off her hands. I don't believe in wasting a good man.

I look forward to your updates.



Author's Response:

Oh honey if I could write the perfect man into existence and he'd actually come to life, I'd never have to worry about money again. I'd write all day long. Green eyed cowboys, six foot plus cops, yummy dark haired guys with charm. I'm sure there would be plenty of women willing to take them off my hands.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 05:02 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Okay...I'm firmly entrenched on team Sebastian-Emery...why can't she see what's right in front of her face...Bas is secretly crushing...no, pining away for her...he's wants to be much more than 'just friends'...the subtleness is there...but it's there all the same...I hope I'm not reading too much into this...but I can't wait for the catalyst that will open both of their eyes...Gayle's right...all that fineness shouldn't go to waste...and who better to sample it than Em herself...

Hurry on back with more...loving this so far!!!

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 05:01 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I enjoyed the first three chapters and looking forward to what else you come up with.  I'm all for Em and Sebastian, hopefully she won't keep missing what's right in front of her.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 04:37 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Ohhhh..just caught on to this story and love it! And yeah, I was thinking the same thing as Gayle...hello?..Sebastain Emery!! Guess we'll see what Nick brings to the table, but I'm kinda on the Bas train at the moment.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 03:17 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Great story.  I really like it. 

Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 02:53 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Loved it! I haven't 'met' Nick yet but by what I've read so far it seems like Bas is it for Em. They seem in tuned with each other and she is too blind to see bc she is stuck on stupid with Nick. Does Nick even feel the same way?
Cant we get Bas's POV on Em?

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

Reviewer: 100%FAN Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 12:53 pm

Title: Chapter 3

em is so clueless. that's the operation she needs to work on, operation get a clue and get with bas herself!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 10:06 am

Title: Chapter 2

Okay...I've got to admit I'm rooting for Emery and Sebastian...haven't even met Nick yet...but there's just a special 'closeness' going on between Em and Bas...and I like it very much...they're the type of friends that will always have each other's backs and they can tell each other anything...and Sebastian is so perceptive about Em's moods...and so thoughtful and caring...and who doesn't like a man who can cook and is a hunk in his own right...like I said...right now...it's Bas by a mile for me...

Looking forward to more...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/05/11 11:11 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I accidently deleted someone's review as I was trying to respond to it! If that was you, I am so sorry and to answer your question, I haven't addressed if Nick knows about Em's feelings, but it is going to come out.

Reviewer: Jamey_St_Peters Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/11 06:55 am

Title: Chapter 2

Bas is awesome. Em's pretty cool too. I like this story. I can't wait to see more. 



Author's Response:

Working on more as we speak

Reviewer: mizgardenia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/11 03:48 am

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