more more more...please! XD
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/11 12:49 pm
Oh Yeah! I am going to enjoy this story very much. Please continue and that was torture with the cliffhanger there.
Please update again soon real soon loved the start.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/11 05:15 am
Damn, what did Al say? He's not a normal is he? I can't wait to read more, this story is awesome!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/11 03:55 am
How FOUL....LOL!!! Update soon...
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/11 02:04 am
Good start, please continue.
Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/05/11 01:02 am
Excellent start, just need a update.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 11:39 pm
Wow! That was a hardcore cliff hanger and i must say it has me wanting more.
I think it would be nice if you had a little more details to help my imagine the events unfloding
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 11:37 pm
Sounds interesting...me likey....more, more, please!!!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 11:25 pm
I like the start of this. I interested in reading the next chapter!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 11:18 pm
Me likey!!! more PLEASE!!! Don't stop there!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 10:15 pm
WTH!!!!! Where's the rest??? You can leave us hanging like that..
Ladies, please continue.. Thank you, (in my sweetest southern voice)
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 10:05 pm
keep writing it was so good then it ended D:
Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 10:03 pm
Nice teaser..I need more...it is very interesting..and pictures would be fabulous!!! Good job girls..
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 09:48 pm
cant wait for the next update!
Reviewer: darlene Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 09:11 pm
This sounds awesome! Please write more soon! Wooooooooooot! xD
Reviewer: FrenchieJonesy Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 08:39 pm
dun, dun, dun, you did good. I will be back for more.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 08:20 pm
hi its a good start but it seems that you are rushing when they are conversing i am not a xpert but i no what i like and how a story should flow take your time and show who is talking and who is thinking other than that i like what you are doing thanks.
Reviewer: leahcar Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 08:02 pm
It is a good start but would need more to get into it
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 07:41 pm
I'd say YES.
A note, Kristen might want to run for the hills. Alexander is not the one to mess with.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 07:39 pm
Hell yes we want more!!
Reviewer: Aiwen Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/11 07:28 pm