OMG! I just discovered this story and I am HOOKED. So good. How I wish you could continue.
Reviewer: vogue Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/07/16 09:21 pm
WOOOOOOWWW WOW WOW WO ! This is crazy good! So sad you haven't finished these books, they're outstanding!!
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/05/15 09:32 pm
Please tell me you're going to finish this amazing story
Reviewer: siobhan Signed [Report This]Date: 13/01/15 12:00 pm
really good keep up the work i want to see more chapters loving it so far
Reviewer: lo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/12/14 07:19 pm
Whoa....
Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed [Report This]Date: 04/03/14 05:07 pm
This story....is brilliant. There is so much emotion here. Please, I hope that you plan to finish it?
Reviewer: Dwnsouthchik Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/09/13 04:20 am
Son of a motherless goat!! Wooooooooh! If you could see me now! The sad thing is, someone out there has Jasmine for a sister.
Please, I beg of you! Finish this! I need to see Maya get her happy ending, while Jasmine gets hit by an 18 wheeler, after finding out she has gonorrhea!!
Author's Response:
I plan on finishing this. I am writing here and there; but I hope to get some chapters out soon. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed [Report This]Date: 30/06/13 09:50 pm
Please, please, please tell me that you intend to finish this story. Reading your author's note about the inspiration for this story almost made me cry. The reveal that Caleb and Maya knew each other was awesome. Jasmine sleeping with Jensen. The scene b/t Reed and Casey in her bedroom. Those are just a few. I really would love it if you continued this story. I think it's beautifully writte, and I need to know how it ends. Hope you finish it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I absolutely plan on finishing this story. I am working on :-).
Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/02/13 07:49 am
When will u uppload again? pls do it soon...
Author's Response:
I am working on updates. Hang in there, they are coming.
Reviewer: llilly Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/09/11 05:05 pm
Just had to read it gain, so good.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 11/07/11 12:59 am
This story has been on my mind since I started reading it last night and stayed up until I caught up on it. I am not fiening and hope to get an update soon.
I wanted to slap the taste out of Jazz's mouth like Maya plus add an ole skool beat down on top of that.
Jazz is definitely headed down the wrong path and needs to seek professional intervention.
Reed I feel is just as responsible if not more for what happened to Maya. I wonder did Caleb realize that she was a virgin and he must have had some recolection on what he was doing but I guess whatever drugs were mixed in his drink plus the added misery of Reed's friend having he gun and a bit crazy added in there prompted him to not resist effects the drugs were having on him.
WTF is wrong with Reed and why can't he get his shyte together what demons are he trying to run from. Poor Casey is in love with this idiot and can't seem to move on with a what seems to be a good guy and sacrified her family and future plans for his trifling no good behind.
Nina love her she a fiesty lil bit of hispanic heat and was trying to put Caleb 6ft under.
I love "Pop" Ernest he sounds like a decent individual that did not know how to get over his grief enough to continue having a reign on his sons and deal with his wife's death together but that happens sometime and choices that may not have been in their best interest but he did the best that he could with what he had to work with.
I hope that Maya recovery from the accident is speedy and Dylan pulls thru okay. She has gone thru so much.
Okay I think I have rambled on enough.
Thank you again for sharing. Happpy writing and I hope to see another update soon cause you have a sista hooked.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 08/07/11 12:16 am
Damn! Jensen effed up but Jasmine is a coniving hateful wench/bitch out to hurt her sister apparently any way she can and I think also that Jensen did not have that much to drink but his boy X may have slipped him a little som-som in his drink that he pushed in his hand.
Durn!
Thanks from sharing
Happy writing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 07/07/11 04:12 pm
Great start I wonder what happened between Caleb and Maya to make her scream like that and then black out then him to turn around and vomit after the realizing who she is.
Can't wait to read more thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 07/07/11 01:52 pm
I am glad Maya will not marry Jensen definitely for sure after Stanky Jasmine confess it all! Thanks for the update, looking to read more of this story.
Reviewer: none Signed [Report This]Date: 07/07/11 07:49 am
That was GREAT, and its about TIME that Maya told Jasmine just what kinda woman that she is, and Maya is 100% right, Jazz only slept with Jensen b/c she is miserable and you know that "Misery Loves Company"... Jasmine needs help BIG TIME or else she is going to meet her MAKER,
Maya asking for the RENT was PRICELESS LMBO... if she doesn't pay it Maya, take her to JUDGE JUDY.
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/07/11 02:15 am
That Jasmine is a heartless bitch. Good Maya got rid of her and that spineless bastard I am sure that slut had something to do with poor Maya getting raped. Thanks fo a great update. Please update soon.
Reviewer: brenda Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 09:27 pm
Jasmine is horrible, but her day will come.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 02:52 pm
Ok, this story rocks!!! I love the characters<3 Update A.S.A.P
Reviewer: Singinangel12 Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/07/11 09:35 am
great chapter!
Reviewer: san Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 09:03 am
Feel so sorry for Maya. Glad she let Jensen and Jazz have a reality check especially Jazz. How stupid could Jensen have been to sleep with a bimbo before his marriage and think it was gonna be ok.
I also blame Xavier bigtime as he knew what was up and encouraged Jensen to be the fool. No true friend would have encourage him to do something like that.
Jensen deserves all the heartache and pain he could get and I hope Maya doesn't let him back into her life easily. Maybe she needs a new guy to focus her attentions on, someone decent.
That whole situation is a bitter pill to swallow and its just a mess.You know, if the shoe was on the other foot, I'm sure Jensen too would not have been so forgiving.
[Report This]Date: 01/07/11 07:02 am
Oh wow what and awesome story. Please update soon!
Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 06:40 am
Jensen is a very weak "man"...and though she probably doesn't realize it now...Maya has had a very fortunate escape...any man who gives into the needs of his flesh over a cheap piece of arse...especially if said arse belongs to his fiancee's sister's is lower than a snake's belly...I don't have any sympathy for him or his weak apologies...funny, his guilty conscience didn't come into play when he was banging Jasmine's brains out six ways to Sunday...yep, weak is the apropro term for him...and Maya would be a fool to ever trust someone like him with her heart and future again...I know it's painful now...but I hope she has the sense to choose herself...she's worth more than that...
Now as for Miss Jasmine...is this trick for real...she basically takes a sledgehammer to her sister's life and sees it some kind of sick "joke"...she's an evil, vindictive evil bitch...yeah, I said it...does she serously think that violating her sister's trust is about some man...what about that "sister code" that we as women should live by...the one person in your life that loves you unconditionally no matter how twisted and rotten to the core you are...and you repay her love like this...are you kidding me, Jasmine...I'm so glad that Maya grew a backbone and stopped viewing this witch through rose-tinted glasses...Jasmine is a cancer in her life that needs to be exorcised...I jumped for joy when she threw that cheap trick out of her rear...sometimes family is your own worst enemy...good riddance to bad rubbish...
Love this story and the exploration of these characters...you've crafted quite an engrossing tale...can't wait for more...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 05:50 am
this was so emotional. I wonder if they canmove past this, will she be able to forgive. Granted he was drugged, but in the end it is still rape. Why did her sister take there in the first place?
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 05:07 am
Caleb and her have a history and it doesn't look good.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 04:52 am
Bravo to Maya for finally acknowledging how trifling Jasmine is and doing something about it! And not to excuse her actions, but Jasmine made a very good point: it was just a little to easy for Jenson to cave in to her shaking her ass in his face. If he did it multiple times in one night, what's to stop him from caving at future temptations? Once a line is crossed the next time is that much easier...
Thanks for the update; looking forward to more of this story!
Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 04:19 am