Whoa....
Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed
[Report This]Date: 04/03/14 05:07 pm
Great start I wonder what happened between Caleb and Maya to make her scream like that and then black out then him to turn around and vomit after the realizing who she is.
Can't wait to read more thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 07/07/11 01:52 pm
Caleb and her have a history and it doesn't look good.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 04:52 am
I see lots of drama coming soon. Yay!
Reviewer: Peach Martini Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/05/11 10:44 pm
Okay...I don't know what to think about Maya and Caleb's obviously shared past...did he rape her or something while in his drug-alcohol induced state...is he the father of her Dylan...why would she/he react that way...ye goodness...if this is true...this is going to be one hell of a journey...hope Maya and the baby are okay...but I feel the drama has just started...
Hurry on back with more...I need more...great beginning...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 14/05/11 05:45 pm
LOoooooooooove it! Caleb didn't something horrible to her. Redemption time.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: 14/05/11 09:03 am
Wow, intense. PLease continue with this story. I like what I have read so far.
Reviewer: Caligirl65 Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 10:46 am
Wow, what a start, I can't wait to find out how Caleb and Maya know eachother.
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/05/11 07:05 am
They know each other??? Wow??? I like this. Is the baby's Caleb's? Can't wait.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 05:55 am
What the hell did he do to her that has her so frightened??? !!! I can't wait to hear this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Stay tuned more to come.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 04:16 am
damn, what did that boy do?! excellent start!
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting. More to come and we'll learn what Caleb did.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 03:53 am
Oh, wow. You have definitely made an impact with this opening chapter. I am intrigued by the history that clearly exists between Maya and Caleb. I truly think that this has the makings for a great story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and commenting. Updates on the way.
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 03:45 am
Excellent!!! Caleb seems like good people and I love his father he's hilarious.
Author's Response:
:-) Keep watching for updates.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 03:22 am
Oh, please don't tell me he raped her! Good start. Can't wait until the next update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting. More to come.
Reviewer: Gloria Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 03:07 am
Okay that was great you have to hurried and post the next chapter and soon. I will be stalking. What the heck happen between Caleb and Maya and I am thinking the worse. I hope it is not. Oh my goodness.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Updates will be up soon.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 02:34 am
Truly intreged I want to know what went on between them and is he the father of the baby?
Author's Response:
:-) you'll just have to read and see. Thanks for reading anc commenting.
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 01:33 am