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Title: Chapter 4-Maya

Jasmine is horrible, but her day will come.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/07/11 02:52 pm

Title: Chapter 4-Maya

Wow...it's rare that a glimpse of a character's background leaves me with more questions than answers...I gather that Maya has had a very difficult life from all accounts but refuses to let her circumstance hinder her from making a better life for herself...and IMHO, Jasmine is an awful person...can't find one redeeming quality about her...her selfishness is appalling...yet in a strange way...I truly believe she loves her sister as much as she loves taunting her...also think she has Jensen's number...just don't like the way she's going about exposing him...and speaking of Jensen...what happened to him...did he leave Maya when he found out about her pregnancy...did she tell him about the rape...did he blame her for 'getting herself in trouble'...I got the distinct impression from the prologue that it was just Maya and Baby Dylan against the world with her only support coming from her friend, Nina...I also believe it was Jasmine's selfishness that perhaps led to the predicament Maya now finds herself in...she was supposed to be the paid "date" for those three horny losers and somehow poor Maya got caught up in that and paid the price...very interesting indeed...off to read Caleb's backstory...hopefully it will give me more insight into what kind of person he truly is because right now I'm on the fence with him...I need a reason to root for his character...Maya...not so much...she has a good, loving trusting heart that others seem to take delight in stomping on...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 03:54 am

Title: Chapter 4-Maya

I already hate Jasmine, I wish someone would run over!!!  That little girl makes my teeth itch!!!  Just kill her!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 03:13 am

Title: Chapter 4-Maya

This was great that you gave Maya back story.  It really showed her in a different light.  The life that she grew up in but it still kept her sweet and innocent.  Jazz is a pill and the chapter said all the adjective.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 01:21 am

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