This story has so much potential to be so tragically beautiful. I'm already into it and can't wait for the next update. You are very talented. Hope to see a My Brother's Keeper update soon as well.

Arghhh...I lost my second review...I had to really think before I could leave a review...you got me really thinking...and girl, that's a good thing...

So Caleb idolizes his older brother, Reed...I guess he (Reed) at one time would be someone to emulate especially for his younger impressionable little brother...but Reed's path has led to nothing but trouble for Caleb...the biggest thing I get is that there is something seriously wrong in this family...none have them have properly dealt with or grieved their mother's/wife's suicide...a very traumatic experience that has the tendency to tear family's apart...and that's exactly what it did to this family...all of them have chosen avoidance as a coping mechanism...Ernest by becoming distant from his sons and not being an active participant in his son's lives...and Reed...I could write a book on him...not only did he lead his little brother astray...he's slowly destroying Casey (I'm assuming is his true love but I hesitate to call her that because IMHO Reed doesn't love Reed so how can he truly love another healthily when he can't/won't deal with himself) and hurting his daughter, Reece...I truly believe once one becomes a parent it is a given that you try to be the best person you can be if not for yourself...then for your child...he hasn't done that...and his defeatist attitude is truly maddening....glad Casey had the sense to remove herself and their daughter from his destructiveness before it affected Reece more adversely than it already has...and Caleb...with what he did to Maya...I know she wasn't someone he proported to love...just a stranger...a cheap 'piece of arse'...but he couldn't even treat her with common human decency...he chose to violate her body to 'save' her from a fate 'worse' than rape...are you kidding me...and in the process he has unwittingly brought another innocent life into the mix...what a mess...it will be truly fascinating how you navigate the twists and turns in this tale...but I know I can't wait to read about it...and thanks so much for the updates...much appreciated!!!

That was really good, but I really  want Reed to wake up an smell the coffee.   

Wow those brothers been through some stuff,  I am surprise that after Caleb got out of jail and vow never to return.  I guess he got caught up in Reed mess and that cause him to get caught in violent.  Gotta go read the begining a gain.  Girl this is good. continue please.