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Title: Chapter 7-My Loves, my loss

Damn! Jensen effed up but Jasmine is a coniving hateful wench/bitch out to hurt her sister apparently any way she can and I think also that Jensen did not have that much to drink but his boy X may have slipped him a little som-som in his drink that he pushed in his hand.

Durn!

Thanks from sharing

Happy writing

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 04:12 pm
Title: Chapter 7-My Loves, my loss

OMG, I kinda figured that Jasmine was "Mocha" wow, she is nothing but a SELFISH BRAT, she only cares about Jasmine and no one else, and Jensen is no better, and he needs to tell Maya b4 Jasmine does, and he better not Blame it on the Booze.

It seems to me that both Caleb and Maya have very selfish siblings, and they need to LET THEM GO b/c they are toxic.

I can't wait to see how Caleb and Maya find happiness.

 Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/06/11 09:39 pm
Title: Chapter 7-My Loves, my loss

Just read the last few chapters and alls I can say is DAMN!!! You are really penning an engrossing tale.

Caleb and Maya have similar issues in their lives. They both have siblings that are TOXIC. Jasmine hates Maya. Reed, I'm not so sure, but he does not have his little brother's best interest at heart.

I knew it was going to be Jasmine at the party. She did this deliberately, all to be able to rub Maya's nose in it that she screwed her sister's fiancee. I'm sorry, but I would be done after this, well, AFTER I. beat. that. ass. Maya is too nice for her own good. She needs to cut Jasmine loose. Just because someone is FAMILY doesn't mean you have to be around them and take the crap they dish out.

At least Caleb seems to have an inkling that being around Reed might not be good for him. But will he be able to distance himself? Either you'll pull him or he'll pull you.

This is such a good story and you're doing an excellent job of drawing us into the lives of these characters.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 11:14 am
Title: Chapter 7-My Loves, my loss

I knew it...and I called it right...Jasmine is a skank of the highest order and Jensen...there are just no words...loved the air of mystery building up to the climax (no pun intended)...kinda of figured it out almost halfway through Chapter 7...secrets abound...wonder who tells Maya first...I take what I said back about Jasmine loving her sister in her own way...because with sisters like her....well, you know the rest...

So Caleb has a hidden talent...the woodworking came as a surprise...sad really that his hard fought for sobriety didn't last long and will have lasting reprecussions...this is getting very good...can't wait to read the next update...enjoying this story so much...

 Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 08:44 am
Title: Chapter 7-My Loves, my loss

Your story is really good!. Both Maya and Caleb are surronded by bad people. Family can be very difficult to deal with. Sometimes we have to let family go in order to protect ourselves. Even though it may hurt Caleb and Maya need to let go.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 01:35 am
Title: Chapter 7-My Loves, my loss

I'm at a loss for words!! Please, please continue soon!!

 Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/06/11 08:17 pm
Title: Chapter 7-My Loves, my loss

oh shit. This was good! Please update SOOOON!!!

 Reviewer: brenda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/06/11 06:01 pm
Title: Chapter 7-My Loves, my loss

Jensen disappointed me BIGTIME!!! He messed up bad listening to X!!! Why would X encourage him when he knew what might happen with Jensen being so weak willed. He obviously isn't ready to be committed to Maya. He needs to let her know the truth and let the chips fall where they may or Jasmine will come out of the woodworks and spill the beans. Why would she do that knowing that he's maya's fiance anyway??!! This whole situation is messed up!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/11 06:59 am
Title: Chapter 7-My Loves, my loss

Jensen disappointed me BIGTIME!!! He messed up bad listening to X!!! Why would X encourage him when he knew what might happen with Jensen being so weak willed. He obviously isn't ready to be committed to Maya. He needs to let her know the truth and let the chips fall where they may or Jasmine will come out of the woodworks and spill the beans. Why would she do that knowing that he's maya's fiance anyway??!! This whole situation is messed up!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/11 06:58 am
Title: Chapter 7-My Loves, my loss

Jasmine is such a tool.  I kinda figure that she was the one that was the stripper.  She probably can't wait to throw it in Maya's face.  Wow so much happen to Maya in such a span of time.  She wants what Maya have because she think Maya doesnt deserve it.  Jensen Jenson no words.

 Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/11 01:23 am
Title: Chapter 7-My Loves, my loss

OMG thats the olny thing i can say!!!!

really well written... Thanks for uploadning 4 chapers...I hope u will upload again

 Reviewer: D Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 11:57 pm
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