OMG! I just discovered this story and I am HOOKED. So good. How I wish you could continue.

really good keep up the work i want to see more chapters loving it so far

Please, please, please tell me that you intend to finish this story. Reading your author's note about the inspiration for this story almost made me cry. The reveal that Caleb and Maya knew each other was awesome. Jasmine sleeping with Jensen. The scene b/t Reed and Casey in her bedroom. Those are just a few. I really would love it if you continued this story. I think it's beautifully writte, and I need to know how it ends. Hope you finish it.

That was GREAT, and its about TIME that Maya told Jasmine just what kinda woman that she is, and Maya is 100% right, Jazz only slept with Jensen b/c she is miserable and you know that "Misery Loves Company"... Jasmine needs help BIG TIME or else she is going to meet her MAKER,

Maya asking for the RENT was PRICELESS LMBO... if she doesn't pay it Maya, take her to JUDGE JUDY.

great chapter!

Jensen is a very weak "man"...and though she probably doesn't realize it now...Maya has had a very fortunate escape...any man who gives into the needs of his flesh over a cheap piece of arse...especially if said arse belongs to his fiancee's sister's is lower than a snake's belly...I don't have any sympathy for him or his weak apologies...funny, his guilty conscience didn't come into play when he was banging Jasmine's brains out six ways to Sunday...yep, weak is the apropro term for him...and Maya would be a fool to ever trust someone like him with her heart and future again...I know it's painful now...but I hope she has the sense to choose herself...she's worth more than that...

Now as for Miss Jasmine...is this trick for real...she basically takes a sledgehammer to her sister's life and sees it some kind of sick "joke"...she's an evil, vindictive evil bitch...yeah, I said it...does she serously think that violating her sister's trust is about some man...what about that "sister code" that we as women should live by...the one person in your life that loves you unconditionally no matter how twisted and rotten to the core you are...and you repay her love like this...are you kidding me, Jasmine...I'm so glad that Maya grew a backbone and stopped viewing this witch through rose-tinted glasses...Jasmine is a cancer in her life that needs to be exorcised...I jumped for joy when she threw that cheap trick out of her rear...sometimes family is your own worst enemy...good riddance to bad rubbish...

Love this story and the exploration of these characters...you've crafted quite an engrossing tale...can't wait for more...

Omg! That was good. Lol at Maya reminding Jazz she owed rent (twice) while putting her out. Methinks Jensen was protesting too much on hating Jasmine since he couldn't seem to stop screwing her, sister and fiance are both super slimey snakes-in-the-grass. I loved that Maya stood her ground. If only Star was that strong. Are you going back to the present soon?

wow. that was truly explosive and the argument was worthy of the situation at hand. great job! next up? . . . .

Jasmine is a piece of work. I'm happy Maya kicked her behind out!

Maya needs to think about herself first and work out her life.

Jensen is a loser and doesn't deserve Maya.

Oh wow I am proud of Maya and what she did by standing up to Jasmine she deserve that.  Jensen I have no words for him.  I was surprise that his parents really liked Maya.  I thought he only slept with her once but continually and wanted his father to fix it.  Wow that low. 

After that being said and how the story started I dont know how she is only to get passed what happened to her and let Caleb in wow.