OMG!!!!  This chapter was the B-O-M-B!!!! Jasmine, trifling ass set Maya up to get raped.. She may not have expected them to rape her but she knew that she would be thought of as a stripper and the men would expect her to put out..

I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

very good

wow. that was truly explosive and the argument was worthy of the situation at hand. great job! next up? . . . .

Jasmine is a piece of work. I'm happy Maya kicked her behind out!

Maya needs to think about herself first and work out her life.

Jensen is a loser and doesn't deserve Maya.

Oh wow I am proud of Maya and what she did by standing up to Jasmine she deserve that.  Jensen I have no words for him.  I was surprise that his parents really liked Maya.  I thought he only slept with her once but continually and wanted his father to fix it.  Wow that low. 

After that being said and how the story started I dont know how she is only to get passed what happened to her and let Caleb in wow.

I just found this story and all I can say is WOW!!!!!!

This story is SO good!

Jasmine is so selfish and I hope Maya realizes that she needs to cut her out of her life. Sister or not.

Jensen should be ashamed of himself. But, it's better that Maya find out about the kind of person he is before they get married.

Caleb seems like he is truly trying to make a better life for himself. He needs to stay away from his brother, he's not gonna change anytime soon. 

Casey needs to stop letting Reed have control over her life. I hope she realizes that she needs to move on from Reed because he is an unhealthy part of her life.

Thanks for the AMAZING story. Please update again soon!

Poor Casey. She does need to move on, but she shouldn't marry Brian if she's not in love with him. At least not yet. How would that work in the long run? Would she begin to love him the way he deserves? Or would she still pine after Reed?

Reed does not seem to be ready to REALLY get his life together. Caleb gace her some sound advice and she needs to heed it.  Reed is reacting selfishly right now. And Casey has put her emotional life on hold. That's no way to live your life.

Enjoyed the update. Thank you.

Interesting update. Whats Reed up to??? Is about to committ to change and go back to rehab for true???!! He needs to be serious before he loses Casey.

Wow, he bared his soul to Casey only to leave her before she woke!!  What an ahole!!!  She deserves better, he loves drugs and ho's more than he loves her and their daughter.  I hope that he gets it together for himself, becasue is no good to them the way that he is.  Great update!!!

OMG, I kinda figured that Jasmine was "Mocha" wow, she is nothing but a SELFISH BRAT, she only cares about Jasmine and no one else, and Jensen is no better, and he needs to tell Maya b4 Jasmine does, and he better not Blame it on the Booze.

It seems to me that both Caleb and Maya have very selfish siblings, and they need to LET THEM GO b/c they are toxic.

I can't wait to see how Caleb and Maya find happiness.

I knew it...and I called it right...Jasmine is a skank of the highest order and Jensen...there are just no words...loved the air of mystery building up to the climax (no pun intended)...kinda of figured it out almost halfway through Chapter 7...secrets abound...wonder who tells Maya first...I take what I said back about Jasmine loving her sister in her own way...because with sisters like her....well, you know the rest...

So Caleb has a hidden talent...the woodworking came as a surprise...sad really that his hard fought for sobriety didn't last long and will have lasting reprecussions...this is getting very good...can't wait to read the next update...enjoying this story so much...

Your story is really good!. Both Maya and Caleb are surronded by bad people. Family can be very difficult to deal with. Sometimes we have to let family go in order to protect ourselves. Even though it may hurt Caleb and Maya need to let go.

oh shit. This was good! Please update SOOOON!!!