Jensen disappointed me BIGTIME!!! He messed up bad listening to X!!! Why would X encourage him when he knew what might happen with Jensen being so weak willed. He obviously isn't ready to be committed to Maya. He needs to let her know the truth and let the chips fall where they may or Jasmine will come out of the woodworks and spill the beans. Why would she do that knowing that he's maya's fiance anyway??!! This whole situation is messed up!!

Even though Caleb had the best intentions Reed is still a pull or tempatation back into his old life.  If he really want to stay clean and on the staright he have to cut Reed off. 

Maya has so much plan and had such a hard life trying to make better.

This story has so much potential to be so tragically beautiful. I'm already into it and can't wait for the next update. You are very talented. Hope to see a My Brother's Keeper update soon as well.

Arghhh...I lost my second review...I had to really think before I could leave a review...you got me really thinking...and girl, that's a good thing...

So Caleb idolizes his older brother, Reed...I guess he (Reed) at one time would be someone to emulate especially for his younger impressionable little brother...but Reed's path has led to nothing but trouble for Caleb...the biggest thing I get is that there is something seriously wrong in this family...none have them have properly dealt with or grieved their mother's/wife's suicide...a very traumatic experience that has the tendency to tear family's apart...and that's exactly what it did to this family...all of them have chosen avoidance as a coping mechanism...Ernest by becoming distant from his sons and not being an active participant in his son's lives...and Reed...I could write a book on him...not only did he lead his little brother astray...he's slowly destroying Casey (I'm assuming is his true love but I hesitate to call her that because IMHO Reed doesn't love Reed so how can he truly love another healthily when he can't/won't deal with himself) and hurting his daughter, Reece...I truly believe once one becomes a parent it is a given that you try to be the best person you can be if not for yourself...then for your child...he hasn't done that...and his defeatist attitude is truly maddening....glad Casey had the sense to remove herself and their daughter from his destructiveness before it affected Reece more adversely than it already has...and Caleb...with what he did to Maya...I know she wasn't someone he proported to love...just a stranger...a cheap 'piece of arse'...but he couldn't even treat her with common human decency...he chose to violate her body to 'save' her from a fate 'worse' than rape...are you kidding me...and in the process he has unwittingly brought another innocent life into the mix...what a mess...it will be truly fascinating how you navigate the twists and turns in this tale...but I know I can't wait to read about it...and thanks so much for the updates...much appreciated!!!

Wow...it's rare that a glimpse of a character's background leaves me with more questions than answers...I gather that Maya has had a very difficult life from all accounts but refuses to let her circumstance hinder her from making a better life for herself...and IMHO, Jasmine is an awful person...can't find one redeeming quality about her...her selfishness is appalling...yet in a strange way...I truly believe she loves her sister as much as she loves taunting her...also think she has Jensen's number...just don't like the way she's going about exposing him...and speaking of Jensen...what happened to him...did he leave Maya when he found out about her pregnancy...did she tell him about the rape...did he blame her for 'getting herself in trouble'...I got the distinct impression from the prologue that it was just Maya and Baby Dylan against the world with her only support coming from her friend, Nina...I also believe it was Jasmine's selfishness that perhaps led to the predicament Maya now finds herself in...she was supposed to be the paid "date" for those three horny losers and somehow poor Maya got caught up in that and paid the price...very interesting indeed...off to read Caleb's backstory...hopefully it will give me more insight into what kind of person he truly is because right now I'm on the fence with him...I need a reason to root for his character...Maya...not so much...she has a good, loving trusting heart that others seem to take delight in stomping on...

That was really good, but I really  want Reed to wake up an smell the coffee.   

Wow those brothers been through some stuff,  I am surprise that after Caleb got out of jail and vow never to return.  I guess he got caught up in Reed mess and that cause him to get caught in violent.  Gotta go read the begining a gain.  Girl this is good. continue please.

Loved it

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING

Wow!!! Please I am curious to see how these two people find love. Good writing, I Love your other stories too. please update :-) them too.

Excellent writing, very emotional and heartfelt.  Please continue.

Oh hell!!! He raped her???!!! Oh nooo....this is gonna be a tough one. No wonder Maya tried to kill his ass!! Can't wait to see how you develop this story. but I sort of like it so far.

Wow I was thinking the worse and it was the worst.  I would like to see the forgivenes and how it happened.  Looking forward to read more.