This story is life, having experienced something alike in my youth, I am not offended. I only hope one takes care and thinks before they act. Both parties. Great chapter and I will continue to read and see how the forgiveness came about. Forgiveness is a wonderful gift created by God.
Bless you for writing a true story!
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: 17/05/11 01:32 am
while this is indeed a tough subject matter, I'm hoping Caleb will be able to redeem himself and make amends to Maya/ baby Dylan....I guess what I am saying is please keep writing this story
Reviewer: elleon sivad Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/05/11 12:56 am
So it is a true story, I'm very happy that you want to share it with us. I would really like to know how she could go from hating and being afraid of him to forgive and love him.And I'm really glad that both him and his father desided to turn him in. This must be a really good story and I really look forward to reading the whole story.
Hope to se an uppdate soon
Reviewer: lacky Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/05/11 11:47 pm
OMG that was DEEP, I had no idea that Caleb had assulted Maya, WOW, and his brother Reed is a PUNK for slipping drugs in his drink, he and is JACKASS friend Tony need to go down as well... I wonder where that PUNK Reed is anyways.
I do hope that Dylan pulls though this.... and I wonder how Maya and Caleb get past all of this and find happiness.
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]Date: 16/05/11 11:39 pm
Caleb rapped her to save from his brother and that nutcase Tony!! Wow, how is this going to work out ? How I am going to get my HEA? Oh woe is me!!!! Great chapter, I loved how you interspered the past with the present. Most excellent!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 16/05/11 11:29 pm
I see lots of drama coming soon. Yay!
Reviewer: Peach Martini Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/05/11 10:44 pm
Okay...I don't know what to think about Maya and Caleb's obviously shared past...did he rape her or something while in his drug-alcohol induced state...is he the father of her Dylan...why would she/he react that way...ye goodness...if this is true...this is going to be one hell of a journey...hope Maya and the baby are okay...but I feel the drama has just started...
Hurry on back with more...I need more...great beginning...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 14/05/11 05:45 pm
LOoooooooooove it! Caleb didn't something horrible to her. Redemption time.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: 14/05/11 09:03 am
love the start cant wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: mama t Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/05/11 05:50 am
Wow, intense. PLease continue with this story. I like what I have read so far.
Reviewer: Caligirl65 Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 10:46 am
Wow, what a start, I can't wait to find out how Caleb and Maya know eachother.
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/05/11 07:05 am
They know each other??? Wow??? I like this. Is the baby's Caleb's? Can't wait.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 05:55 am
What the hell did he do to her that has her so frightened??? !!! I can't wait to hear this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Stay tuned more to come.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 04:16 am
damn, what did that boy do?! excellent start!
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting. More to come and we'll learn what Caleb did.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 03:53 am
Oh, wow. You have definitely made an impact with this opening chapter. I am intrigued by the history that clearly exists between Maya and Caleb. I truly think that this has the makings for a great story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and commenting. Updates on the way.
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 03:45 am
Excellent!!! Caleb seems like good people and I love his father he's hilarious.
Author's Response:
:-) Keep watching for updates.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 03:22 am
Oh, please don't tell me he raped her! Good start. Can't wait until the next update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting. More to come.
Reviewer: Gloria Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 03:07 am
Okay that was great you have to hurried and post the next chapter and soon. I will be stalking. What the heck happen between Caleb and Maya and I am thinking the worse. I hope it is not. Oh my goodness.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Updates will be up soon.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 02:34 am
Truly intreged I want to know what went on between them and is he the father of the baby?
Author's Response:
:-) you'll just have to read and see. Thanks for reading anc commenting.
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 01:33 am
I can't wait for this story to begin, the men in story are hot!! Except for Michael, but I love his voice.
Author's Response:
lolo...a young Michael is gorgeous....those eyes are fire!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/11 12:45 am