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Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

I loved the face off between Maks and Ray J.  I could really picture Ray being protective and  Maks  respecting it but holding his ground. I loved  from one player to another, don't disrespect my sister.  I laughed at Ray J telling Maks that he knows what"s going on with  Brandy and him because he's a dude.   I also laughed when Ray J was telling Maks not to have chicks on the side.  You know, the standard.  Hilarious

 Reviewer: Carolyn Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/09/12 08:19 am
Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

You're doing pretty good for a first timer.  I looking forward to  more chapters.

 Reviewer: googirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/12 01:23 am
Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

so i know this is like a year late, but can you update this please? you're such a good writer and you capture every character perfectly. please update soon :)

 Reviewer: Mia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/09/12 04:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

I really enjoy this story! Is there gonna be more??? :)

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/02/12 09:39 am
Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

This story is soooo good and very well written.....please continue, really like the way its going....

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/12/11 10:39 pm
Title: Chapter 8:The Visitor

Please, hurry with the next chapter! LOL!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/11/11 09:45 pm
Title: Chapter 8:The Visitor

UGH where is Maks when u need him???



Author's Response:

I know, right? He might need reinforcements...

 Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/09/11 08:48 am
Title: Chapter 8:The Visitor

I can't believe Dennis, man I hope Brandy tell Maks everything.With friends like that who need enemies.Great job I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

 Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/09/11 04:21 am
Title: Chapter 8:The Visitor

Dennis and Erin may be in for a few surprises of their own.

 Reviewer: Pen to Paper Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/09/11 03:15 am
Title: Chapter 8:The Visitor

Brandy had better tell Maks about his supposed friend Dennis.  He can't be trusted.  I can't believe that he disrepected Brandy like by showing up to her house drunk.  That was all kinds of wrong, but Dennis and Erin seem to have that in common.  I can't wait to read more.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/09/11 02:19 am
Title: Chapter 7: The Buildup

Oh geez Dennis is hitting on Brandy and Erin is lying on Maks....this bitch! Can't wait to read what happens next!!



Author's Response:

Thanks hon! I hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint.

 Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/09/11 12:21 am
Title: Chapter 7: The Buildup

Wow!!Another Brandmc fanfic. I like this one too. And as for Dennis and Erin, they are such losers, it's a shame they even exist.  I just hope Dennis don't do anything to Brandy in his drunken state. So please write some more, the buildup is gonna hit the fan lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support. I'll admit I struggled with this chapter and the change it brings in the story, but where the pen tells me where to go, that's where I go. Dennis' actions may actually bring Brandy and Maks together. I promise that the payoff for the buildup will be HUGE! Keep giving me feedback. It keeps me motivated.

 Reviewer: Fran Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/09/11 05:39 pm
Title: Chapter 7: The Buildup

I really got all addicted to this story when my ass was supposed to be cleaning my triflin' children's room. LOL. Keep it going!



Author's Response:

Yes! Read my fic! Triflin -child mess can wait! Glad you liked it!

 Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 09:02 pm
Title: Chapter 5: The Sad Goodbye

When can I get an update on this story?



Author's Response:

I'm not sure. I'm at a bit of a crossroads in the story. Trying to make sense of the direction I took it in. Hopefully in the next few weeks. Sorry for the delay. Glad you're enjoying it.

 Reviewer: Danni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/06/11 02:49 pm
Title: Chapter 5: The Sad Goodbye

Oh the drama!!!!! I love this! I have to read more and see what'll happen!



Author's Response:

Please do. Thanks for reading!

 Reviewer: Shae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/06/11 07:40 am
Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Thanks everyone!  I appreciate the support! Jadadominique, its coming. Its coming. LOL.

 Reviewer: Pen to Paper Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 09:59 pm
Title: Chapter 2: The Party

Me likey!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/11 07:32 am
Title: Chapter 5: The Sad Goodbye

I'm enjoying your story. Maks and Brandy are perfect together. I hope Erin and Dennis don't totally mess up their relationship.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I hope they can survive. You never know in love world...

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/11 05:38 am
Title: Chapter 5: The Sad Goodbye

i love this story its going fast but good but erin and dennis need to be locked up asap keep it coming more love making please



Author's Response:

Yeah, they should. I probably can talk to someone who knows someone about making the lovemaking thing happen. LOL.

 Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 08:44 pm
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