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Title: The Alpha

All kinds of goodies in this chappie!!

Love Alpha Lex..when he said the thing about the shoe I spit out my gum..I mean I hollared like the country girl I am !! I think Grant's sickening behind got the message finally!!

Eva..sneeky but cool...anyway it goes Reese has her number now!!

Back to all that is sexy Lex...yeah baby!!! I love you!! Ok that made my heart sing!!

I love them and I love their love story..I will be sad to see it end!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Nene...I was totally in the zone working on the last two updates for this one...glad you guys liked the lines...Lex has been kinda whiny but he finally kicked it into gear and put it down so it would forever and always be understood

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/11 03:02 am

Title: The Alpha

I like that Lex isn't going to let anyone come between them. The elevator sex was hot! I'm sorry it is coming to an end.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/07/11 03:00 am

Title: The Alpha

OMG THAT WAS HAWWWWWWWWWWTTT! I am burning up. LOL

I don't wanna it to end! I am going to miss these characters.

I was rolling with this line: "My concern for Reese is the only thing keeping me from putting my foot so far up your ass that you can taste the shit of the cow that provided the leather, stay away from her."  

Awesome update, TheSouthernScribe!



Author's Response:

Thank darling. Glad you liked it. Ahhhhhh y'all make me so tender with your love for these babies.

Reviewer: 100%FAN Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/11 02:28 am

Title: The Alpha

Loved the update. Glad they put their respective exes in the box.

Author's Response:

definitely baha...definitely

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/11 01:06 am

Title: The Alpha

Great update.

Glad they got that all squared away.



Author's Response:

Thanks Moni

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/11 12:58 am

Title: The Alpha

::deep breath::

first, that was hawt. i got my Alpha Lex and Reese called out Eva something fierce.

two, WHAT IN THE HELL DO YOU MEAN THERE'S ONLY ONE MORE CHAPTER???!!!!



Author's Response:

Are you yelling at me in capital letters...woman you better be glad you posted all those chapters of ACU I'm about to go read

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/11 12:20 am

Title: The Alpha

I love reese and lex. Love the elevator sex.



Author's Response:

Elevator sex is a good thing...a very good thing...so is elevator foreplay...just saying

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 10:48 pm

Title: The Alpha

Damn! It's just something about an Alpha man that claims his territory and put another male in check now I'm not saying Grant is an Alpha cause he is a snide lil punk ass to me but my man Lex put his ass in check without having to put his foot so far up his ass that he will taste the shyte of the cow they were made with I liked that one....LOL!

I so wonder what Eva's ass is up to she is just stinky to death.

Damn! The elevator loving was hot to death and he professed his love for her for the 1st time.  I wonder will Resse be aware enough to hear what he said but then he was looking her dead in her eyes when he said it. 

Great update as always.

Thank you as always for sharing.

Waiting 4 the next update.

Happy writing.



Author's Response:

Ahhhh...thanks Thundakat

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 09:23 pm

Title: The Alpha

Woo wee! As sexy as that was, I can't help but wonder if they didn't remember that there are security cameras in elevators of such buildings. I bet the night security team will love watching that scene over and over!



Author's Response:

Funny you should mention that...there will be a little note about that in the next update

Reviewer: islandlass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 08:16 pm

Title: The Alpha

That was awesome!!  What do you mean that this wonderful story is over after the next chapter?   Say it isn't so?  I need more, I need to see a chapter where Grant and Eva get shanked!!



Author's Response:

PM you are killing me. Not shanked...can we pour hot grits on them?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 08:13 pm

Title: Case of the Ex

Nice update. 

Now is Lex ex-wife for real.

Grant is a word I wont say now.  He is not to be trusted.  I hope Lex knows this as well as Reese.

Thank You!

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 06:39 pm

Title: Reese and Friends and Enemies...

Wow; what an intro...Reese needs to hurry back to Lex because we don't want a replay of the neighbor incident...lol...Grant really is a creepy one.

Too funny that Eva is trying to hit on Reese...that's an interesting twist...

I really don't trust her though; I think Reese's initial idea of opting not to work with her is a sound one...I'm sure Grant deliberately set that up...maybe hoping that Lex would want her back, or something...hmm the plot thickens...

Looking forward to the next update...

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 06:30 pm

Title: Reese and Friends and Enemies...

LOL! As he should be.

Thank you again for sharing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 04:57 pm

Title: Case of the Ex

Wait! She is attracted to Reese? Hmmmm! I love how this story is panning out



Author's Response:

She was flirting...most definitely...

Reviewer: blkamazon Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 08:16 am

Title: Case of the Ex

I'm hoping that Eva is being ginuwine in everything that she's saying. Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

We'll get another glimpse of Eva in the next update and then you can make a decision

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 06:52 am

Title: Case of the Ex

Fantastic update. You had me hook, line and sinker.

Symph



Author's Response:

Thanks...glad I reeled you in :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 06:14 am

Title: Case of the Ex

Very impressed with Eva's attitude, but i don't trust her.  Were you implying that she's a lesbian and was hitting on Reese?  I wasn't sure about that.  Can't stand that Grant character he has stalker written all over him...



Author's Response:

Yes dc that was the subtle implication. At the end of the day, Grant is just creepy.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 05:45 am

Title: Case of the Ex

Loved the update!! I think Reese needs to thread carefully around Lex's ex regardless of how nice she appears. Grant needs to get a life and leave Reese alone.

Author's Response:

You're probably right baha.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 05:12 am

Title: Case of the Ex

okay . . . so description of Reese's reaction to Eva? effin' hilarious and oh so true. too many times in my life have i met an ex or two of my other at the moment and felt *that* big. but i'm glad she's not all evil. though i can't wait to see what Grant and Lex were talking about, since Lex is all extra alpha. ::shudder:: damn!



Author's Response:

I knew if anyone would get my subtle yet twisted humor you would :)

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 04:37 am

Title: Case of the Ex

I lie Eva a hella lot more than Grant whom I despise!! I hope Lex does not go into one of his insecure mods..he is so much better than Grant just like Reese is so much better than Eva..but at least Eva realizes it!!

Excellent updt sweetie cannot wait for more..



Author's Response:

Thanks nene...not insecure...I think we have a case of alpha male about to come on strong

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 02:23 am

Title: Case of the Ex

That was a mean Cliff hanger; I scrolled down and NOTHING! LOL

This story is too good to end right now LOL JK

Looking forward to the next one.



Author's Response:

Ahhhhh...it wasn't soooo bad...plus there's another update coming today

Reviewer: 100%Fan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/07/11 11:56 pm

Title: Case of the Ex

Well Eva's attitude was a SHOCKER, but I still don't fully trust her yet... Grant is a DOUCHE and needs a beating.

Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Yes...yes...on both counts

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18/07/11 11:23 pm

Title: Case of the Ex

Well, I was surpised by that development! Great chapter. Grant sure is a piece of work. Don't like him.



Author's Response:

Thanks jazz...he's definitely something else

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/07/11 11:09 pm

Title: Case of the Ex

Well so far I am impressed with Eva and want to stomp a new whole in Grant.

Thank you for the update. Waiting patiently for the next one.

I want to see if Reese is a big girl and can seperate business from personal.

Happy writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks Thundakat...poor Grant is in trouble with the reviews you ladies are leaving :)

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/07/11 09:47 pm

Title: Case of the Ex

I don't like that ho, how presumptious of her and quite rude.



Author's Response:

Too funny...your review made me laugh out loud :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/07/11 09:45 pm

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