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Title: Chapter 2- Royal Treatment

Too rushed & not believable at all. She's innocent but she gave in so quickly? She's a virgin but she dated a 28 year old? Her dad was ok with all this? Needs a lot of work.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: 10/12/13 03:28 pm

Title: Chapter 1- The Visit

Yeah I can see prince harry kissing a black girl, but prince william was too proper and to focused on the crown to do anything that would raise an eyeball or two! Thi.s is pretty good for a first effort.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/11 07:28 am

Title: Chapter 1- The Visit

I have always wanted to read a story about Prince Harry, thanks for making that happen. Can't wait to read it!



Author's Response:

hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: Melanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/07/11 07:09 am

Title: Chapter 8- Round 2

Is Tina's father not black?



Author's Response:

He is black but in the Congo there are different tribes. This is actually a very personal part for me, this happened to my family. You aren't to marry in between tribes in certain parts of the Congo

Reviewer: Inthenykoftime Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/11 02:58 am

Title: Chapter 13- Feelings Show

great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 10:40 pm

Title: Chapter 11- Backfire

great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 10:31 pm

Title: Chapter 10- Forgiving the Enemy

good job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 10:29 pm

Title: Chapter 8- Round 2

Great

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Date: 02/07/11 05:58 pm

Title: Chapter 7- The Plot

love the chapter

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 05:55 pm

Title: Chapter 6- Girl Talk 101

great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 05:43 pm

Title: Chapter 2- Royal Treatment

Just found your story and you know what is funny, I thought what would the royal family do in Harry fell in love with someone black and here you have written the story. It is cute! You are doing well. I found this story because you started another.

On to the next chapter!

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 02:44 pm

Title: Chapter 1- The Visit

I like!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 06:16 am

Title: Chapter 13- Feelings Show

That was a sweet ending, and I so glad that they are trying to work it out.  She has grown up alot and I like it.  i am looking forward to reading about her college years.  So is Wills going to be pain about who Harry loves?  I sure hope not, at least Kate is pulling for them.  Most excellent!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 05:18 am

Title: Chapter 13- Feelings Show

Cute ending

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 03:02 am

Title: Chapter 13- Feelings Show

What a cute and funny story. Sorry this is the end but I'm sure story number 2 will be just as much fun.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 02:49 am

Title: Chapter 12- Me Myself and I

Wow, you are updating really fast. I like that. Good for Tina she picked herself back up. She grew up some and that is great. If it's meant to be they will be together. Excited for more!!!!



Author's Response:

haha just letting all the stuff come out, nice ipod playlist, feet in the pool and the result is a good story i guess :)

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 02:34 am

Title: Chapter 12- Me Myself and I

Well, she's angry at Harry but she date another guy while he was serving his country,  That little girl has some nerve, but I can wait to see is Harry wins her heart again.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 02:02 am

Title: Chapter 12- Me Myself and I

I love it. I am actually glad that she is growing up. I love that he came there for the graduation. Please keep it coming I love this story. I can't wait until they start dating again.

Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 02:00 am

Title: Chapter 10- Forgiving the Enemy

She is young and dumb, poor Harry is in love with a child!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 01:58 am

Title: Chapter 11- Backfire

Tina is a child and they do childess things.  They needed to wait awhile until she matured.

Why should Harry believe her?  Did she not think he would find out.  How silly of her.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 01:17 am

Title: Chapter 11- Backfire

Tina still has some growing up to do. Harry can't expect perfection from a teenager! He is in this twenties and is past a lot of the behavior she is still exhibits. It is hard for her because she misses him. He should cut her some slack. Love the new chapters!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 01:15 am

Title: Chapter 11- Backfire

Now that Tina doesn't have a man maybe she can concentrate on herself. 

Maybe Harry can come back in her life when she's in college or something.

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 01:03 am

Title: Chapter 1- The Visit

I really like this story. I don’t like Marco. Please don’t let her ruin her relationship with Harry for a dog. I can't wait until she talks to Harry again. I cannot wait until she turns 18. Please keep updating.

Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 12:39 am

Title: Chapter 10- Forgiving the Enemy

So, I think Tina needs to date Marco because he is her age.

Yeah, it's all nice and sweet to have a prince after you but I think Tina as some growing up to do first. 

Keep the updates coming.

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 12:35 am

Title: Chapter 5- Where Do We Go From Here?

i love it .The story is funny and romantic just what i needed after a long day of work Harry is much more handsome than william even if he is a ginger lol keep it coming

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/07/11 09:48 pm

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