Good Job
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/07/11 09:34 pm
Mmmmm....Disagreement went a little fast. I am still thinking abot this chapter
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/07/11 09:30 pm
Great Job
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 09:24 pm
Hey, I think you have a great story here but I just want to warn you that your story could get deleted because of the age of your female lead. I really suggest that you bump it up to at least 18 because there has been a lot of confusion about the age thing on this site. Since Harry is over the age of 18, you can't have a lead under the age of 18. I thought that I should warn you.
At the bottom of the page there is an icon that says "rules" you might want to read those.
Author's Response: Thank you for the concern but she will be turning 18 in this story at around the mid point Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/07/11 08:52 pm
Wow, father laid the boom down and it wasn't pretty!! Poor Tina, it would be better for Harry to wait until she is older. But it was so wrong for her father to go off like that, Harry has been nothing to respect to Tina since she told him her age. I am looking forward to seeing where you are taking this story. Can I just say that I want to have HEA
Author's Response:
Papa Charles don't play! And what's an HEA?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 07:26 pm
Please continue.
Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 07:20 pm
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!
I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY PERSON TO SEE HARRY AS A REBEL AND DATING A BLACK GIRL! I CANNOT WAIT FOR ME.
Author's Response:
Haha I see it too! I mean he got half of it with Chelsea with her being South African.
Wouldn't be surprised if he goes all the way
Reviewer: Paula Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 06:35 pm
ummm it is abit farfeched and harry falling in love with a woman who is not white and not british? the queen would have a cow it would be fun to watch. but lovin the story, so light and fun keep it up
Author's Response:
That's the whole point, plenty of things going against the both of them. Will they last or not?
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 06:34 pm
well for a first time author...you are kind of Awesome!! I can't wait for what happes next.
Author's Response:
aww thank you so much!
Reviewer: jamminmaraca Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 06:07 pm
Me likey, I imagine that that is how Prince Harry really is. At least I hope that he is that cool in person. This is pretty good for a first attempt at writing. Please keep on going you talent.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm really trying to play Harry's wild funny side.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 05:59 pm
I like your story it's cute and fun. Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 05:44 pm
Nice start...however, are we not going to wait until she turns 18.
The story has a great deal of wit to it. Great!
Author's Response:
wait till she's 18?! What fun is that :)
We will see
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 02:28 pm
A good start, but you might want to brush up on grammar and also the forms of address. Even Americans would call HRH Henry of Windsor "His royal Highness" and "sir." One would never call a peer 'Mister', as it is a term for a commoner.
Author's Response:
The way how she addresses him will rise again later on, just be patient with me :)
as for the grammar, blame my sucky english teachers haha but I will continue my hardest
Reviewer: alices Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 01:33 pm
love it :D
Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 12:44 pm
Keep it coming. I think this story is very cute. I like the start of it. Please keep it coming
Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 09:53 am
Wow. This is such a cute story! I want more!!! Keep it going girl
Reviewer: JadedLady Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 09:40 am
cute and very funny!
Author's Response:
thank you very much!
Reviewer: san Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 09:20 am
really good story...please continue
Author's Response:
will do, it's all for you ladies!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 09:14 am
Awsome update
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 09:11 am
Very Nice
Author's Response:
thank you!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 09:07 am
I'm liking this story so far.
Author's Response:
i hope that continues!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 08:57 am
I'm liking this can't wait to see what happens next :D
Author's Response:
stay tuned :)
Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/11 08:22 am
Yes i have been waiting for somebody to do a story about prince harry since the wedding too thank you so much for writing it
Author's Response:
you're very welcome. i hope i can meet your expectations!
Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 01/07/11 08:22 am