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Title: Crashing Down

I wish you would continue this story. I love your writing, and I love these characters. I really want to know if Cree is okay.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/03/14 10:54 pm

Title: You & Me Against the World

Okay.....sorry to hear about the rough patch hope all is well.  Your writing is awesome just love u!!!! Gotta jones in my bones for this story!



Author's Response:

no worries, woman! it's a motivation to see people miss my writing, hell, i miss my own writing! but i will be getting back to this story. thank you for your support.

Reviewer: Kyky2019 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/02/14 05:09 am

Title: You & Me Against the World

And yeah I will send a missive daily until I see an update.  Shia is my white boy crush, so I need more!  That all for now...talk to ya tomorrow.



Author's Response:

LoL! yesssss! okay, i see you. i've had a rough couple years but things are evening out and my Muse is showing face again. this story is definitely on my to-write list. Mads has been poking at me. fear not; i will update and finish this soon. promise.

Reviewer: Kyky2019 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/02/14 06:08 pm

Title: You & Me Against the World

Ok,Read this story twice and officially hooked love Mads...and Shia as Mads good look I read this story picturing his face and yeah I can see it the brooding,smirking and handsome face of Mads, so pls I beg of you return to this story make me happy?

Reviewer: Kyky2019 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/02/14 06:03 pm

Title: Crashing Down

Pls update.  I am so rooting for them!

Reviewer: Kyky2019 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/02/14 03:33 pm

Title: Crashing Down

I am still mad that you have not continued this awesome story I really want to know what happens and yet you refuse to write

Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/13 10:08 pm

Title: Crashing Down

Omg I love this story. I really hope u finish it one day.

Reviewer: Nicko89 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/02/13 07:21 am

Title: Crashing Down

please please please update this story

Reviewer: Anya_Iris Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/02/12 01:12 am

Title: Crashing Down

I dont understand all that is going on you are switiching too fast and too much

Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/12/11 02:06 pm

Title: Wake Up

What has Mads got himself into..who is it that wants to see him at the Cottenelle!!

Mads is the kinda guy thhat does not live a long life..but now Cree is depending on him and I am afraid he may be in big troubl!!

I wanted to hug Cree myself..wrong giy to be pregnant by fo sure...I hope her and the baby will be alright!!

Good job sweetie...very good!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 03:49 am

Title: Wake Up

I am truly intrigued by this new story and am looking forward to how everything plays out Cree and Mads don't have a fairytale love but what I find very interesting is the fact that they keep finding each other in ways that makes you believe that they belong together. They are doing a very unique dance with each other and that fact a lone keeps pulling me into finding out what will happen with these two. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/07/11 05:33 pm

Title: Wake Up

Great update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/07/11 08:57 am

Title: Wake Up

great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/07/11 05:50 am

Title: Wake Up

Enjoy your 4th!

Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/07/11 02:26 am

Title: Bloody Scabs

that was awesome!

Reviewer: readywonder Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/07/11 02:16 am

Title: Wake Up

Happy 4th and thanks for the update treat!

Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/11 02:12 am

Title: Wake Up

I'm dilligent with my addiction to these two...even on my teeny Palm screen...steal a burger...write more...now

Reviewer: TheSouthernScribe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/07/11 12:21 am

Title: Wake Up

This story is very good! It's sexy but also filled with drama.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/11 10:24 pm

Title: Bloody Scabs

wow another crackie greatness. omg i lourve shia. i want shia babies.

Reviewer: rosey_pink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/11 05:58 am

Title: Bloody Scabs

OMG, I love the new direction your writing is taking! And I'm definitely going to get your recommended read. Thanks for the new story!

Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/07/11 01:14 am

Title: Bloody Scabs

I'm always so impressed by your characters' voices! Well done, as usual. can't wait to read more! 

Reviewer: alices Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/11 08:27 am

Title: Bloody Scabs

I'm ready for more!!!! more more more! i like how you spin the male perspective. Straight up, now flowers, but all sincere good feelings or intentions.

Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/11 03:42 am

Title: Bloody Scabs

Omg I LOVE this. Its so different than anything I've ever read before. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/11 02:02 am

Title: Bloody Scabs

Very well done! Love the tone, the execution…awesome! Loved that its not 'years later' but a contiuation infused with their backstory.


 


This is what’s up:


"I was trying to save her."


"From what?"


"The pain."


"What pain? Muthafucka, you givin' her pain! Look, I don't know what the fuck it is, but that girl loves you. She ain't ask for shit from you after all this time, you think she gon' start now? All she needs is you to step the fuck up. Man up! And I know you capable, otherwise we wouldn't be havin' this conversation."


Who is that, Tyrese? mm mm good.  Whoever it is, that was written on the real! Fabulous!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/11 01:39 am

Title: Bloody Scabs

Great start!  Looking forward to getting to know the characters.

Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/11 01:06 am

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