I love this story so much. I hope all is well with you. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 12/01/11 03:06 am
Wow lucas now how to work it baby. He seem he realy interested in her more then sex and she the same way. What is lucas hiding from his pasted?
Author's Response:
You'll just have to read to find out won't you?
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 01/08/09 09:11 pm
Wow!!! I am literally speechless and I don't get that way often. I like your way of writing. I love Bea, Nikko and Lucas. I can't wait for more. My only problem is that Bea is a little self conscious but it is understandable when you got this sexy man after you and you're thinking that he should be with someone more prettier. Girlfriend betta get the lead out and start accepting that she got a fine arse man and that fine arse man is totally into her. Hopefully, it won't take her too long to register in that fact!! BTW, I am dying to put faces to the names; I have my ideas and I am wondering if I am dead on. If you don't have any pics; no worries (they're in my head...esp. Lucas). And can I just say DAMN, SCORCHING to those sex scenes ;) Plus, I love that Lucas is cocky; he reminds me of a soapopera character from a couple of years ago. More! More! More!
Author's Response: No, I don't have pictures; I think your imagination is best. Thank you, I'll do my best.
[Report This]Date: 21/12/08 06:45 am
Interesting story so far, however, do try to slow it down some. Everything seems just a bit rushed.
Author's Response: I'll try but I won't make any promises.
Date: 02/11/08 12:27 pm
I have enjoy reading the first two (2) chapters of your story. It was a joy to read about a plus sized women finding romance or sex with a nice looking guy, that do not want to hide her away. Keep up the good work and please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 26/09/08 10:34 pm
That was so hot! It'll be interesting to see how these two end up.
Author's Response: Read and find out.
Date: 08/09/08 04:40 am
Good start. What does a Beta reader do exactly?
Author's Response:
A BETA READER: is someone who reads your work before you let the masses see to ensure the grammar is correct. It's very hear to catch all of the YOUR own mistakes when you’re the writer. A beta reader basically helps you with the errors you missed.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 03:14 am
derrière........lmao...i just luv that word....great start i cant wait to read more.....i need more....glad he kept his promise and stayed....
Bravo....
Author's Response:
Thank you my characters are their own individuals with likes and dislikes I just write what they give me.
Reviewer: Cmami Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 12:17 am
Damn Bea and Lucas are HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!
I really like your writing style. It felt kind of voyeur. Keep it going Chica....let me pop my popcorn!!! *munch*
Author's Response:
Darling, I am a voyeur.
Reviewer: Minx Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 06/09/08 10:48 pm
Great Start
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 06/09/08 10:37 pm