lol only nikko can have a mess up day but still make bea laugh her butt off lol. She better listen to her best friend she need to talked to lucas before she ruins a good thing.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/08/09 09:40 pm
Loving this story so far especially the development of a relationship between Bea and Lucas. Nikko is a mess but he's ok.
Author's Response: I try to make it so the reader(you) are almost inside their head and your looking out instead of looking at it from above as a detached figure.
Date: 12/07/09 05:47 pm
i love me some nikko.....sorry it took me so long after i bedded for an earlier updated but Cmami's back...and in full effect baby....now onto the next chappy......
oh and thanks for making my Nikko cheerful and witty again....i thought i was going to have to curse and scream cuz you were hurting my babyboo....lol
great job :D
Author's Response:
Be ready for the big let down.
Reviewer: Cma Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 01/01/09 10:52 am
I just read this and it is good. I do sometimes get a lil lost when you switch from one scene to another, but, recovery quickly.
I like.
Author's Response: I'll try to make my scene jumps easier to follow. I just get so intuned that I forget that readers are not in my head to follow my stream of thought. Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/12/08 05:52 pm