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Title: Chapter 12

Ok I am all caught up adn I want her to stop running. At this point she has to realize this man loves her. All he ha sdone and said screams I love you but how much rejection is he suppose to take. He is a fragile person just like her and she is doing to him what she has had done to her..she needs to stop and accept that he really cares for her.

This is very ggod sweetie...I love all the characters and their individual stories..there are still so many things yet explored so I am requesting an upt as soon as possible...this is  great stoory!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 05:19 am

Title: Chapter 12

why did she run away from him can't see that he love her and only her wanted to get to know her and treated her like queen that she is. I wonder does she know that sister in town yet? like the story girl glad i came to read it and thanks for the updated. updated soon.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/09 10:06 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Thanks for the update; so good to be enjoying one of my favorite stories again.

Author's Response: Sorry for taking forever, I had a slight dry spell but my muse is back and ready to work!

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/09 07:19 am

Title: Chapter 12

I hope Bea deals with her insecurities and give Lucas a real chance and stop running. She needs to tell him about her panic attacks be be strong to deal with other women who may make her jealous.

Author's Response: Bea suffers from a past that will be revealed within the next two mabey three chapters and it will make sense why she refuses to let Lucas in. But as the story progressies you'll see a change in her.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 06:23 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Please put some spacing in here. It makes it so much easier to read.

Author's Response: I fixed that. I'm deeply sorry I was in such a hurry to post that I didn't preview it thank you for telling me.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 07:30 am

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