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Title: Chapter 5

Wow, great story so far.  So it's the supernaturals against the humans.  This cannot end well.  I feel bad that Tara's being thrown in the middle.  She's going to be the one that comes away from this damaged the most.  She'll most likely have a baby on her hands as well.  I like that you have Bill and Sookie together in this, they seem committed to one another.  Most of the time, I cannot stand Sookie.  She's whiny, constantly in danger which means she needs rescuing and plays every man she comes across.  Since this is a story about Tara, it wouldn't be sporting for Sookie to have all the male attention.  I don't like that the vampires and werewolves are teaming up to survive this apocalyse.  They are using Tara and her family to help them and that sucks.  Eric seems like he would like to have sex with Tara, and she had a hot dream about him.  I'm thinking she has enough problems with Alcide and Sam, so Eric doesn't need to be tossed into the mix.  I cannot believe that Tara had sex with Alcide so easily.  Him being good looking isn't reason enough, since she's in a relationship with Sam.  I imagine it was her way of making the problem go away.  With her newly discovered powers, she could have stopped him if she wanted to.  Hell, she could have just told him no and that would have been enough.  He's outrageous thinking that Tara will marry him and give him a brood of children.  The Alcide in this story is very manipulative.  I can understand that he wants to live and feels like this is the only way, but if Tara isn't okay with this he should just leave it alone.  Tara should have just trained with Eric and left it at that.  Then to add insult to injury, she goes and has sex with Sam.  She should've just asked him if he was a shifter instead of trying to trick him.  They need to be more honest, but I do think they care very deeply, perhaps even love one another. Sam wasn't sure how she would react to the news of him being a shifter, so he stayed mum.  Of course he smelled Alcide on her and that must have hurt.  He slept with her anyway.  If Tara finds out that she's pregnant Sam could be the father.  She spent one night with Alcide, but she's been sleeping with Sam on a regular basis.  Gee, I hope she took a shower between the men.   Tara really shouldn't be going anywhere with Alcide again.  She should've told Sam about the deal she made with Alcide and that she slept with him.  Now we have Operation Apocolayse.  Nice twist with Terry and Sam being involved.  Sam feels conflicted.  He's more worried about Tara than Sookie, yet he told them about her being a witch.  I still believe he's a good guy and that he wants to protect Tara and be with her.  As a shifter he's bound to have problems with vampires and werewolves.  Impressive so far, looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 06:40 am

Title: Chapter 5

Oh noooo, Sam and Terry are traitors!!! Can't wait til Tara and the gang finds out.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 5

I know Sam is not trying to get all indignate cause Tara slept with Alcide and has not told him yet when his ass is lying about being a shifter and now this about him being a spy I guess he does not realize that the humans are going to turn on his ass too huh.

Great update and I wonder what Eric is up to by having Tara drink his blood without her being aware. Was it only so he could keep track of  her or what? Hmmmm interesting very interesting.

I would have let Sam eat the Alpo just for gp since now I know his ass is lying and hiding other things not only from Tara but others too and they shared all that info with him just to have it reported back to the agency he is spying for.

Great update. Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 07:46 pm

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