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Title: Chapter 6

looks like things are getting interesting :D

Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/11 01:25 am

Title: Chapter 5

Wow, great story so far.  So it's the supernaturals against the humans.  This cannot end well.  I feel bad that Tara's being thrown in the middle.  She's going to be the one that comes away from this damaged the most.  She'll most likely have a baby on her hands as well.  I like that you have Bill and Sookie together in this, they seem committed to one another.  Most of the time, I cannot stand Sookie.  She's whiny, constantly in danger which means she needs rescuing and plays every man she comes across.  Since this is a story about Tara, it wouldn't be sporting for Sookie to have all the male attention.  I don't like that the vampires and werewolves are teaming up to survive this apocalyse.  They are using Tara and her family to help them and that sucks.  Eric seems like he would like to have sex with Tara, and she had a hot dream about him.  I'm thinking she has enough problems with Alcide and Sam, so Eric doesn't need to be tossed into the mix.  I cannot believe that Tara had sex with Alcide so easily.  Him being good looking isn't reason enough, since she's in a relationship with Sam.  I imagine it was her way of making the problem go away.  With her newly discovered powers, she could have stopped him if she wanted to.  Hell, she could have just told him no and that would have been enough.  He's outrageous thinking that Tara will marry him and give him a brood of children.  The Alcide in this story is very manipulative.  I can understand that he wants to live and feels like this is the only way, but if Tara isn't okay with this he should just leave it alone.  Tara should have just trained with Eric and left it at that.  Then to add insult to injury, she goes and has sex with Sam.  She should've just asked him if he was a shifter instead of trying to trick him.  They need to be more honest, but I do think they care very deeply, perhaps even love one another. Sam wasn't sure how she would react to the news of him being a shifter, so he stayed mum.  Of course he smelled Alcide on her and that must have hurt.  He slept with her anyway.  If Tara finds out that she's pregnant Sam could be the father.  She spent one night with Alcide, but she's been sleeping with Sam on a regular basis.  Gee, I hope she took a shower between the men.   Tara really shouldn't be going anywhere with Alcide again.  She should've told Sam about the deal she made with Alcide and that she slept with him.  Now we have Operation Apocolayse.  Nice twist with Terry and Sam being involved.  Sam feels conflicted.  He's more worried about Tara than Sookie, yet he told them about her being a witch.  I still believe he's a good guy and that he wants to protect Tara and be with her.  As a shifter he's bound to have problems with vampires and werewolves.  Impressive so far, looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 06:40 am

Title: Chapter 5

Oh noooo, Sam and Terry are traitors!!! Can't wait til Tara and the gang finds out.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 5

I know Sam is not trying to get all indignate cause Tara slept with Alcide and has not told him yet when his ass is lying about being a shifter and now this about him being a spy I guess he does not realize that the humans are going to turn on his ass too huh.

Great update and I wonder what Eric is up to by having Tara drink his blood without her being aware. Was it only so he could keep track of  her or what? Hmmmm interesting very interesting.

I would have let Sam eat the Alpo just for gp since now I know his ass is lying and hiding other things not only from Tara but others too and they shared all that info with him just to have it reported back to the agency he is spying for.

Great update. Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 07:46 pm

Title: Chapter 4

really im loving this keep up the great work cant wait for more yayyyyyyyy

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 08:52 am

Title: Chapter 4

Oh oh, I think Eric also wants to breed with her. Poor Sam, the crap is about to hit the fan soon.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 08:27 am

Title: Chapter 4

"He was not bad to look at." Uhm. What? Come again. Alcide was sculpted by the deities themselves and then covered in rainbows. Surely in the looks department he beats Sam, and I'm wondering if he'll have more of a nice personality that we're used to on the show. I love evil alcide, but maybe he can be kind as well. similarly, will you go into how Tara decided to sleep with him so easily. I mean Tara is a fighter and you really gotta force her to do something so it's kindof hard to imagine that she would say 'okay alcide, I'll sleep with you this one time!" On another note, I totally love what Eric has done. I don't like him in the show, yet in your story I'm dripping with jealousy for Tara. More sexy dreams and realities between Eric and tara. Hell, can you clone Tara, so she can be with Eric, Alcide, Sam, and just for me, Jason. K thanks!! mmmm I wish I could help Alcide :>

Reviewer: kendrat199 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 04:47 am

Title: Chapter 4

great chapter :D

Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 04:22 am

Title: Chapter 3

Damnit Bill! always ruining things! I still want Alcide to hook up with Tara, albeit by different means (less manipulative ways, that is). I do love Sam though. I'm conflicted. Debbie sucks as a henchmen. I do love Coot though. Oh, so conflicted!

Reviewer: kendrat199 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 1

Fabulous! Absolutely Fabulous. Lafayette was amazing, and I'm loving Ruby Jean even though she didn't have a large part -vocal wise- in the show and rough and tough Alcide mmm. Hell, I'm starting to like Sookie and that could be dangerous. Hopefully there will be more Eric :) btw, witches making rings for vampires to walk in the sun...mmmm sounds like Vampire Diaries!

Reviewer: kendrat199 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 02:54 am

Title: Chapter 1

that was so amazing! please e-mail me when you've created another chapter. I just hope she gets with Alcide, because....it's alcide and he's gorgeous and amazing! I love Sam, but he must move aside!!! Furthermore, Tara and Eric would be super hot. Oh, and what of Jason! he has to be there to protect Tara at some point, non?

my email address is : kendrat199@gmail.com

 

you've done a marvelous job with the portrayal of all the characters -it was like I was sitting by Bill at this horrible funeral!

Reviewer: kendrat199 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 01:49 am

Title: Chapter 4

I'm reading, and trying to follow.  This chapter threw me for a bit of a loop.  I did not realize Tara did not know Sam was a shifter.  Lafeyyete is a bit of a punk, and there is a whole lot of crazy.  Also, why is Sookie sick.  I'll keep reading to see where this is going.  I'm surprised Tara would sleep with Alcide with so little persuasion.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 12:41 am

Title: Chapter 3

Oh oh, the crap is about to hit the fan now!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/11 07:37 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Interesting story so far. Loving this twist to the story.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/11 05:51 am

Title: Chapter 2

adore and love this story it is truly a masterpiece!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/11 03:16 am

Title: Chapter 1

this is interesting can't wait to read more

Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/11 03:27 am

Title: Chapter 1

This is convulted and twisted, which fits right up the True Blood ally!  Very interesting.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 10:30 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I can see I'm in for a crazy ride with this story. I'm really intrigued!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 07:21 pm

Title: Chapter 1

dope start. great work with the voices. excited to see more.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 06:56 pm

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