Yea!! Keisha is coming out to play!!!Reviewer: Elizablu Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 03:27 pm
I can't wait for their reunion. LOL I cracked up at the end...she had to re-apply make up to answer an email. LOL She is a HOT MESS.
I like that her BFF is encouraging and loyal to her. Firends like that are hard to find.
I have a suggestion...The two paragraphs with dialogue between Kennedy and Keisha need to be broken up into a "conversation" because they are too long. Breaking it up makes the dialogue easy to follow.
Thanks for the suggestion!
I noticed that as well, but I posted it up at 3 in the morning, so I wasn't quite concerned about doing it right then and there, LOL!
But I shall be doing it right away, so thanks (:Reviewer: 100percentfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 01:34 pm
I like the direction of this story so far...please update soon.Reviewer: 100%Fan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/07/11 02:55 pm