hell yeah continue please!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/11 04:51 am
Beautiful Cast!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/11 04:50 am
Nice story by the way but i am a little confused am i missing something why is Kennedy e-mailing James and not Keisha?
Reviewer: Kaleah Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/11 03:17 am
Glad she listened to Kennedy. Hopefully James doesn't hurt her.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 07/07/11 03:54 am
Yea!! Keisha is coming out to play!!!
Reviewer: Elizablu Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/07/11 03:27 pm
I can't wait for their reunion. LOL I cracked up at the end...she had to re-apply make up to answer an email. LOL She is a HOT MESS.
I like that her BFF is encouraging and loyal to her. Firends like that are hard to find.
I have a suggestion...The two paragraphs with dialogue between Kennedy and Keisha need to be broken up into a "conversation" because they are too long. Breaking it up makes the dialogue easy to follow.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestion!
I noticed that as well, but I posted it up at 3 in the morning, so I wasn't quite concerned about doing it right then and there, LOL!
But I shall be doing it right away, so thanks (:
Reviewer: 100percentfan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/07/11 01:34 pm
I like the direction of this story so far...please update soon.
Reviewer: 100%Fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/07/11 02:55 pm
Interesting start. More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 03/07/11 08:31 am
Jewel is a bad girl. Poor Keisha I can see that her alter-ego keeps her on her toes. I like it! Please continue!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: 03/07/11 07:55 am
Yes please continue, I want to see where this story go!!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: 03/07/11 07:50 am