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Title: How It All Started

hell yeah continue please!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/10/11 04:51 am

Title: The Cast

Beautiful Cast!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/10/11 04:50 am

Title: Chapter 5

Nice story by the way but i am a little confused am i missing something why is Kennedy e-mailing James and not Keisha?

Reviewer: Kaleah Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/10/11 03:17 am

Title: BFFs

Glad she listened to Kennedy. Hopefully James doesn't hurt her.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 03:54 am

Title: BFFs

Yea!! Keisha is coming out to play!!! 

Reviewer: Elizablu Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 03:27 pm

Title: BFFs

I can't wait for their reunion. LOL I cracked up at the end...she had to re-apply make up to answer an email. LOL She is a HOT MESS.

I like that her BFF is encouraging and loyal to her. Firends like that are hard to find.

I have a suggestion...The two paragraphs with dialogue between Kennedy and Keisha need to be broken up into a "conversation" because they are too long. Breaking it up makes the dialogue easy to follow. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the suggestion! 

I noticed that as well, but I posted it up at 3 in the morning, so I wasn't quite concerned about doing it right then and there, LOL!

But I shall be doing it right away, so thanks (:

Reviewer: 100percentfan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 01:34 pm

Title: The Morning After

I like the direction of this story so far...please update soon.

Reviewer: 100%Fan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/11 02:55 pm

Title: The Morning After

Interesting start. More please.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/07/11 08:31 am

Title: The Morning After

Jewel is a bad girl. Poor Keisha I can see that her alter-ego keeps her on her toes. I like it! Please continue!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/11 07:55 am

Title: How It All Started

Yes please continue, I want to see where this story go!!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/11 07:50 am

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