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Title: Chapter 21- The Ever After

Great story! Great pic!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/08/11 07:22 am

Title: Chapter 21- The Ever After

That was amazing, I loved this story.  I am glad to see a happy ending, with another baby. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/08/11 02:20 am

Title: Chapter 21- The Ever After

i like this ending much better some may say it is sappy and unrealistic but it was good .Last but not least i would like to congratulate on your writing from the begining you had me hooked so hooked that i constantly logged in to the chamber for updates at all hours of the night and even before i went to work in the early morning hours before i went to work and am up at 5 and have never done before so to end this essay again good job and i cant wait or any new stories you may have .Good luck ,god bless and again thank you or the laughs,tears and showing that every girl can snag a prince .

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/08/11 01:41 am

Title: Chapter 21- The Ever After

I like this better.

Thanks



Author's Response:

no Thank YOU for always reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/08/11 09:49 pm

Title: Chapter 21- The Ever After

Much Much better!!!!!!! Love the ending!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you love the ending :) sorry for putting you through hell with the other story

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/08/11 08:59 pm

Title: Chapter 21- The Ever After

LOVE this ending. I love it! LOVE IT!

Reviewer: HappyReader Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/08/11 08:01 pm

Title: Chapter 20- The Christening

as long as its not tina,harry or one of the triplets am okay i guess even if i have a bad feeling its going to be diana

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/07/11 12:12 am

Title: Chapter 1- The Getaway

I agree the queen can go!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/07/11 11:06 am

Title: Chapter 20- The Christening

Loved this story!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Date: 24/07/11 11:04 am

Title: Chapter 19- Planning The Event

Sorry can't help with the pics! 

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Date: 24/07/11 10:55 am

Title: Chapter 18- The Showing

Liked the comment to the Queen about the "spare".

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/11 10:39 am

Title: Chapter 20- The Christening

Don't you dare kill off Harry, Tina and the kids. Then again, why do any of them have to go?

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/11 07:49 am

Title: Chapter 20- The Christening

Oh no, as long it's the Queen mum and Prince Charles I am cool with that.  I love Tina's parents so please don't kill them off.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/07/11 07:01 am

Title: Chapter 11- La Vie Est Belle

Great ending. I still can't believe they have triplets!!!! So cute. If you want to write until Harry and Tina's coronation then you have a lot to write. Queen Elisabeth is reigning for almost 59 years already and I don't see her retiring anytime soon! LOL.

And then there is still Prince Charles and Duke William. Harry is third in line. If you perse want Harry to be king, then these 3 people have to die first. Only if William give up his right to be king (which I don't think he would just because they can't have kids) will Harry have a chance to be king but after Charles. I have a bad feeling that you are going to kill one or maybe all these people just so Harry can be king. If that is your idea, please don't to that. It will be so not realistic. Maybe you should have write about fiction characters instead of the real British royalty. Then you could have do with it as you please. Not that you can't to it with these characters. It will just be unrealistic in my opinion tho.

But anyway. Love ittt

Reviewer: Me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/07/11 04:51 am

Title: Chapter 20- The Christening

Love it. I'm sad already for the next story. Just watch out with what ever you have in mind. Since William and Kate can't have any children, Harry and Tina's children are the feature of the monarchy. But that doesn't mean that Harry has to be king too. Charles is first in line and William second with kids or not. I know you want Harry to be crown as king, but truth is he is third in line. British monarchy and rules are very strict.

Just don't make it too unrealistic killing Prince Charles and William just so Harry and Tina can be king and queen. It will make the story a little not believable and it will also take the essence of the story away. There are so much more important things than being a king. Without being crowned Harry is already doing a lots of great things.

This is such a beautiful story just the way it is now. And honestly I like Harry being just a prince. It makes Harry, Harry. LOL.

Its your story tho and its fiction. But I just wanted to point those things out.

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/07/11 03:57 am

Title: Chapter 19- Planning The Event

Very godod love the interaction between the characters

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/11 03:39 am

Title: Chapter 19- Planning The Event

That was awesome, I love their little family.   Tina and Harry hit it out of the park on the first try.  I love this story!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/07/11 02:26 am

Title: Chapter 18- The Showing

That was soo sweet! I can not wait to read the next update

Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/07/11 07:22 pm

Title: Chapter 18- The Showing

Love it!!! I'm a little confused with the dates tho. The baby's were born on December 2011. So what Harry and Tina married this year??? William and Kate married in April 2011. Or did they married another date in your version. I don't know its a little all over the place and confusing.



Author's Response: Omg! I will go back and fix that. I meant 2012. Sorry :/

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/07/11 04:59 pm

Title: Chapter 18- The Showing

Great Job



Author's Response:

thank you! And thank you for all your reviews, really appreciate you!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/07/11 06:26 am

Title: Chapter 17- 2 plus one.

Aww, that was soo sweet! Great names....



Author's Response:

thanks! My Hubby helped me pick them :)

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/07/11 03:28 am

Title: Chapter 17- 2 plus one.

Great names! I think they'll have another one.



Author's Response:

Lol We will see!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/07/11 06:58 am

Title: Chapter 16- Fix You

Harry is home where he belongs!

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Date: 21/07/11 06:51 am

Title: Chapter 15- Nothing Left to Lose

Yes, Thank You!  Keeping my fingers crossed for Harry!

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Date: 21/07/11 06:43 am

Title: Chapter 14- 6 Months.

Damn!

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Date: 21/07/11 06:40 am

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