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Title: Chapter 11- La Vie Est Belle

welcome back missed you keep it coming



Author's Response:

Missed yall too! And since the Yankees game is on the Hubby is watching so I'm curled up with my laptop writing for you ladies :) Updating soon again!

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 01:00 am

Title: Chapter 11- La Vie Est Belle

Its up too you if you want too write the whole coronation. Too me its just boring stuff, so if you write it make it as interesting and entertaining as possible. I honestly don't like the part where he would be king. I know its just fiction but I just can't imagine Harry as a king. I like him more with just being prince Harry with all the privilege but doesn't have all the pressure about being a king.

And I think you missed the part of Prince Charles. He is the first in line to the throne. William is the second and Harry the third in line. So after the queen Prince Charles would have to be king first. No matter what. Only after his dead will William or Harry have a chance. After Charles William is the one who would have to be king because he is then the first line. With kids or not he will still be king. Being king is not about producing a heir. We live in the 21 century now.

So if it turns out that William and Kate have no children, then Harry gets the throne on William's death (Not BOTH William's AND Kate's death since Kate has nothing to with the succession other than produce heirs). Once William dies, Harry takes over, then Harry's son or daughter. If William dies and Harry dies and Harry has no children, then Prince Andrew, if alive, takes over as King and so on.

So William can and will still be king. Harry will then be the first in line to be king after William because obviously in this story William doesn't have a descendants.

I'm not trying to diss you, but since its a story about prince Harry and the royal family, it will be more interesting and nice to write it as accurate and realistic as possible. This will make the story more believable and relate more with the real prince Harry. This is just my opinion.

But nice idea, and I will continue reading.




Author's Response:

yeah I was thinking about how Harry would be King and I started already outlining the story but it would be too sad for me to write because there would be a lot of deaths by accidents etc. So I decided to do it until the birth of the children. This story will be MUCH longer.

Reviewer: a reader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 12:51 am

Title: Chapter 11- La Vie Est Belle

That was wonderful, I love this story!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/07/11 11:59 pm

Title: Chapter 10- PSA

LOVE,LOVE,LOVE this story! Please update soon!

Reviewer: fhjl88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/07/11 03:06 am

Title: Chapter 1- The Getaway

LOVE this story. Waiting impatiently for the next update, thank you so much for these stories.

Reviewer: SandraLee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/07/11 08:09 pm

Title: Chapter 10- PSA

Harry's a great husband!  Poor Tina, she may want to be knocked out when she gives birth!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/07/11 09:11 pm

Title: Chapter 10- PSA

This is story just gets better with each new chapter.  I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/11 07:46 pm

Title: Chapter 1- The Getaway

I LOVE this story...it's sexy, romantic, and humorous as well as being new and inventive. I can honestly say that I have never before read a storyline close to this. I absolutely devoured the previous parts and am now upset since I am dying for another update and don't have anything to fall back on. To be honest I wish I had caught the story when it was finished like the others because I am dying to find out what happens next LOL!

I am also kind of sad at how fast the story is going...I wish we were able to see Harry and Tina grow more as a couple, like the ups and downs of college before they got married...I just feel there was so much material there worth exploring though I do appreciate the route you have taken. Once they have kids though there is no going back from there! Harry should make a great father though both have alot of growing up to do and quickly before they can be good parents.

Thanks for bringing us this story and I cannot wait for the next segment =)

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/07/11 07:51 am

Title: Chapter 9- Too Big, Too Fast.

Twins!  Oh my.

I like the idea of them keeping a diary talking to their babies.  Nice.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 03:46 am

Title: Chapter 9- Too Big, Too Fast.

damn at the rate these two are going they will be having triplets and quarduplets lol

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/07/11 09:09 pm

Title: Chapter 9- Too Big, Too Fast.

They are soo cute together!

Reviewer: nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/07/11 06:57 pm

Title: Chapter 9- Too Big, Too Fast.

Yay, twins!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/07/11 07:06 am

Title: Chapter 9- Too Big, Too Fast.

Twins I am so excited, yippee skippy Rodney Allen Rippy!!  I so love this story, Harryi such a sweet heart!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/11 06:52 am

Title: Chapter 8- Start Spreading the News...

Tina may have to put college on hold but she'll get it together, hopefully! Screw the Queen!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 09:39 am

Title: Chapter 7- Doctor's Orders

Let the Queen go crazy! They need to adopt the little redhead and Diana!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 09:31 am

Title: Chapter 6- Mother Tina?

She's preggers!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 09:22 am

Title: Chapter 8- Start Spreading the News...

Good chapter! They are soo HOTT together

Reviewer: lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 04:52 am

Title: Chapter 8- Start Spreading the News...

A BABY, SO AWESOME!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 04:12 am

Title: Chapter 8- Start Spreading the News...

nice chapter...anticipation is killing me

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 03:11 am

Title: Chapter 8- Start Spreading the News...

I am in agreement with you. Tina isn't thinking straight.  She needs to take care of herself and that baby.  She needs no stress in her life.

Why does she vomit after they have sex?



Author's Response:

One of my friends' this happened to her when she was pregnant because her husband would penetrate so deep and rough that it actually made her nauseous. Causing her to vomit 

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 12:29 am

Title: Chapter 8- Start Spreading the News...

I am so loving this story. It  had entered my mind what would happen if Harry married a black woman. William never could but Harry surely could. Keep the updates coming. Please and Thank You.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 12:17 am

Title: Chapter 7- Doctor's Orders

I fee so bad and sad for Tina. I mean a new baby on the way is always a happy news, but I don't know what to think or feel right now. Tina and Harry are only a couple of weeks or month married. The didn't even get the time to enjoy their marriage properly. Its just not fair for them. Especially for Tina. She didn't have the chance to have a normal teenage life. She didn't get the chance to go to collage and experience a normal collage life. Harry, William and Kate did. They had the chance to enjoy their life first. Tina doesn't get to do that. She doesn't get to experience all that. I know that she is mature and all that, but its just not fair to her to have all this kind of pressure at such a young age.

Everything goes so fast and rushed for them. They didn't even have a chance do date normally and properly. William and Kate dated each other for years first before they got married. Tina and Harry had to get married because William and Kate can't have kids. So they put a lot of pressure at Harry and Tina. I know that it wasn't William and Kate's intention, but still. Tina and Harry had to rushed and get married. And all of this just to produce a heir. But what about what Tina and Harry wants?

And now to top it off Tina is pregnant. Her life is over. I know that they have the privilege to have money, so they can hired a nanny to help them. But just like the late Diana, I don't think that Tina will let other people raise her child.

I know that Harry loves her, and that they are happy together. But I don't think that Tina realizes how much she gave up. She didn't got the chance to grow up. She may not think of it know. But when she is older, she will regret not being able to have live her life first and do things that girls her age will do. Instead she has to live with being constantly harassed by the media and paparazzi, she has to fulfill her duty as a wife and now she will also be a mother at just 18/19 years old. I'm not saying that she will regret getting married with Harry, because she loves him. But not being able to experience the world first is something that she will regret.

Reviewer: Me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 08:44 pm

Title: Chapter 5- First Royal Trip

Harry is addicted to to Tina, she has him whipped.  I love this story.  That little girl is name Diana how appropriate.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 06:47 am

Title: Chapter 5- First Royal Trip

LOL! Wonder if that will make it on the news!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 05:32 am

Title: Chapter 5- First Royal Trip

I TRULY ENJOY YOUR STORY

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 05:12 am

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