Where are you??? hope u are coing back to finish, it's an awesome begining
Reviewer: dounome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/03/14 11:43 pm
Zane had an awful childhood, his parents just left and his sister to fend for themselves. I hope that his parents lost everything!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/11 05:22 pm
ME likey. How sweet!! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/11 08:15 am
liking this story a lot - look forward to more! thanks for the updates
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/11 02:39 pm
Officially you are on my bad side.....This is a really good story. Update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading~~ I'll be sure to update soon :)
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/11 02:55 am
That was sad, Zane is being abused. Why isn't anyone helping him? Will Lana tell her parents what she knows and then maybe Zane can get some help.
Author's Response:
Maybe she will, maybe she won't....who knows? You'll just have to wait and see won't you? haha, thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/11 02:42 am
Awesome. I do hope that there will be more please!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! There'll definitely be more soon!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 09:33 pm
I really like this story so far. I really interested in some background information of these two.
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for review and I'm glad you like it! The next couple of chapters will be all backround information~
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 06:35 pm
So, not fair....Please update soon. Great beginning
Author's Response:
No worries, I don't plan on leaving you guys hanging! Please continue to read also!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 04/08/11 05:59 pm
well, this is intriguing . . .
do continue! with haste, i say!
Author's Response:
Thanks for checking out my story. I'll definitely continue so please continue reading. Thanks again!
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 04/08/11 06:32 am
Welcome aboard with such a promising story! Can't wait for your next update and hopefully you will include their lovely cast pictures too, thanks.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot~ I've updated Chapter 2 with the cast picutres~
Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/08/11 04:41 am
Hey:) Welcome newbie, I'll be the first to say that although this was short it's very interesting. I think you've got a good story going. Nice job!
Author's Response:
Thanks! The next chapters will definitely be longer~
Reviewer: JLeshay Signed [Report This]Date: 04/08/11 03:44 am