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Title: Chapter 13 Unexpected Vacation

Oh my god.  please tell me he tells her about her cousin! That heifer had that picture on Instagram before he got through the doors of his bakery. I just palm slapped my forhead. What a mess.

Reviewer: Troysmom0409 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/13 05:41 am

Title: Chapter 13 Unexpected Vacation

 Valysia's cousin, Tameka, really made me feel nauseous, Tameka's is a real scumbag.  I felt sorry for Matheson to have to endure her presence and obvious slutty come on, it was like dirty slime contact.  He was enduring because he thought he had to, since she's Val's cousin.  I pray he tells Valysia about the encounter, Val will finally deal the decisive blow to Tam and her insulting presumption of superiority merely due to Val being dark skinned.  Really can't stand Tameka and the rest of that other side of Val's family that Tam generates from.

I strongly hope that the upcoming short vacation Val and Matheson will take will help reduce his high blood pressure.  His fainting at ejaculation is kind of scary, instead it could have been a heart attack!  Like Matheson said, this fainting has never happened previously with any other girl so it must also be the fact that he's in-love with Valysia that put impact on the high blood. 

 

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/01/12 07:37 am

Title: Chapter 13 Unexpected Vacation

what is the word for nasty, stanky, filthy, no good, low down dirty dogs namde Tameka?  I believe the word I am looking for is SLUT!!!! Yeah that's the one! She's a HO!!! I am glad Matteson could resist her nasty girl charms! She is not the Vanity six type of nasty girl, she is a scum licking dog type of nasty girl! 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/10/11 11:09 pm

Title: Chapter 13 Unexpected Vacation

Tameka is going to be a big problem. He should not have taken that picture of her.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/11 08:39 pm

Title: Chapter 13 Unexpected Vacation

Wow that cousin Tameka is a real bitch  trying to steal her cousin Val man wow.  I hope Mat listen to his father and take care of his health because he doesn't it going to effect him and Val. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/08/11 08:06 pm

Title: Chapter 13 Unexpected Vacation

Tameka is a hawt mess.  I hope Matheson tells her about her cousin before she sees the picture because that skank is up to no good.  I really hope that Matheson can destress and his swimmers get strong so that when the time is right he and Val can have some babies.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 07:47 pm

Title: Chapter 13 Unexpected Vacation

uh that desperate hood rat hoe cousin tameka is just like a turd that needs to be flushed!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 04:06 pm

Title: Chapter 13 Unexpected Vacation

That skanky nasty trifle slore (slut-whore).  I hope Matt tells Val about the incident.

Thank you

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 03:03 pm

Title: Chapter 13 Unexpected Vacation

He is better off telling Val about this convo Tameka is a mess.
If I had cousins like that I would most definitely avoid them like an unwanted disease.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 02:55 pm

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