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Title: Chapter 19 Frankly Speaking

damn that emily is off the fuckin chain i mean whoo she told that uptight bitter lady off!!!!

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Date: 08/08/11 07:29 am
Title: Chapter 18 Family Faceoff

emily is crazy ass hell omg that woman is a riot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 08/08/11 07:20 am
Title: Chapter 17 A Much Needed Vacation

damn emily told that old bitter turd hannah off loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 08/08/11 07:13 am
Title: Chapter 22 Moving Forward

Ahhhh! Auntie Hannah is really and old softie under all that bitterness.  I will try to give her the benefit of the doubt from now on unless she acts ugly then all truces or off.

Val and Aunt Hannah shopping I can't wait to read about that little expedition.

Thank you!

Happy writing!

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Date: 08/08/11 06:24 am
Title: Chapter 20 Calm Before the Storm

Maybe Barnham is just the man that ole battlax needs to dust off the cobwebs he seems to need some relief himself cause he a bit up tight and needs to have that stick removed from his ass but then again he make like the stick and just needs a bj performed.

Thank you

Happy writing.

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Date: 08/08/11 05:23 am
Title: Chapter 19 Frankly Speaking

All I can say is wow!

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Date: 08/08/11 04:52 am
Title: Chapter 18 Family Faceoff

LMAO! Emily is no joke and apparently she loves the topic of sex.

William LOL! Got happy to know that he may be getting a blowjob when he gets home.

Hannah there is just no help for her dried up ass there's no man that would want to clear out the cobwebs of her dry rusty twat.

Amusing update...LOL!

Thank you

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Date: 08/08/11 03:51 am
Title: Chapter 24 Rest and Relaxation

So awesome,  I am glad to see Hannah has thawed out.  Val is such a nice woman and she love Matheson.  Interesting that they name hie his mother's last name.  Most excellent!!!

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Date: 08/08/11 03:28 am
Title: Chapter 17 A Much Needed Vacation

Yes, Ms. Hannah definitely looks like she needs the pipes cleaned. Bitter ole biddy.

Great update as always

Thank you

Happy writing.

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Date: 08/08/11 03:15 am
Title: Chapter 21 Common Ground

Can't wait to see if Hannah changes.

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Date: 08/08/11 02:11 am
Title: Chapter 16 Confrontation and Conflict

Val paternal grandmother is so disgusting just like her whore of a grandaughter tameka so glad that matheson showed her how much and why he loves her!!!!!!

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Date: 08/08/11 02:05 am
Title: Chapter 20 Calm Before the Storm

maybe Barnham will blow Hannah's back out. hee

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Date: 08/08/11 01:53 am
Title: Chapter 19 Frankly Speaking

Emily may be outrageous, but Hannah best listen to some very sound advice.

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Date: 08/08/11 01:40 am
Title: Chapter 18 Family Faceoff

DEAD. ROTFLMBO

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Date: 08/08/11 01:27 am
Title: Chapter 17 A Much Needed Vacation

Emily... Have Mercy!!! This was priceless.

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Date: 08/08/11 01:15 am
Title: Chapter 20 Calm Before the Storm

This is going to be good, Val is going to have to put that ole bitter *itch in her place.  You are such an awesome writer, I love how you write with humor.  Amazing!!!

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Date: 07/08/11 11:14 pm
Title: Chapter 20 Calm Before the Storm

Oh, oh first the bigoted neighbor and now nosey Hannah.  Can they get a break from all of the crazy people that have a say about them being an IR couple.  Who knows maybe Hannah will jump the bigoted neighbor and finally get her some.  Thanks

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Date: 07/08/11 11:00 pm
Title: Chapter 18 Family Faceoff

That was funny as hell!!!  Hannah is a trip!!

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Date: 07/08/11 10:56 pm
Title: Chapter 19 Frankly Speaking

LMAO oh my goodness...blow job in the hallway and her sister in law watching....damn...go Emily. Thanks

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Date: 07/08/11 10:46 pm
Title: Chapter 18 Family Faceoff

LMAO ph no Emily didn't call the man's wife and told her how to give him a blow job...LOL   Oh my goodness, this was to funny.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: 07/08/11 10:25 pm
Title: Chapter 17 A Much Needed Vacation

Emily is a too much.  MY goodness, I love how feisty she is.  The picture of aunt Hannah is a good one.  Thanks for the update...still LOL.

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Date: 07/08/11 10:12 pm
Title: Chapter 16 Confrontation and Conflict

I can't believe how spiteful her other grandmother is...I am glad that Matheson was there with Val to deal with the mean old biddy.  She should be a shamed of herself for being so ignorant.  Thanks

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Date: 07/08/11 08:37 pm
Title: Chapter 15 Ignorance and Attitude

Oh no, first Callie comes to his office talking mess.  Then Tamika the ho comes by what a hawt mess she is....silly cow. Now he has to deal with his paternal family memebers talking mess.  Oh man.  Thanks

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Date: 07/08/11 08:21 pm
Title: Chapter 14 With This Ring

Oh, oh...I can see trouble in paradise.  Thanks

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Date: 07/08/11 08:00 pm
Title: Chapter 13 Unexpected Vacation

Tameka is a hawt mess.  I hope Matheson tells her about her cousin before she sees the picture because that skank is up to no good.  I really hope that Matheson can destress and his swimmers get strong so that when the time is right he and Val can have some babies.  Thanks

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Date: 07/08/11 07:47 pm
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