whoo this chapter was great seeing val and matheson get serious about each other and their relationship was just awesome soo much passion and heat between them........
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/08/11 06:38 am
I don't like that ho Tameka!!! I think that Val should have whopped her @$$!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 06/08/11 06:20 am
so far i have both laughed and cried, please keep up the good work!!!
Reviewer: sandra Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/08/11 05:10 am
Color struck folk get on my ever loving nerves.
I am with Val I would not go see the woman either all she is interested in is that Val is/maybe dating a white man that has money.
Ugggh!
Thank you!
Happy writing!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 06/08/11 03:30 am
pitiful people in both val and matheson family i see!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 06/08/11 03:12 am
val and matheson chemistry is just to strong love it and what ea classless display of rascism his mother friend and daughter howed toward val by ignoring her uh!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 06/08/11 03:03 am
Great job!
Thank you!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 06/08/11 02:59 am
damn matheson mom tell us how you really feel about us black women damn this story kicks ass!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 06/08/11 02:55 am
love uh mattheson dad is so on the sterotype train along with the rest when he said jungle fever i just had to laugh i am loving this story!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 06/08/11 02:47 am
whoo i absolutly love this story wow val is a trip she is always on the defensive but hell if she dont wot a piece of matheson and vice verses even though they always end up at each other throats!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 06/08/11 02:39 am
I really, really like this story. I hope you post more of the chapters you have written, this is going to get really interesting. Opposites attract so the saying goes.
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: 06/08/11 01:28 am
Her relatives are a trip! Grandma wants a piece of somebody else's money. SMH She dogged that girl her entire life and now because she thinks her beau has money, she wants to be nice-she should be ashamed.
This chapter truck a nerve with me. Old folks don't understand that what they say to a young child could scar them for life.
It's funny how someone's words can have an effect on another person's life.
Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/08/11 12:31 am
Way to go Val. Open mouth insert foot.
Babygirl has insecurities about her looks and apparently is not use to kindness either.
Thank you for sharing.
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 11:51 pm
A lot was said in this chapter...it seems like everybody have their prejudices going on; hopefully their relationship won't have too many painful experiences.
I can't wait to read the rest.
Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 05/08/11 10:32 pm
"This may be a new day honey, but the old ways live on." This is so true...they will have lots of obstacles to overcome.
Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 10:12 pm
This next chapter will be very entertaining. Emiliy and George will each blow a gasket. That was great, I am so glad that Matheson and Val got to have a heart to heart conversation. Me likey!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 09:11 pm
Matheson got jungle fever...why is it called that? i need to watch the movie. LOL
Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 09:07 pm
Mavis knew about her own history and still worked for that family. It makes me wonder if Emily's devotion to Mavis is more about guilt than actual love? I am not like Emily or her husband right now. Grandma I understand!!
Author's Response:
There's more to this story than Mavis childhood memory. More to come soon!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 08:52 pm
White boy got a mouth on him...TAKE THAT VALYSIA!
THAT cake looks yummy!
Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 08:50 pm
I am loving it already but I have become quit fond of your stories.
Mat and Val are hott for each other already from jump...I wonder how Mat is going to handle that especially after inadvertly call babygirl ugly...then kissing her.
Great start....
Thank you for sharing...
Happy writing!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 08:48 pm
I love this story i remember reading it on FP and I love the story line...update soon
Reviewer: musicalywritten Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 07:08 pm
Lol...loving what I read so far.
That exchange in the music room was hilarious!
[Report This]Date: 05/08/11 02:30 pm
oh my gosh another wonderful new story whoo i am already hooked!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 02:18 pm
What a great start...let the sparks begin!!!!
So looking forward to the next update...hope it's soon.
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 02:10 pm