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Title: A Day at the Office

I love it!! Damn, I need to train my husband.

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/09/14 05:45 am
Title: A Day at the Office

I love it!!

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/09/14 05:44 am
Title: A Day at the Office

That was good, and the twist was well placed as was the red herrings in the story, didn't see it coming, nice little bite of the d/s light and erotic but not too much so.

 Reviewer: johnandvan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/13 03:07 am
Title: A Day at the Office

more soon

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/05/12 02:51 am
Title: A Day at the Office

I like the twist at the end.  An unexpected surprise.  

 Reviewer: FatJan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/02/12 01:51 am
Title: A Day at the Office

Awwwwwww

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/12/11 02:22 am
Title: A Day at the Office

This was a great short.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/12/11 01:08 pm
Title: A Day at the Office

LOVED IT!!

 Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/11 05:09 am
Title: A Day at the Office

LOVE IT!!!! You are one great writer!

 Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08/12/11 05:26 pm
Title: A Day at the Office

OMG!  *faints*  That was just too hot!!

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Date: 17/08/11 07:29 pm
Title: A Day at the Office

That was good! Nice twist!

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Date: 14/08/11 07:51 am
Title: A Day at the Office

excellent!

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Date: 14/08/11 07:02 am
Title: A Day at the Office

Score one for the marrieds! Well done -- and we won't speak of the hotness that is Fassy. Unf for days. 

 Reviewer: alices Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/08/11 10:31 pm
Title: A Day at the Office

I loved it! Twist and all! :D

Thank you!

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Date: 12/08/11 02:13 pm
Title: A Day at the Office

haha, loved the twist at the end! real nice one-shot, thank you!!!

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/11 10:52 am
Title: A Day at the Office

Loved it!! Cute story.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/08/11 05:12 am
Title: A Day at the Office

I adore this story. Love the twist at the end!

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Date: 11/08/11 09:21 pm
Title: A Day at the Office

OOh this was a truly unexpected surprise. When i first began to read this story i thought that it would be going a different way. But then when you switched it out on me it caused me to be a little suprised. However the twist was definitely well worth it. I truly enjoyed this story, so thank you.

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Date: 11/08/11 10:42 am
Title: A Day at the Office

I think if one's going to leave visuals of the characters, then they should not be ambiguous. Thanks for the lovely pic of April. For this alone I enjoyed this read!!.

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Date: 11/08/11 09:50 am
Title: A Day at the Office

I loved how the situaton turned out to be total opposite of what I thought it was gonna be. What a great and exciting way to keep the spark alive. I enjoyed this.

 Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/11 08:07 am
Title: A Day at the Office

i just had to comment to let u know how

much you did a wonderful job with this

quick one shot........I love that movie so

much...

 Reviewer: Jovana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/08/11 03:40 am
Title: A Day at the Office

I loved the Secertary and I definitely love your version of it..

 

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Date: 11/08/11 02:54 am
Title: A Day at the Office

"Or maybe I can shut you up and make you scream my name like a little bitch." - LMAO!!!!!

you and those lines, girlie!

i like these two. perhaps a series of one-shots? hm? hm? HM?!!!

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Date: 11/08/11 02:16 am
Title: A Day at the Office

Okay The Secretary was like so incredibly hot and was one of the very last films we got to seem all hot and gorgeous before whatever happened to him happened.

I own the DVD and it is in my top ten of all time. The ending scene with Lizzie West's Chariots Rise kept paying in my haad as soon as April put her hands on the desk and then you referenced the movie! 

Graat one shot!

 

 Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/11 01:18 am
Title: A Day at the Office

Totally loved the twist at d end, you are good :)!!!!!

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Date: 11/08/11 12:45 am
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