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Title: Chapter 7: Before the Rainbow You Must Go Through The Rain

That was bogus, how are they going to fire the woman and she lost her father and sister in a car crash?  She just got them a big account and they treat like a bald-headed step-child wtih bad teeth and a unibrow!!  What else was going at that job, did she piss off the wrong person?  When things die down maybe she sue for unlawful temination.  I hope so.  Aiden get yourself together your mom needs you!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/10/11 08:57 pm
Title: Ch. 6 Memories and Mirages

Great chapter

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Date: 10/10/11 05:54 am
Title: Chapter 5: It Seems Winter Has Come Early This Year...

Aiden is tough but she's gotta learn some things.

 Reviewer: Pen to Paper Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/09/11 03:37 am
Title: Chapter 5: It Seems Winter Has Come Early This Year...

Oh snap, not her daddy and Jayla?  That is so awful.  I hope her momma makes it, it would so sad for her to loose everyone.  That ho Shelly and that ahole Admiral were so wrong.  Then to act like they really cared about you, phony people deserve for bad things to happen to them.  This is so sad!!  I am looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the enthusiasm about the story. There's more to the Shelly -Admiral saga that meets the eye. I wonder how Aiden will process it in light of her growing relationship with Ash. But given the tragedy that is unfolding with her family, that may be the LEAST of her problems. I hope I don't disappoint with the rest.

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Date: 19/09/11 09:39 pm
Title: Chapter 4: The Pleasure of Business

boy....what are carmen and ashton up to...great chapter

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Date: 19/09/11 10:14 am
Title: Chapter 3: The Walls of Your Heart Hold Me Captive

love it

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Date: 19/09/11 10:07 am
Title: Chapter 2: We Can't All Be Perfect

I am really enjoying your story.  Keep up the good work

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Date: 19/09/11 09:57 am
Title: Chapter 1: Fanfare and Accolades

love it

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Date: 19/09/11 09:56 am
Title: Chapter 5: It Seems Winter Has Come Early This Year...

What!  What a cliff hanger....update soon please

 

great chapter



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I will.  I actually like how this is going.

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Date: 19/09/11 09:49 am
Title: Chapter 5: It Seems Winter Has Come Early This Year...

Love this story so far but Aiden is one tough cookie. Hope Ashton is sincere with his interest. Now her family is in crisis. Hope she can surviive this.

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Date: 19/09/11 07:55 am
Title: Chapter 3: The Walls of Your Heart Hold Me Captive

I feel so sorry for Aiden and what the two of them did to her. I love how people get so concerned after they were caught. The yweren't thinking about her when it happened so how the hell are they thinking about her afterwards?

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Date: 14/09/11 08:52 am
Title: Chapter 3: The Walls of Your Heart Hold Me Captive

Love it but I would have wanted to hear more from shelley and admiral explanation

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Date: 14/09/11 08:12 am
Title: Chapter 1: Fanfare and Accolades

Thanks everyone for commenting! I promise more is to come! Hopefully some cast pics!

 Reviewer: Pen to Paper Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 04:45 am
Title: Chapter 3: The Walls of Your Heart Hold Me Captive

Good story so far!

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Date: 14/09/11 04:31 am
Title: Chapter 3: The Walls of Your Heart Hold Me Captive

More!More!MORE!

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Date: 13/09/11 10:58 pm
Title: Chapter 2: We Can't All Be Perfect

curious about the story - look forward to more!

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Date: 04/09/11 10:44 am
Title: Chapter 2: We Can't All Be Perfect

hummmm.....cliff hanger sort of....hummm

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Date: 24/08/11 08:09 pm
Title: Chapter 2: We Can't All Be Perfect

Me likey!! More please.

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Date: 24/08/11 03:00 am
Title: Chapter 1: Fanfare and Accolades

great beginning

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Date: 23/08/11 11:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1: Fanfare and Accolades

Me likey!!!

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Date: 23/08/11 10:06 pm
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