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Title: Prologue

Hello Quania2004,

I'm really enjoying this story, you are a very talented writer. Do you think you might update soon?


Reviewer: les01 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 02:40 am

Title: Prologue

Okay, I read this last night. I think I remember this story from TST :) I love the pairing, Milo and JHud. I love the mother, I think you cast her as Whoopi before? LOL. Let me know if I'm wrong. I love how they are connected. What's so special about this book? I can't wait for Chris's character to find his true purpose here. Oh and I love the graphic...Milo with red eyes and JHud looking all futuristic and scary! I plan to keep up with this story, so update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much and you are right. Whoopi plays the role of Jennifer Hudson's mother.

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 07:29 pm

Title: Prologue

OH MY GOD! MILO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*printing this as well* Will review after lunch! 

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/08 07:43 pm

Title: Prologue

THis is a great story.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/08 04:46 am

Title: Chapter Three: February 10th, 2008; The First Attack

AWE DAMN! They're meant to kill each other! That sucks!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/08 06:51 am

Title: Chapter One: February 10th, 2008

I really liked the Charlene/Maxine reveal, that was nicely done. And Christopher as so much more to worry about than he knows, I feel sorry for him though. It seems like everyone around him insists on keeping him in the dark. Can't see how that was a good thing if he's in danger right now.

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/08 06:33 am

Title: Prologue

And I'm hooked. Great begining and that red glow eye thing at the end was hella creepy, I loved it!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/08 05:37 am

Title: Prologue

Quania, so glad you posted this story on the Chamber. I've been wanting to read it for a while.  I really like this prologue and how Williams' bedtime story is revealed to be his family's legacy.  Very nice setup for the story to come.  And you know I love the vid, but I'll say it again, you did a great job with that one. 

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/08 07:30 am

Title: Prologue


Author's Response: Thank You

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/08 04:57 am

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